SS: The Suhaag Raat of Broken Dreams (An apology and a new start p.43)

JazzyM

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Super super update...

The green eyed devil has taken residence in RNJ's heart...Such a wonderful feeling for the readers to read that RNJ is jealous... wonderful writing... Mostly loved Gayatri's attitude...she is in full mode with her recruitment, an achievement that period of time...she is also showing attitude...wow! wonderful storyline...

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Mina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#202

Zora's diplomacy is interesting. I suspect he does not enjoy/approve of being used by Gayatri in this way. But he's not on Ranaji's side either. Will be eager to see how things fall out. More please! :)

Edited by -mina- - 9 years ago

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JazzyM

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: -mina-
Zora's diplomacy is interesting. I suspect he does not enjoy/approve of being used by Gayatri in this way. But it's not on Ranaji's side either. Will be eager to see how things fall out. More please! :)

Hi dear...welcome to the forum...Has been ages since KKB...

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Mina

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: JazzyM

Hi dear...welcome to the forum...Has been ages since KKB...

HIII <3

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Haya1022bmw

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Posted: 9 years ago

#205

loving this story more and more
rani ji ki jay...aur tarpo rana ji

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 9 years ago

#206

superb part

loved it

loll Rana ji is too jealous.. n try to defend his action

GOSH he is too cute indeed...

Gayatri not giving him time loll n Rana ji is envying ...

Rana ji accept u r in love with Gayatri

continue soon

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rosalineak

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Posted: 9 years ago

#207

Amzing update...

Jealous king and his thoughts r funny...

Loving the rebellious queen...

Zora character is good"...

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Suhasinni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#208

Absolutely loved this part. Perhaps we could see Zora's love towards Gayatri and even her response to him as she is in love with Ranaji. I would love to see Ranaji seething with anger and jealousy over Zora. A confrontation of sharing stories between ranaji and gayatri would be fun too. Perhaps being more intrusive about her fiance dying. Just some suggestions, but love what you have written and the humor is spot on. I always look forward to your posts.

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vaishnavi77

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Posted: 9 years ago

#209

This was one awesome entertaining part! too good😆

The things behind which ranaji goes jealous..esp the aanchal part..too hilarious.😆*making me laugh even now*

Please continue writing more and more. As always great to read.

U are also bringing some great issues like admission to girls in the Ameerkot university👍🏼. Loved the concept😊.

Waiting to see how the story goes further. kudos⭐️

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