SS: The Suhaag Raat of Broken Dreams (An apology and a new start p.43)

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Just read the whole story in one go, really liked that gayatri held her stand and now the jealous King.

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Just finished reading all the parts and must say this is brilliant 👏 I just loved the whole concept. Your version of jealous Rana ji is so adorable,and i love this khatti meethi Rani Gaytri devi. If only we get to see all this on our screens. But its a pleasure reading all this.

Thank you so much for this,anxiously waiting for the update.😃

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I am sorry to all my loyal readers. I have not been keeping well. But a very high drama part is coming soon!

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Part 9: Do leave your thoughts behind

Indravardhan only heard crickets. Yes, it was late enough to hear crickets and Rani Gayatri Devi had still not deigned to come back from her outing with her Zora. Ranaji did not want to draw attention to her absence by asking Raj Mata and Badi Rani Ma. BRM would undoubtedly fuel that fire and create a humilitating fuss for Zorawar's family and his own.

Inside however, Indravardhan felt an anxiety of epic proportions. One the one hand, he was in no position to tell her anything - having no claim on a wife her so explicitly rejected. On the other, he felt a rage that urged him to threaten her for her unacceptable behavior. How she flit around with another after dark when everyone knew she was HIS wife? Who asked her to go recruit female college students without consulting him first? People in Amerkoot would not know her little mission, would they? They would only see his rani out with the profesor. His honor was at stake. But she had made it clear that she would not take the responsibility, she was no more his wife than Arunudoy she had said.

There was giggling in the hallway. Ranaji's ears perked up. Yes, definitely female giggling, like a woman after a fun day out. Like Gayatri enjoying her time with Zora. A deep voice accompanied her, indulgent laughs followed.

Indravardhan stopped himself at his bedroom door. No, he will not give her the pleasure of thinking her had waited for her. That will not do. He wanted to see what else would happend. Putting his ear on the door, he listened.

Their voices carried as far as the next suite - his rani's suite. Then stopped.

No.

The suite's double doors closed with a click.

Silence.

No, no, no!

She couldn't do that to him. Could she? No, she wouldn't, even if the satisfaction of hurting him was the object. She had too much integrity to sleep with another man in the very same house. In the very next suite!? No.

Indravardhan shook his head. But...he did not hear Zora's footsteps going down the hall further to find that guest suite. Did that mean...?

Not thinking straight, he burst in to Rani Gayatri's room through the internal door without a second thought.

She shrieked.

In blind rage, he looked at her bed, empty. He saw her then, in all her lush glory, by the bed, pulling a gossamer cloak over her.

Gayatri pulled the only fabric close to her chest in a valiant attempt to hide her naked body.

Gayatri: I am changing! Get out!

Indravardhan, angrily looked around the room. Scanning madly for a man. The view of his beautiful wife only made his blood boil more at thought of Zora seeing her like this...

Indravardhan walked in and looked under her bad, in her armoire, her bathroom and dressing room, before a bottle of perfume hit him in the head and smashed on the floor.

The room filled with the pungent, but sweet scent of vanilla, calming him down a little.

Gayatri: He's not here, you lunatic!

Ranaji was seeing tiny stars in his vision, he said angrily: I didn't hear him leave either.

Gayatri: How DARE you!? How dare you reach such a conclusion!? What were you doing, listening at the door!!!!!!!!?

Indravardhan went red: Of course not.

He scanned her up and down. In her indignant rage, she had not noticed that the fabric she held with that little death grip was completely sheer. It make him go warm in places he dared not think of remembering.

Gayatri: Leave this instance!

Indravadhan: Not before you tell me why you were out so late.

Gayatri: You already know where I went and I don't have to give you any more answers after what you just did!

Indravardhan wanted to take a grip of her and shake the answers out, but he dared not go close when she stood before him like a goddess. He didn't know if he could trust himself not to make another mistake tonight.

Gayatri waited for him to leave.

He slowly walked over to the internal door, relieved that he had been wrong about Zora being in her room - even if the cost of that truth was a swollen bump on his head. Before closing the door behind him, a mischievious idea made him peak back in.

Indravardhan smirked: I am sorry I interrupted your changing, rani. Did you know that your little cloak is see-through.

Gayatri went pale, looked down and became bright red all over. A beautiful vision, thought Indravardhan.

He shut the door just in time to avoid another flying bottle of perfume.

The next morning...

Ranaji woke up this morning feeling distinctly happier. She was still his. And he would keep it this way.

He has a spring in his step as he went to the bathroom and got ready with the help his attendant.

