SwaSan OS - Aashiqui

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Posted: 10 years ago
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He is a popular rockstar in college but down to earth person. She is a pretty girl but short tempered. They met accidentally. Dhe shouted on him "besharam... andhe ho kya?". He tried to explain but she was not in a position to hear. "Kaminey.. just because you are popular you think you can do whatever you want?" Now he lost his temper "you called me kaminey . Now i will show what a kaminey do" and stepped towards her. She started to shiver "kya kar rahi ho" and stepped backwards until she hit the wall. He kept his hands blocking her way and within secs placed his lips on her initiating a passionate kiss. She was too shocked to respond. After few seconds he realized what he was doing and felt ashamed of himself and released her. She looked at him and gave him a hard slap. He thought he deserved it and watched her going.


The next day was normal for him but not for her. The entire college now aware of the incident started to harass her . She was crying and looked up on hearing a sound. It was him beating the guy who harassed her. She was surprised by his care. He went near her and told " I will never let anyone harm you. Yesterday I tried to save you from another guy but slipped and fell on you. I tried to explain but you didn't hear. I know I did a stupid thing but I can't resist it. I felt attracted to you . I have loved you always but never confessed it but now i felt you should know it." She was looking at him understanding what he was trying to say not by words but by heart. He was guilt about what he did yesterday she thought. Finally he said "I'm leaving London today evening at 6 for a concert and if you love me you will come to stop me at airport. I'm ready to give up anything for you" and left without waiting for response.


She kept thinking what he said and what she has for him . She recalled her crush on him and the moments she wished she was his. He was waiting for her but was disappointed not finding her and left India promising not to return. The concert began and everyone was waiting for him but he is not ready to do it. The band name was called and his team left him. He started to leave the stadium when he heard a familiar voice.


Tu mujhe chhod jaaye
Yeh nahi ho sakta, saathiya


He turned to find her on stage and she made an announcement "dedicated to my love". He was more happy bit confused to see her there singing . She continued,


Meri baaton mein tera zikr sadaa
Meri yaad mein teri fikr sadaa
Main jo bhi hoon tum hi to ho
Mujhe tum se mili apni adaa


Went down to him and brought him to stage, looked at him and said "I love you with all my heart. I will never stop you because I will be always there with you. Your were my first crush and you are my first love" and waited for him to say something when he took the mike from her and continued


Kyunki tum hi ho, ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho..
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi

Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho


and smiled looking at her


Tum hi ho, tum hi ho
Arz bhi, mera marz bhi
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho


It was a memorable day for them. He pulled her into his arms and gave a never-ending passionate kiss with full of love. The entire crowd cheered .


Hey guys.. I love this song. So made on OS on it.. Hope you guys like it. Do share your views 🤗

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SONAL30 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww the OS is so cute
But i want a 2nd part...i mean a heart to heart convo between SwaSan with a cute love confession
Plzz plzz
One more part dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely os dear
😊 😛 😛 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SONAL30

Aww the OS is so cute

But i want a 2nd part...i mean a heart to heart convo between SwaSan with a cute love confession
Plzz plzz
One more part dear


Arrey sonal thanks yaar for your feedback.. 🤗Will try to write part 2 for you 😃

Give suggestions on how you want part 2 to be... 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks anju 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks megha yaar 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good writers are here in this forum. Aashiqui2 i love that song more. Ur os is mind blowing awesome😳😳😳😳.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: gayu6

Good writers are here in this forum. Aashiqui2 i love that song more. Ur os is mind blowing awesome😳.


Thanks gayu.. 🤗Even I love that song😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cute and beautiful OS. ...
When I read end I felt bad oh god it was completed...😭
Just want to read read read...u know ri8 when it comes to swasan mind and heart will be gready...He he...
If possible plz write part 2...
Do pm me if ur writing further. ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks tara 😃

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