Manan SS.... Pyaar ka imtehan Part 30 on pg 136 updated .. 1st Nov - Page 33

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: arshuaar

amazing...
read all parts in one go...
thank you for the wonderful story...



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Posted: 9 years ago
Aleena !!!
sooo sorry !!!
mere na...fone mein problem tha...so comments na post nai hore the...fir baad mein bhool gayi...
aaj update padhte waqt yaad aaya ki woh update 13 ko I din comment only...
sooo sorry..
soo soo sorry !!

btw i loved the updates..both of them...
first and foremost fab5 reunited and mingled well !!
sooo sentimental every moment was !!
aur na...i loved to see cavya moments !! as in loved to read cavya moments !!
u knw wen i read the story..i actually visualize all that :) :)
aur bessst was wen cabir told manik that his gf nandu is a pro in handling babies...manan wont have problems in future :P :) :) :) loved that very much...sooo awww it was
nandu handling abeer was shhooo cute !!

aur manik accepting navya and arranging a room for abeer..fully furnished...soo happy..
sach mein i felt sentimental uss waqt bhi...

aur thank God now Mr. Malhotra is handling everything !!
all will be safe now...hai na ???

thank u Alooo :) :) :) :) :) :)
for such timely and beautiful updates !!
sorry ki last update ko comment karna reh gaya :( :( :( fone issues :( and later i forgot :( :(


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: divtan

Aleena !!!
sooo sorry !!!
mere na...fone mein problem tha...so comments na post nai hore the...fir baad mein bhool gayi...
aaj update padhte waqt yaad aaya ki woh update 13 ko I din comment only...
sooo sorry..
soo soo sorry !!

btw i loved the updates..both of them...
first and foremost fab5 reunited and mingled well !!
sooo sentimental every moment was !!
aur na...i loved to see cavya moments !! as in loved to read cavya moments !!
u knw wen i read the story..i actually visualize all that :) :)
aur bessst was wen cabir told manik that his gf nandu is a pro in handling babies...manan wont have problems in future :P :) :) :) loved that very much...sooo awww it was
nandu handling abeer was shhooo cute !!

aur manik accepting navya and arranging a room for abeer..fully furnished...soo happy..
sach mein i felt sentimental uss waqt bhi...

aur thank God now Mr. Malhotra is handling everything !!
all will be safe now...hai na ???

thank u Alooo :) :) :) :) :) :)
for such timely and beautiful updates !!
sorry ki last update ko comment karna reh gaya :( :( :( fone issues :( and later i forgot :( :(




no problem dear
U r back with your comments yehi kafi hai.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago




Update time


1st of all Thank you for your comments and likes and now Welcome to all new readers.
Haan g to kahan the hum... haan yaad aya update dena hai ajj ka so here we go.



Sorry in advance in case of error or mistake



Here Nandini and Aryaman On their way back to Nandini's Home

Aryaman: So r u Happy Now?

Nandini in excitement: Very very very Happy.

Aryaman while driving with a small smile: hmmm ! wo to dikh raha hai.But Nandini tumhe nahi lagta k tumhe hamein Harshad aur Nyonika ki os raat ki conversation k bare me pahle hi bata dena chaheye tha. Aur kisi ko na sahi tum mujhe to atleast bata sakti thi na ya itna bhi trust nahi hai apney iss friend pe.

Nandini saw towards Aryamaan and said : Aryamaan you know na k aisa nahi hai. Manik k jane k baad aik tum to the jis ne har time, har situation mein mera sath diya, Mujhe har mushkil se bachane ki koshish ki. U know agar tumhare jaise friend ka sath nahi hota to main kabhi bhi Fab 5 k liye wo sub kuch na kar pati jo main ne kiya.

