Gravity of Love [Swara-Sanskar, FF, updated pg.23]

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1018283

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: Pihu.k11
Falling short of words.. It was jus so impactful !eeehhh.. you are awesome..
now that my sanskar is broken.. I just want swara to make it upto him.. what ever the reason might b.. This is wrong !

Sansku.. dun let her enter your life jus lik that.. Sadist here as well 😆 😆

please leave a pm when u update next! Thanks :)

Aww, thank you! 😳 So glad my story was able to capture you!

Well, let's say that Sanskar is not one to give up, easily. But don't worry, I will let Swara make it up to him, later on. Why should only Sanskar fight, after all? 😉

And sure, will do!

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Swathy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Swara what are you doing to my sanskar playing with his emotions 😡

Nice story

update soon

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1018283

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: swa291
Swara what are you doing to my sanskar playing with his emotions 😡
Nice story
update soon

Aww, don't be too angry with Swara 😆 Insaan hai, ghalti ho jaati hai 😛

Thank you! 😉

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bips

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Posted: 9 years ago

#104

I just stumbled onto this by accident ... the angst! ... my heart is leaping with joy ... the way you described their intimacy was fabulous ...

you do realise that you have shot down all excuses i could give on behalf of swara - she is obviously emotionally vested with sanskar, sanskar still is trying to get back together, sanskar did not see half the situation like lucky kissing swara but not seeing swara push him away etc etc ... so i have no idea whats going on in swara's head ... but i have faith that you will make her also run after sanskar ... like you said - Why should only Sanskar fight

beautiful beautiful writing ... fantastic work .
If you have a PM list for updates going on, pls do include me too

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1018283

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Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: bips
I just stumbled onto this by accident ... the angst! ... my heart is leaping with joy ... the way you described their intimacy was fabulous ...

you do realise that you have shot down all excuses i could give on behalf of swara - she is obviously emotionally vested with sanskar, sanskar still is trying to get back together, sanskar did not see half the situation like lucky kissing swara but not seeing swara push him away etc etc ... so i have no idea whats going on in swara's head ... but i have faith that you will make her also run after sanskar ... like you said - Why should only Sanskar fight

beautiful beautiful writing ... fantastic work .
If you have a PM list for updates going on, pls do include me too

Hello, dear! 😊

Thank you! 😳 I am really happy that you like the story, so far 😊

Well, I only said that Swara has her reasons, whether these reasons are good, rational or understandable, is another story, completely. And yes, I will make her work hard for Sanskar - but not right away. Right now, Sanskar is too stubborn to admit defeat - but everyone has a breaking point, and I don't think it will be long before he reaches his.

I will PM you upon updates 😊

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1018283

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Posted: 9 years ago

#106

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.IPKKND.

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Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#107

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Sooo excited!!!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#108

Awesome update!!!!!!

Very well written...totally loved it

I like how you have shown swara's turmoil somethimg which we will never see in the show

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Anu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#109

Wt an update...

Really shocked...

Wt a long update...

Enjoyed reading it dear...

Swara pain. ...

Sujatha show stealer. ...

Swasan scene...Wow passionate one...

Waiting for next part...

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Cintila

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Posted: 9 years ago

#110

Okay...THIS WAS HOTTT !!☺️

Don't even think about editing the dance sequence...it was super hot..!! gosh it made me blush 😳

I'm soo glad swara refused annapurna's proposal. That was selfish on annapurna's side. You know i'm more in love with the 'swasan' of your ff than the ones in the show.😆 Absolutely loved this update. Thank you soo much for the pm. You're a great writer..well i really dont need to tell you this do i ?😆

Thank you for this superlong update. Please do update soon 😳

I'm really sorry i unres-ed it after 3 days..! Was a little busy 😳

Edited by Cintila - 9 years ago