TwiNj FF: Khamoshiyaan Chapter 2 Update - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow Abhiya 😊 w8ng 4 d update 😃😳
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Originally posted by: asmaanixx

Lovely update! I absolutely love how you have written out Pinni. Her style of talking is exactly the same as in the show. Really well done! 👏 Looking forward to Leela and Twinkle's talk in regards to the marriage. :)

thanks dear😊
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Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

Awesome..
Pinni mami
Wah wah

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow this is so fantastic! So great I cant tell you in words how much I loved this. Your style of writing is so goood so so great actually.please do update as soon as you can. I will be waiting
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Originally posted by: Iansomer1

i love how u have kept close to the characters of the show and yet there is a freshness to the story. cant wait to see what comes next and how kunj makes an entry in her life. continue soon

thanks dear.
I am thinking of a dhamkedaar entry but maybe can't grt the thoughts right.
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Originally posted by: KhushiLovesZaya

Wow this is so fantastic! So great I cant tell you in words how much I loved this. Your style of writing is so goood so so great actually.please do update as soon as you can. I will be waiting

thanks a lot dear😊
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Originally posted by: Abhia2Twinj4eva

Wow Abhiya 😊 w8ng 4 d update 😃😳

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Chapter 2

Twinkle puttar tu is tarah bhag kar upar kyu aa gayi?' Leela now came to talk to her daughter about the marriage she had in her mind for Twinkle.

Twinkle starts to write in her note pad to explain her maa that she doesn't want to get married. How much she wants to tell her the real reason she can't it would break her maa's heart so she now has to come up with an excuse to avoid this marriage Maa mujhe yeh shadi nahi karni?' Par kyu? Kyu nahi karni yeh shadi?' Leela was becoming more worried as the dreams she just now saw for her lovely daughter were on the verge of breaking.

Maa koi bhi ladka mujhe kyu pasand karega woh mujhse paison ke liye shadi karega aur main nahi chahti ki mera hone wala pati mujhse pyar na kare.' The words Twinkle said to her maa were so true Twinkle thought even if she didn't loved her Yuvi toh bhi she can't marry without love or where she is just ATM machine to her husband. And a middle class boy who agrees to marry her the only thing he could want out of her would be money and not love. She thought that this would definitely lead maa to think of not seeing the guy she chose for me.

Yeh kya paise paise laga rakha hai? Sara Amritsar jaanta hai ki Tanejas ki tu iklauti waaris hai toh teri shadi toh is sach ke sath hi hogi chahe tu kuchh bhi bol le. Aur Twinkle tujhe kabhi bhi yeh sochne ki zarurat nahi ki tu bol nahi sakti ya tujh mein koi bhi kami hai. Taaki kisi ko bhi is kami ka ehsaas na ho isiliye toh maine tujhe kabhi sign language nahi sikhne di. Tu ek bahut hi pyaari bachchi hai Tera dil bahut saaf hai. Aur pyaar toh dil se kiya jata hai aur tujhse zyada pyaar pane ke layak kaun ho sakta hai. Tujhe bahut sara pyaar milega Twinkle kyuki tera dil bahut saaf hai tu pyaar ki chinta bilkul mat kar. Woh ladka kya koi bhi tujhe pyaar karne se khud ko rok nahi sakta. Tujhe mujhpe bharosa hai toh tu yeh kaise bol sakti hai ki woh ladka tujhse pyaar nahi karega. Ek baar usse mil le phir faisala karna. Aur vaise bhi humare yahan toh shadi ke baad hi pyar hota hai. Jaise tere nanagi aur nanigi. Main aur tere papa. Ek baar tu ladke se milegi. Bas ab isse aage mujhe aur koi behas nahi karni. Achhe se tyar hoke unke aane pe niche aa jana.' Leela after trying to reason her daughter had left from there with the hopes that her daughter will now accept her request.