I know k mujhe atleast tumhe to bata dena chaheye tha but Os time I don't know kaise but main ne apna control kho diya tha khud se.You know os din jab main ne Nyonika aur Harshad ki batein suni ...after that ... Mujhe kuch samajh nahi a raha tha k main kya karon...Mera Manik meri wajha se Mujh se doore ho gya.At that time main ne socha k Kash os time wo Car Manik mujhe lene k liye hi bhej deta to yeh sub nahi hota na. (tears fall from her eyes) ... But phir Hamesha ki tarhan Manik ne mujhe sahi rasta dekhaya... You Know os ne mujhe kaha tha k " Zindagi mein kuch bhi ho jae ... kaisi bhi situations ayen hum dono HAMESHA aik sath un ka samna Karen ge".

Aur dekho mera Manik Iss Situation mein bhi mera sath dene k liye wapis a gya .

Aryaman smile on this and said: Ose to ana hi tha akhir wo kya old song tha ( and start thinking)

Haan Yaad aya and he started singing with a teasing smile.

Jo Wada Kiya wo Nibhana pare ga.

Roke Zamana Chahe, Roke Khudai

Tum ko Ana pare ga.

Nandini s mouth open for a sec on this teasing and then she slapped on Aryaman's shoulder and said : Shut up haan ! aisa kuch nahi hai ... and then she turned her face on window side and started smiling and on seeing this Aryamaan started Laughing.

Aryaman parked his car in front of Nandini's House and then Nandini said : Thank you Aryamaan

Aryamaan : Thank you for what?

Nandini: Thank you for everything . Jo kuch bhi tum ne mere liye kiya.

Aryamaan : with teasing smile ! Thank you Matlab Ab Manik a gya to mera patta saaf.

Nandini again slapped on his shoulder and said: Shut up haan

Aryamaan: Ok ! main to Shut up ho jata hoon but please yeh apna Thanks apney pass rakho kyok main ne jo kiya apni friend k liye kiya aur agey bhi aisa karta rahoon ga.

Nandini on listensing this gave a smile to him and then hugged him and said: I know ... And u know " U r one of my BFF".

Aryamaan also gave a friendly hug to nandini and said: Ya wo to mujhe pata hai.

They broke this friendly hug and aryamaan said : Ok main ab nikalta hoon .Kal milte haan college mein.

Nandini: Ok Good Night aryamaan and take care.

Aryamaan: Good Night to u too

And he left from there.

Next Day

In Old Malhotra Mansion

Nyonika Before leaving for Space Academy used Hair Drayer and Guess What

Her face was full of black color.She started shouting after looking her face in mirror.

( Sorry guys for this edit but situation ki demand hai )

She Called her servant and asked: Kis ne kiya yeh sub ... ! bolo ! kis ki himaat hoe yeh sub karne ki.

Servant lowered his head and said: I don't know Mam.Main ne yeh nahi kiya.

Nyonika in her loud voice: Just Shut your mouth and Get Out from here.

She again went towards washroom and clean her face .After that she left for Space Academy but luck was not with her today . After some time Tyre of her Car got punctured and Driver applied brakes.

She again in an irritated Voice: Now What! Y u stopped the Car.

Driver: Mam ! Mere khyal mein Gari ka tyre puncture ho gya hai.

Nyonika: AHHH ! Not again

She called for another car and reached in Space Academy.

When she entered in Academy from some where Muddy Water fall on her. She was now drenched in that Muddy water and the students around there started laughing .

Nyonika in angry Voice: Who Did this? I asked Who did this ? I will not spare him for this.

All student leaves from there when she said that.

Nyonika moved towards her Cabin and In her cabin she cleaned herself and changed in new dress.

After sometime she heard a knock on her cabin and peon came and said:Mam! Wo Board of trustees ki taraf se koi person aya hai . kah raha hai app se milna hai.

Nyonika: Naam bataya kya hai?

Peon: No Mam ! Kah rahe haan k app se milen gey to app ko pata chal jae ga.

Nyonika thought for some time and said: Ok Send him in.

Peon: Ok Mam

After sometime she again heard a knock and she gave permission to that person.

