Akdha OS~Duties~(How can i live without you)

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here is your b'day gift..and warning : it will be boaring sweet heart🤣 Being a mother is a hardest job in the world.But she always try to balence her duty as a wife and a mother.but rarely unwillingly she missed her duty as a wife when her attention mostly go toward their childern.Similarly its possible that she unnoticed the simple changes of his health. Everyday she start her job with making their bed teas,cooking breakfast and ended with making sonu and ashi sleep after helping sonu for his home work.and finaly she take a break in his arms. But these days she is extra busy with readying to sonu's school annual consert.also their little princess always make her mama busy with her works.with that she couldn't spend much time with jalal.even he too came home early but she was busy with their children.that's not mean that she didn't care about him but her attention were mostly with sonu and ashi.he too want to spend some time with her but he waited as she will busy only more few days because the consert will be held on next week. Sometimes he also busy with official works so he had to work more time.when he went to the bed room finishing his works she's sleeping due to the tiredness.two,three days passed like this and he had a heache since few days but without caring about it he took showers an worked till late night. As every day after making sonu and ashi sleep she came to their bed room and found him sleeping early today.she wondered because he never sleep like this early.atleast he waiting for her but today he didn't even waited for her.she got worried and hurriedly went toward him locking the door as she slightly noticed a tiredness of his face at the dining table.she sat near him while taking his blanket little bit away from him.she was shocked when her palm touched his burning forehead and a gasp ecape from her throat.his whole body is burning with the fever pinching her heart.she cursed herself for not to care about his health.caressing his hair she lovingly but in a worry tone she called him.her eyes filled with hot tears when she heared his moan due to the head ache and the body paining.he slowly woke up and turned laying his back on the bed.his whole body is paining. "Why didn't you tell me that you're not well jalal.."in a shakay voice she uttered and made him sit on the bed carefully.then quickly opened the locker of the nightstand.taking two paracetamol tablet she handed them to him.he looked at the tablets making a face while she filling water to a glass from the bedside water carafe. She notice that he's making a face like a little boy and she know he hate drinking medicines. "Drink this jalal.."commanding she moved the water glass toward his lips.but he don't want to eat that bitter medicines even though he is suffering from the fever. "I'm ok jodha..don't need.."brfore he could complete she stopped him and almost scolded him. "You didn't even tell me about your illness and now refusing medicines haan..you like it or no,you have to drink this.." all the while her beautiful eyes are shedding hot tears cuase of his illness. Seeing the tears in her eyes,he slowly drank the tablets and covered himself more with the blanket as he felt the coldness.helping him to lay on the bed carefully she stroked his hair gazing at his closed eyes.she could hear the sound of his slight moans pinching her heart.only few days that her attention weren't with him and as a result here he is laying on the bed while his whole body burning with the fever.because he don't care about himself.she felt a sharp pain in her heart when her soft lips touched on his burning skin of his forehead. Her whole night spent just checking him and placing a wet piece of cloth on his forehead.at the mid night she unknowngly fell in to the sleep sitting closer to him while resting her head on his chest.
With the sound of knok on the door she slowly opened her eyes and found herself almost on him hugging him tightly.sitting properly on the bed she checked him placing her palm on his forehead but to her worry his body is still hot.she heared their prinsess's voice and before go to opened the door she placed a long kiss on his forehead with the immence love. "Get well soon my jaan.."
Her heart is crying seeing him unwell like this.same time she blame to herself for not care about him.its an unusual thing that he has illness like fever.soo its take quite long time to reduce when he had it. Wipping her tears she filled a boul with a vegitable soup which she made for him. "Dady will be fine mama..don't cry.."she heared their little princess's cute voice and she was hugging her mother legs from her little hands.jodha smiled at her daughter through her tears and carried her in her arms. "mama will not cry porincess ok..let's go to feed this to dady hmm.."she said caressing ashi's cheek.ashi nodded her head smilingly and both mother and daughter head to the bedroom with the boul of soup.
its near to 9.00 pm and she quickly made kids sleep as her jalal not well.when she entered to the bedroom there he was comming out from the barthroom wipping his face from the towel.she rushed to him and checked him.her heart felt a solace as his fever is reduce now.she cupped his face and gave him a long kiss on his lips in joy. "I'm soo sorry my jaan..i couldn't care about you properly..soo sorry.."saying she gave another few kisses on his cheeks and hugged him tightly hiding her face in his chest.he too hugged her smilingly but his smile slowly vanished when he felt her tears through his t-shirt. "Arre..what happened jo..why are you crying hmm..see baby I'm ok now.."he said lifting her face. "I'm sorry jaan..I couldn't fulfil my duty..I'm not a good wife.."saying she started to wheep againg like a little girl making him chuckled at her seeing her cute face.cupping her cheek from one hand and tightening the hug from the other hand he kissed her forehead with immence love. "See angle..I'm completely fine now na..its beacause of your care hmm..soo my wife is the best wife in the world who can even save me from illness right.." His words made her face lited up.she grabbed him by his collar and kissed on his lips with immence love,passion.may be,he is the one who suffered from the fever but its her eyes which shed tears cause of his pain..he is HER jalal,the breath of her life...
Hey dearies🤗 I know its a boaring OS but as i have said you my memory isn't good in these days.because i forgot some scenes which i planed to add for this OS 😆soo sorry for the mistakes guys PLEASE LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS AND HIT THE LIKE BUTTON..
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sirat.kaur thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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emotional os
thnx fr pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you di
I loved the os...its amazing,mindblowing and awesome
Love uhh di
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very sweet OS dear!!!!
Love the way she is taking care of her family n Jalal.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely os dear.I really liked it.but why didn't u pm??
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey savi..
hw r u dear...
u knw reading this title i rmmbr ur ss"how cn i liv without u" the beautyful story of ja jo love hw ther lovestory strt frm hate to love n thn the deep strong love n thn thy hv thr love symbol thr daught...u knw i jst feel lik it is the extension of tht ss...totally love tht story..
ok now cum to os...i hv no wrds
its jst awesome amazing beautyful cute n sweet os dear...n very emotionl n touchy also.
a lif of a woman who is wife n mothr..the diffculties n hrd labour she do to blanc hr both duties was very well writtn by u...n the pain she feel aftr knwing tht due to her liitle carelsnss hr husbnd suffering is superb express by u dear...it was jst amazing...savi i think u really fond of emotionl n touchy story vry much tht y u always write this portion so beautyfully...n i always n really luv u fr this...u again made me emotionl but lik always i luved it dear...
but y didnt u pm dear...ok leav it.
eagrly waiting fr ur updts of ur ffs...pless try tto updt soon dear...
luv u dear❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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its amazing.. my fav story of urs..
thnks a lot dear for this
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Wonderful os savi congrats dear plz continue buddy
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's soo lovely OS Savindi
Lovin it dear
And Thank's a lot for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice update update her crazy boy last part soon make it fast pm me thanks for pm don't be late

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