Ranaji: Coffee in the garden this morning, Arunudoy. And where is Rani Gayatri Devi this fine morning?

The swish of a menacing whip ended with a yelp in the hallway. Someone screamed.

Indravardhan did not wait to find out the source of the news. The answer was always the same. He ran out of his suite and bolted toward the source of the hunter.

Kokila chachi: Nehiii! Mere bete ko chor dijiye! Uskne kya kiya hai...?

Indravardhan came in to see the shocking sight of a bloodied and haunted face of his Rani Bhabi, jumping up and down, gleefully, in a ragged sari by the staircase as as Rani Gayatri Devi whipped Chotte Kuwarji down the staircase with a hunter. His parents were at the end of stairs awaiting their hurtling son who was making quick tumbles down toward them.

Gayatri: Well, how is it then, Devarji? Up to your standards!?

Indravardhan watched in shock and Raj Mata and BRM also came rushing in from outside. They looked up in shock at the sight. The only one who was not shocked was Zora. He looked on from the balcony at Indravardhan's level with hooded eyes and he sipped his coffee.

BRM: What is the meaning of this!? Rani Gayatri Devi, stop this at once!!!

Gayatri, in a even voice even though the leather hunter cost significant strength: I am just testing Devarji's hunter for him, Badi Rani Ma. (She stopped laboredly and delivered another sharp hit). Guess my surprise when I went (smack) to the store room (swish) to find Rani Bhabi there after (swish) three days. Tor-tured to (hit) deprivation. And then came sweet (smack) Devarji (hunter landed again). He expressed wanted to test his new whip, he said. So I am helping (the whip landed again on his backside) him out.

Kuwar Chacha intervened as his son landed on his feet.

Gayatri innocently: Did you want to test it too, Kuwar Chacha? I am sure...you had nothing to do with Princess Swarnalekha's torture?

Kawar Chacha stepped back: Of course, I had nothing to do with it. What an atrocity!

Gayatri smiled primly: That's what I thought.

Zorawar's snort reached Ranaji's ears. When he looked, the man was smiling a knowing smile. Zora shared a glance with Ranaji as smiled into his coffee. That knowing glance. That clear idea that this man knew his wife better than him and knew that she had to be respected.

Kokila ran to BRM: Tell her to stop whipping my boy, BRM! Tell her! That two pence of a woman want to be a good bahu to you and look at how she is repaying your kindness.

BRM glared at her: Did you son do this? Trap and torture his OWN WIFE!? A rajputani princess!?

Kokila stepped back, intimidated.

BRM: Did he!?

Rani Bhabi anwered from upstairs: Yes, he did! He cut me and tortured me! Mariye Raniji, aur mariye!

Gayatri whipped him out the main door as the servants gave them wide berth.

Raj Mata stepped up and looked to take care of Rani Bhabi's state.

Kuwar Chacha spotted him at last: Ranaji! Ranaji! Don't let your wife kick my son out of this palace.

Indravardhan finally spoke up in a booming voice: Unless you want to join him, you will remain quiet!

Kokila burst in to tears, but gained no one's sympathy.

BRM: Shut up, Kokila! We have no need for a coward grandson who raises his hand on his own wife. I am with Rani Gayatri Devi on this. What she is doing is right, even if she is no Rajputani, she has behaved as one today.

Ranaji rushed toward his little sister and supported her as she slumped: God, how could we let this happen... Are you okay, Rani Bhabi?

Rani Bhabi: Only Swarna now, Ranaji. Only Swarna.

Raj Mata: Thank God for Gayatri.

Indravardhan looked in her direction now with great admiration. Gayatri came in looking sweaty and tired, but triumphant. She handed over the whip to a waiting servant and came up the stairs to help.

Don't forget to leave your thoughts.

Edited by Marybarton - 10 years ago

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--Sumi--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#218

Loved it

Can you please PM me this story

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abba12

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Rana g thought zora is in her room lolzzz and got hit by a perfume bottle .. Gayatri is really hyper 😆 ..

It cost a bump in his head 😆 ..

And little girly stuff as of gayatri blushing added the charm ..

Zora creating spark without even doing anything .. :-p ..

And then she literally attacked laksh .. Lolzz and still zora was calm along with gayu leaving rana g wonder :-p ..

The way u characterized zora drinking his coffee without being affected , and was smiling is just too good .. M loving his character ..

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Posted: 10 years ago

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amazing update ranaji's thinking gone too far atlast he was glad that nothing happened liked the way gayatri was beating laks even BRM was in her side ranaji was so impressed really want same in the show nice part thnx 4 update

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