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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
what an intro dear...fell in love with your writing all over again...cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
When you start this story
Intresting concpt
Pl.cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Mind blowing prologue Yagz... šŸ‘
Waiting for more... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sneak Peek of Part 1

" Khushi, when Rahul and his family comes here, don't even speak a word. Girls are meant to be seen and not heard, understand? And if Rahul Bitua asks you for something, you are going to give it to him without a moment of thought. He is your would-be husband." Suhasini, though was a mother by relation to Khushi felt as if a stranger to her by the number of differences they had in the way they thought.

" Would-be, Mumma. He is not my husband and even if he is, then why will I have to listen to him as if I am a slave? And why should I not speak Mumma? You cannot make a relationship by faking yourself." Khushi, whose ideals were as strong as she herself was, couldn't see her mother being so submissive to her father and now when she herself was asked to be submissive, she knew she had to take stand.

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Only if you didn't educated so much, you wouldn't have been so against our morals. Aye Khushi, learn to respect your husband first. Your should never say 'no' to your husband because husband is said to be the form of Lord Shiva. All these studies and everything don't mean anything, as long as you have a husband. Everything in a woman's life starts and ends with their husbands and marital life. I don't understand why you wanted to get educated so much.So learn his value and act accordingly. Didn't I say that you have to be silent? Why don't you understand when you are explained once?

Listen Khushi, we women are meant for kitchens. Anyways, people meant for kitchens should not speak much or they lose the value they have in the eyes on their husbands, understood? If anything goes awry then believe me, you will see the worst of me. " Suhasini warned Khushi using the same words which her mother had used for her.

Waves of seas of tears formed in her eyes, as a deep sinking feeling developed in her stomach as thought about her mom's words. Was it for this reason that she remained numb about her love? Was it for this cause that she chose to forget the person who was ritualistically her husband?

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Khushi ke Ateet Ka Raaz Kya Hai?

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I know these all might seem extremely abstract to many of you, but these are the same lines many mothers tell to their daughters. Seriously isn't it the insult of an institution as scared as marriage?
Edited by .MereRangMein. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
damn girl
this is some serious business

really exciting!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Interesting Teaser
Looking forward to read this one. Please update soon

Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow, this seems interesting!
The sneak peak was so small! Then I realized its a sneak peak for a reason -.-
I want to know what happens next!
Update asap Yagz!

-Sanaya
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved the teaser, eager for the chapter šŸ‘
Thank you for the pm 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Looking forward to this story!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
this seems serious stuff! Thats really sad that ppl see marraige with such cheap eyes... Its commitment bt when both sides are involved!... I have even seen mothers saying their casanova sons should be married then only wo sudhar sakte hai! Shaadi hai yaar punarjanam nahi!!😳

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