That person entered in Her Cabin and said: Hi Mrs Malhotra! Actually Board of Trustees ne mujhe yahan bheja hai app ko batane k liye k ajj se balke abhi se app ko yeh seat khali karna ho gi ?

Nyonika: What ? How can u even say this... R U out of your Mind.

Person : No Mam but mujhe Orders mile haan yeh office khali karwane k so plz zara jaldi kejiye.

Nyonika: No way! Board Aisa kaise decide kar sakta hai.

Person: Mam ! Board ne with mutual consent decide kiya hai k ab Space Academy mein Principal and representative of Board of trustee 1 hi person ho ga.

Nyonika hold her head in her hand : What ? How could they decide something like this...No way! Mujhe pahle Mr Malhotra se baat karni ho gi.

Person: Mam app ne jis se bhi baat karni hai jaldi Karen kyok ajj mujhe yeh office khali chaheye.

Nyonika's Condition was like What to do now.

She tried to call all her sources but Alas! No one is answering her call on this time.

Now that person received a call and said: No sir

Mam abhi yahan hi haan.

Ok sir. App aa jaeiye.

After this call that person left from there.

Nyonika with confused expression: Now what is this? What will I do now... Yeh Board Members aisa kaise kar sakte haan. She again try to call Mr Malhotra but No reply from other side.

Nyonika was frustrated now on all this situation: AHHH yeh sub kya ho raha hai. Yahan subha se kuch bhi thek nahi ho raha mere sath aur Wo Harshad os ka kal se koi pata nahi.

Nyonika's POV

O God ! Mujhe jald hi kuch karna pare ga. Nahi to sub kuch mere hath se nikal jae ga... No... No... No main aisa nahi hone de sakti. Mujhe Mr Malhotra se baat karni hai but kaise wo phone bhi nahi pick kar rahe ... Yah ... Un k office Try karti hoon.

She tried to call in Malhotra Industries Dehli but same result No response from that side.

She was now thinking how to handle this situation when she heard the msg tune of her phone and she received a MMS of her morning incident in which her black face is prominent. And after that Video a msg was also written at the end

Bach k rehna re baba

Bach k rehna re

Bach k rehna re baba

Tujh pe nazar hai.

Nyonika: What Non sense is this? Kon hai yeh ?

At same Time she heard another Knock on her cabin

And when the person who knocked entered in her Cabin she got a biggest shock of that Day.


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Edited by cute-aly - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely. thanks for pm.
Edited by unishaz - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute-aly



no problem dear
U r back with your comments yehi kafi hai.



Arre.. I dnt comment for all stories...only some stories which I like :) :)
I love ur story :) :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cute-aly



no problem dear
U r back with your comments yehi kafi hai.



Aftr I don't comment at all stories..only few which I like
And I love ur story :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved aryaman and nandini scenes...you showed true friendship between them...👏😃
Nyonika ke saath jobhi hua it must some prank of again our FAB5...
I guess the person will be Mr.malhotra or Manik...
Want some manan scenes please...😭
Update faster...
Thank you...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Manik ???
Was it manik ??? Hai na ?? It was manik na ??
Dam the cliff hanger !!
Kya yaar Aloo..neend kaise aayegi raat mein !!

And wait..I was simply stalking ur story since I love it..and since u rpl to all my comments so sweetly aur Maine msg type kiya to ur rpl aur update mil gaya !!
Wooowwwieee...
Happy Happyyy !!
Surprise it was ! :) :) :) :)

and i loved the friendly aryaman and nandu talk !!

But baaki overall update was loads of funnn...
Hahahahahahahahaha..
Nyonika has been totally troubled...
I jus loved all revenge taken at Nyonika...
And the song...Bach ke rehna re baba !!
Hahahahahaahahahaahahaha...

Full enjoyment !
Thanks Aleena !! :)
Massst it wasss ! I am beaming !!
Edited by divtan - 9 years ago

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