50Th episode special Poem on The hair stuck scene of ViDha.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys this time ,I am back with my poetic ideas to pour it upon the most romantic and cute scene of ViDha the hair stuck scene,hope u guys enjoy.
HER HAIR,LOVES MY FLIRT.
Love is unique,as always,
But it is not less in any circumstances in any means as always,
Says the black ebony wood shaped texture,
What?? What??,U people can ask me ,Is this texture??
Then Viplav Tripathi will clear ur chaotical gesture,
This wood is a blend of silk,which makes cute gestures,
When it is at my shirt's button,pinfolded together,
It is stuck but it gives the testimony of our life's together,
Can this ebony wood speak?Does it have a mouth?
Ya,it does ,it has a heart which is a pure treasure more worthy than a converse applicable mouth,
This ebony wood's beholder,
I s my heart's beholder,
But this ebony attempts to clear the loop holes of our love story,
It has prejudiced to create a new story of pure revolutionary love of a meaningful safed story,
Can it's power become my defence,
If it can, so then, there is no offence,
It made me and her join in the same wavelength,
By tying us together in our eyes wonderful observable length,
I can hear this ebony,getting coy,
It loves me as cosy as it can do,that makes it shows it's lovely coy,
I am thankful to this ebony for making me get submerged in her,
And it was in her but,it gave me it's nods to get close to her,
U are my partner,my ebony,u love me a lot,
I to love u more,because u have made me feel her presence so near,that is a plenty of ur gracious thoughts,
I am no more regreting to tell who is my first flirt,
I t is the hair of my Dhani ,who is my everlasting loveable flirt,
If I have to thank someone with my whole heart in this life of mine,
It is to the personified hair the ebony of my Dhani,who is always mine.





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Posted: 10 years ago
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its beautiful dear. i was thinking why pretty isn't writing a poem on the hair stuck scene..!!! and here you are. it was soo awesome...!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks jenny, loved it, it's very well written very romantic.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nandita123

its beautiful dear. i was thinking why pretty isn't writing a poem on the hair stuck scene..!!! and here you are. it was soo awesome...!!

Ohh thanks a lot Nandu dear I am glad u liked it.😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: tahera57

thanks jenny, loved it, it's very well written very romantic.

Ohh thank u soo much Tahera dr😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb poem jenny..
loved it to the core😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: tarun1234567

superb poem jenny..

loved it to the core😳

Thank u soo much Tarun dear😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely poem jenny every time I get to learn a new thing in ur poem for instance I did not know abt black ebony wood so it is a blend of silk ha
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: AISHU183

Lovely poem jenny every time I get to learn a new thing in ur poem for instance I did not know abt black ebony wood so it is a blend of silk ha

Thanks a lot Di,Ebony wood is something that is soo black in colur,it is normally used for personifying hair of women di ,it has fine texture but is not silky but I am just using it to describe Dhani's hair inorder to personify her hair as silky and dense black di,that's it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Jenny, as usual you just made my day...
it was a fab description of viplab's fantasies...👏👏👏
The way he feels grateful to the ebony shade of her hair is the best part...i just loved it...
This is exactly what a half century poem should be...
Great job girl...😳😳
Love,
Pratiti

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