50Th episode special Poem on The hair stuck scene of ViDha. - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: kashish_777

Jenny, as usual you just made my day...

it was a fab description of viplab's fantasies...👏👏👏
The way he feels grateful to the ebony shade of her hair is the best part...i just loved it...
This is exactly what a half century poem should be...
Great job girl...😳😳
Love,
Pratiti

Thank u soo much Pratiti dear and I must say ur OS was the best gift for the 50th episode,Ijust loved it to the core dear😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
So our poetess is back with a bang. That scene was beautiful, it was wordless but you gave words to viplav's feelings. Not just words but fabulous words. You look at a scene so deeply that it amazes me.
Thanks for this wonderful gift. Loved it.
One more question how much time does it take you to write such lovely poems?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: stranger2rose

So our poetess is back with a bang. That scene was beautiful, it was wordless but you gave words to viplav's feelings. Not just words but fabulous words. You look at a scene so deeply that it amazes me.
Thanks for this wonderful gift. Loved it.
One more question how much time does it take you to write such lovely poems?

Ohh thank u so much Rosey dear and while watching the scene itself I used to put in a lot of words to it in my mind becz I have that habit from my classes ,analysing scenes in a movie or a poem is the major part of my study and I do put random thoughts while writing a poem after selecting the topic to be written.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Was just waiting for a poem on this scene from you 😳
Omg again the magic your words have
Wow from the top to bottom loved each lines 😳
Thee lines were just too awesome 😛

I to love u more,because u have made me feel her presence so near,that is a plenty of ur gracious thoughts,
I am no more regreting to tell who is my first flirt,
I t is the hair of my Dhani ,who is my everlasting loveable flirt,
If I have to thank someone with my whole heart in this life of mine,
It is to the personified hair the ebony of my Dhani,who is always mine.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Guruvishva

Was just waiting for a poem on this scene from you 😳

Omg again the magic your words have
Wow from the top to bottom loved each lines 😳
Thee lines were just too awesome 😛

I to love u more,because u have made me feel her presence so near,that is a plenty of ur gracious thoughts,
I am no more regreting to tell who is my first flirt,
I t is the hair of my Dhani ,who is my everlasting loveable flirt,
If I have to thank someone with my whole heart in this life of mine,
It is to the personified hair the ebony of my Dhani,who is always mine.

ohh thanks u soo much Sweety dear ur words are as sweet as u my dear girl🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Nikkisha

Super dear... 👏👏

Thanks a lot priyanka dr😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
sorry jenny m late 😳
but as promised, m slowly coming to all ur magical pieces...😃

fabulous one dear 👏''

Originally posted by: rerose

HER HAIR,LOVES MY FLIRT.
Love is unique,as always,
But it is not less in any circumstances in any means as always,

aah loved this second line 😃

Says the black ebony wood shaped texture,
What?? What??,U people can ask me ,Is this texture??

sorry can u explain it plz😳

Then Viplav Tripathi will clear ur chaotical gesture,
This wood is a blend of silk,which makes cute gestures,

blend of silk 👏...what a metaphor 👏

When it is at my shirt's button,pinfolded together,
It is stuck but it gives the testimony of our life's together,
Can this ebony wood speak?Does it have a mouth?

oh wow this feels mesmerizing

Ya,it does ,it has a heart which is a pure treasure more worthy than a converse applicable mouth,

bang on for this 👏..best line from this one..

This ebony wood's beholder,
I s my heart's beholder,
But this ebony attempts to clear the loop holes of our love story,
It has prejudiced to create a new story of pure revolutionary love of a meaningful safed story,

take a bow on this 👏..how beautifully u wrote the base, the real essence of their future love story 👏..clear the loop holes..wow..

Can it's power become my defence,
If it can, so then, there is no offence,

perfect...he is surely her shield and with a protection and his support she need nothing else to gather the courage to move for herself...👏

It made me and her join in the same wavelength,
By tying us together in our eyes wonderful observable length,
I can hear this ebony,getting coy,
It loves me as cosy as it can do,that makes it shows it's lovely coy,
I am thankful to this ebony for making me get submerged in her,
And it was in her but,it gave me it's nods to get close to her,
U are my partner,my ebony,u love me a lot,
I to love u more,because u have made me feel her presence so near,that is a plenty of ur gracious thoughts,
I am no more regreting to tell who is my first flirt,
I t is the hair of my Dhani ,who is my everlasting loveable flirt,
If I have to thank someone with my whole heart in this life of mine,
It is to the personified hair the ebony of my Dhani,who is always mine.


beautiful lines jenny 👏



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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
jenny while reading your poem ..i was mesmerizing that beautiful scene you always left me speechless😆 these lines😳

Ya,it does ,it has a heart which is a pure treasure more worthy than a converse applicable mouth,
Edited by rukiaa - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: ..Roopal..

sorry jenny m late 😳

but as promised, m slowly coming to all ur magical pieces...😃

fabulous one dear 👏''

My dr Roopal thanks a lot for the awesome comments 😳😃 ,I am soo happy that u liked it but pls don't ever try to apologise,I can't accept sorries from my besties ,only love...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: rukiaa

jenny while reading your poem ..i was mesmerizing that beautiful scene you always left me speechless😆 these lines😳

Ya,it does ,it has a heart which is a pure treasure more worthy than a converse applicable mouth,

Thank u rukiaa dear for ur wonderful comments😳😳

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