SwaSan SS: Meri Swara.. Part 9 Page 19. ..Updated 10.30.15

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Trying something new.

Appreciate any feedback. Thanks!


Prologue


Officer is there a

problem" Swara said as she rolled the window of her car down after being

flagged to stop by the police office at the side of the road.


Maam this is a

school zone. Aap janti hai aap 20KM ki zada speed se jarahai thi." replied

the officer.


Sorry you see I am

in a hurry"


Saab Youngins

hurry mein hi hote hai, Licence and registration, please" he asked


Swara quickly showed him

her licence and the rental agreement.


Swara Sanskar

Maheshwari" he read off the licence and then walked to his car and radioed

in something.


He walked back to her

car and asked her to come with him to the police station; his senior officer

would take care of the rest. He didn't clarify what but stated something about

impostor something, dost, bhai-bhabhi.


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<p>- Rose





Index


Part 1 - Page 1


Part 2 - Page 2


Part 3 - Page 4

Part 4 - Page 6


Part 5 Page 8



Part 6 Page 12
Part 7 Page 14
Part 8 Page 16
Part 9 Page 19
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Hi very interesting prologue! Do plz PM me when u update! :)
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Nice start, pls add me to your pm list. Thx
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Seems interesting
Update the first part soon
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Oooh this is very interesting!😊
Please continue!
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Part 1


Swara pace back and forth in the small police office she was escorted to by the officer who had stopped her for speeding 20km above speed limit in school zone. But what could she do she had a flight to catch back home to Mumbai.

"Listen officer at least let me make one call" she pleaded when no one paid any heed to her constant pacing. Apparently they were waiting for the Senior Police officer who had asked the other police office to bring her in.


The officer didn't pay any attention to her request and proceeded to continue logging some pending FIRs on his desk. Just then she stopped in front of his desk and try to grab the phone of his desk but he was quick and held the receiver of his phone down so she couldn't lift it. "One phone call please" she pleaded. Just then the inner door of the office opened and out can the senior officer who they were waiting for. The officer didn't look any different then the first but he looked at her with such attitude.

"Sir" she said as she approached him. "One phone call that's all I asked him for. Who brings someone in for speeding. I didn't even hit anyone. I never have. Aap chahiye to Mumbai mein mera driving record check kar sakte hai"

"Stop" the senior officer said "you will find out in a few mins. He should be here soon"

At that moment an elder man with a bald head and rounded glasses dressed in a very regal manor walked in followed by other men one in his early 50s and the other in his late 20s. The elderly man walked up to the senior officer and said. "Kahine Kapilbete. Kyun bullaya hai?"

"Uncle I have no luck getting in touch with him. But this girl is going around claiming to her self to be Mrs. Sanskar Maheshwari" Kapil the senior police officer replied.

"Dekhe I am not claiming to be but I am Mrs. Maheshwari" Swara corrected Kapil.


End of Part 1

Thanks for reading. Please do share your likes and dislikes. All are welcomed. Criticism is always welcome. It only helps me write better.

Thanks,
Rose
Edited by white_rose - 9 years ago
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It's really interesting, will be waiting for further updates.
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Hey ...first welcome for writing new story...
Prologue was very interesting...
And part 1 loved it...
Mistry...start...
Do cont soon...
I have sent u the buddy request...do om me while updating next part...
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Superb prologue !!! Please send me a pm for further updates !!!! Pls continue... !!
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Unique concept..
Will be waiting for next update
Do pm if possible..
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