SwaSan SS: Meri Swara.. Part 9 Page 19. ..Updated 10.30.15 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks-you all for the wonderful comments that you all have showered me with. I will try my best to get these updates flowing as quickly as I can. Not sure if I can do daily updates but will try to updates a few times a week. Here is part 2.

Part 2

"Dekh yeh I am not claiming to be, but I am Mrs. Maheshwari" Swara corrected Kapil.

The elderly man looked at Swara if she had sprouted a set of horns on her head. And then in his regal tone he said "To tum ho humhare Sanskar ki Bindhini. Humhara beta humse se alag hai isliyeh tum jesi choori apna fidya nikal rahi hai"

"Please ek phone call karne dejiye" she pleaded again. This time Kapil complied with her after the elderly man gave him his nod to let her make that one phone call.

She quickly picked up the phone and punched the keys to process her call. Just as soon as the phone call began processing and was about to be answered the officer at the desk clicked the speaker button.

"Hello" Said the male voice that answered the call.

"Sanskar, aap kaha hai" Swara spoked in her nervous tone as 5 pairs of eye stuck to her.

"Oh so madam ko ab hamari yaad ayi" joked Sanskar as he adjusted his cellphone and sat down at a chair nearby.

"dekho bhav mat kavo...this isn't the right time. I was pulled over on my way to the airport for my flight back home. The officer says that I was speeding 20 KM above the zone, but then he brought me in to the station and I am held here and they wouldn't even let me call you until this uncle came and..." she said in one breath.

"Slow down meri Jansi Ki Rani. Shona, Let me talk to the officer who is in charged. I'll have him issue you a ticket and we will pay the fine."

Swara turned to face Kapil and signaled him to speak to the phone.

"Hello Bhaiyo. Eh choori sache me hi tumhari beedni hai" he said as he let a short chuckle." I had her brought in thinking she was some imposter using your name and absence for her benefit. You don't know what kind of crooks I face each day"

"Abe Kapil, tum aur Police mein? Nice. Now that you confirmed that she is indeed my wife can you let her go." Sanskar stated and then continue "You know what let her stay a night in Jail. This will teach her to speed ever again" he laughed.

"Sanskar!!!" Swara pouted as she jumped closer to the phone.

The elderly man came toward the phone and spoke "Humhare ghar ki Bahu Police coki mein shobha nahi deti" he snorted.

"Bade Papa aap" Sanskar whispered as he clutched on to his cellphone as he realized that Durga Prasad Maheshwari his dad's elder brother way on the other side of the phone, hence he was present at the police station and in the same room as Swara, his wife"

"Aap humse naraz hai magar iska yeh matlab to nahi kai humhari ghar ki bahu ko paraivaar ka saath bi nahi mile." He spoke to sanksar as he stood next to Swara and caressed her head in a paternal way.

"Sorry Bade Papa" He begged as a lone tear escaped his eye.

"Sanskar, Sorry nahi. tum jaldi se jaldi ghar chale avo. Hum Swara ko hamhari saat ghar lai gate hai." stated Durga Prasad.

So now with everything said and done. Fine paid and all charges cleared Swara was on her way to Maheshwari Mansion with her husband's Uncle, Dad and elder cousin brother Adarsh, awaiting the arrival of her husband and the flight back to Mumbai all forgotten.

End of Part 2

Thank-you for reading yet another one of "Meri Swara". All your comment and feedback are welcomed and I can't wait to hear for you all how you like it dislike this story so far. With Maheshwari Mansion soon to follow in the updates the rest of the characters will be introduced soon. I can't wait to write about Sujata my fav character after Swara and Sanskar.

- Rose

Edited by white_rose - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Lovely update !!!!
Do update soon
So is swasan in love with each other ???

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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Beautiful update...😳
Waiting to see how everyone ll react after seeing Swara...
Continue soon...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Awesome
Continue Soon
N Please PM me when you will update
Edited by Swasan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
One question???
Swara aur Sankar ne kay bhag ke Sadhi ke..
Jo Maheshwari ko pata nhi ki Swara yunke bhau hai...

Huh????

update Soon...
i loved the concept..
it's new...

Plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Absolutely loved the parts you have updated and am curious abt the backstory of swasan and sanskaar and the maheshwaris.
Edited by naran1986 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Wonderful update dear! Loving the whole concept! 👍🏼
Waiting for nxt update now n yeah thnx for the PM! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Nice
Liked it
Different concept far away frm conspiracies and jealousy

Can I get a PM wenever u update this ?
Edited by -TeriMalang- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
This is so unique 👏
Read both the parts together and i really loved it ⭐️
Mistery mistery everywhere 😉
Update soon and please pm me 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved the update
Plz continue :)

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