Twikle was now left all alone in her thoughts. She could neither break her mom's heart nor Yuvi's. She had to come up with some plan to bring her maa and her love together. Ab main maa ko kaise samjhaun ki main sirf Yuvraj se pyaar karti hu aur kisi aur se nahi. Luthras ka naam sunte hi maa gusse se ubal jaati hai. Ab main is shadi ke liye kaise mana karungi. Aur Yuvraj usse kya batungi woh toh pata nahi kya kar dega. Yeh sab sunte hi. Aur is baar toh rishta reject karna bahut mushkil lag raha hai kyuki is baar maa bahut confident hai uss ladke ko lekar. Pehle hi kam problems thi jo ab is Kunj Sarna naam ki ek nayi problem aa gayi. Babaji please meri help karo. Koi raasta dikhao. Pehle I think mujhe Yuvraj ko milne ke liye msg karna chahiye.'

Twinkle: Yuvi kaha ho tum? Mujhe tumse bahut zaruri milna hai.

Yuvi: Ofcourse babes. Mujhe pata hai tum zyada der apne Yuvi ke bina nai reh sakti.

Twinkle: Yuvi please mazaak nai. It's important.

Yuvi: Ohk sorry Twinkle. Ek ghante baad main tumse wahi milta hu jahaan hum roz milte hai.

Twinkle: Ok

Ab maa se kya keh ke jaungi? Haan ek idea. I am sorry Yuvi mujhe yeh jhuth bolna padega. Nahi toh maa mujhe kabhi ghar se nikalne nahi dengi. Twinkle had come up with a plan to sneak out from her house.

Downstairs

Maa maine aapki baat ko socha aur main ladke se milne ko tyar hun. But mujhe tyar hone ke liye beauty parlor jana hai. Please maa' Twinkle acted like an all excited bride to convince her mother about her lie. Haan puttar ja par akeli nahi. Ik kaam kar Bubbly nu naal le ja. Pinny Bubbly kithe hai use Twinkle ke sath parlor bhejna hai.' Leela was not ready to send her daughter alone because she just didn't wanted anything to go wrong this time. Didi ji Bubbly toh apni friends ke sath hai. Main ek kaam karti hu use call kar deti hu who direct hi pahunch jayegi. Twinkle tu gaadi leke chali ja.' Twinkle took a sigh of relief when her mami informed that her cousin was not at home. This meant that she had some time to meet Yuvi.

Twinkle in Car

Mujhe jaldi Yuvi se milna hoga taaki main jaldi se parlor pahunch jayun isse pehle ki maa ko shak ho jaye. Mujhe yeh short cut lena chahiye. Lekin yeh rastaa toh humesh sunsaan rehta hai. Par koi baat nahi. Is waqt mera jald se jald Yuvi ke paas pahunchna bahut zaruri hai taaki hum figure out kar sakein ki aage kya karna hai.' Twinkle had only thing in her mind to reach Yuvi as fast as she could.

Iss car ko kya huya ise bhi abhi hi band hona tha is sunsaan raste pe. Yahaan toh dur dur tak koi nahi dikh raha. Ek baar car ka bumper kholke dekhu kya problem hai. Isme toh kuchh samjh nahi aa raha. Ek kaam karti hun Yuvi ko msg karke apni location ka bata deti hun.'Twinkle was all worried now. Time was playing some tricks with her to make her all late. Usne abhi tak msg nahi dekha. Shayad raste mein hoga. Kuch ladke wahan se aa rahe hai main unse help mangu. Par help mangugi bhi kaise mera pen aur note pad jaldi jaldi ke kaaran ghar par hi reh gaya.' Twinkle thought in her mind after seeing two men approach towards her.

Waah kya cheez hai. Dekh bhai akeli khadi hai.' One of the two men spoke to his partner with lust in his eyes. Tu cheez badi hai mast mast. Tu cheez badi hai mast.' The other men sang a bollywood number in his dizzy voice with the same lust in his eyes. Babaji please meri in gundon se bacha lena' Twinkle was now every moment praying to her Babaji in her mind to save her honour and respect and started runnig from there.

Dekh bhai woh ladki bhag rahi hai. Pakad usey.' That were the words Twinkle could hear even after coming to a little distance from them.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks for the likes
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update loved leela as a mom trying toget her to agree and live her life. i am assuming next update apna hero kunj enter hoga?
those vile men must die.
excited please give more frequent updates cant wait to read next.

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