MR&MRS Angel... chapter 18pg99 on 21/11

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Hai all... I am a silent reader... but after reading so many stories I also wanted write some thing on our beloved AKDHA..
PROLOGUE


Jalal is an orphan he lost his parents when he was 3 years old in a car accident...he grown up under bharmal father of jodha.
Jodha & jalal both love each other but won't express each other..what happened to their love story.


So how is prologue... should I continue or stop...
Name not yet decided... suggest me something...
Thank u all


Chapter1-,page 1
chapter2-4
Chapter3-6
Chapter4-10
Chapter5-13
Chapter 6-18
Chapter7-29
Chapter8-40
Chapter9-48
Chapter10-55
Chapter11-61
Chapter12-70
Chapter13-76
Chapter14-80
Chapter15-84
Chapter16-89
Chapter17-95
Chapter18:99
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Jalal he is son of humayun & hamida. Richest family in the Mumbai city. He is the only kid to his parents. They loves him a lot.jalal by birth is talented guy. Very smart good looking kid.on fine weekend all three went to picnic. While returning to home they met with an accident. Hamida & humayun were dead.. jalal was injured badly admitted in the hospital. He lost his memory..he forgot everything... he only remember his name.

Bharmal
He is a doctor.. Very kind hearted. He has a daughter named jodha.he loves his daughter very much. She is the world to him.he treats jalal in the hospital got to know that he is an orphan.he didn't know about jalal wealth. Jalal lost his memory so he thought that he is an orphan. Takes jalal to his home.treats him as like son.


Mainvathi
Mother of jodha.. she is kind loves her daughter alot. But hates jalal.he doesn't like him. She doesn't like jalal & jodha friendship.she didn't allow jodha to meet jalal. Always gives work to jalal. Bharmal don't know anything about this.jalal also won't say anything to bharmal about all this. Jalal always treats maina as his mother. He likes her a lot

Finally... our princess jodha
She is fun kind loving care bubbly & a lot.. Very cute & beautiful & pretty girl... Apple to his father.. princess to her mother.. best friend to jalal..she loves jalal...but didn't tell to him becoz of her mother & she is afraid to loose his friendship
..she knows about maina behavior with jalal she wanted to tell to his father but jalal takes a promise from her that do not tell to bharmal about this so she can't go against jalal so she stay calm.. but secretly meets jalal always helps him & love him a lot...


Surya
Villan of the story..nephew of Maina... loves jodha a lot.. but jodha hates him.he hates jalal becoz of jodha jalal bonding...maina loves him a lot.. treats him like a son..she wanted to make jodha & surya marriage...



So new characters will introduce in the story itself...
Comments expected.. positive or negative... plz... reply.. so that I can continue or stop...
Thanks all

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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting dr..very nice..congrats for the new story and continue soon.eagerly waiting..:p
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Congratulations for new story prologue and character sketch is very interesting update first chapter soon make it fast pm me please accept my Buddy request please
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats Lakshmi ...Nice concept.. continue soon .. do pm me
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congrats on ur first story...
nice idea nd cs... update 1st chapter soon.. nd do pm me...
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Chapter1
Jalal and his family went to picnic.. While return to hospital met with an accident. His parents died on spot.jalal is injured.he was in a shock.can't able say anything.so he fainted.somebody on the road called the ambulance and jalal was admitted in the hospital.Bairam Khan was legal advisor to the Khan family..he is the best friend of humayun. Bairam Khan reaches to the accident spot but didn't find jalal there.somebody told him that he was admitted in the hospital. So he went to the hospital in the search of jalal.but didn't find jalal there.he files a case in police station.he searches for jalal everywhere but can't able to find him.
Meanwhile in the hospital jalal was treated by bharmal. Jalal gets conscious. Asks him who r u?? Where is ur parents?? Jalal says I am jalal. But I don't know anything else. Starts crying.bharmal consoles him. Takes him to his home.
In bharmal home a girl aged 2 years crying. & irritating his mother..Meanwhile bharmal came to home with ja. Seeing ja the angel stopped crying.ask him to come near to her. Ja goes near angel and wipes her tears.gives chocolate to her.(bharmal gave chocolate to ja.he gives that to angel).angel was very happy. And asks him who r u??? Ja says I am jalal. Uncle brought me for u to play with u.after listening that angel was very happy.wow...thanks to her dad. & gave kisses to her father. Ja asks what's ur name to angel. Angel replied I am JODHA ... ja & jo shares a hug.they don't know at that time what destiny is going to play with them..

Meanwhile bharmal tells about ja to her wife maina.she also likes ja.becoz he made her angel to smile.she said ok. But doesn't treat him as like her son.
Ja& jo become very good friends in short span of time.bharmal admitted both in the school.daily both goes to school.both are best friends.ja always cares jo.he never calls her with her name.he always calls her as angel only.maina didn't like this so she told to jalal call jo as madam ji. So in front of maina ja calls jodha as madam ji.which jo didn't like at all.she wanted to tell bharmal but ja stopped her. Takes promise from her that never told about her mom to bharmal.jo can't deny him so accepted his promise..ja bharmal relation become strong.he calls him as Pappa.he wants to call maina as mom but she didn't allow him.so he called her as madam..

Days go by like this.day by day jo ja relation becomes very strong.jo always depends on ja for everything.ja day start with jo ends with jo.she is angel to his life.he hates tears in her eyes.I. the school also ja takes care of her.he is very brave good student.always class first. Jo little dull. But ja always helps her in studies also.
Surya is nephew to maina.he likes jo.Surya also in same school.but hate ja very much.becoz of his friendship with jo.Surya always hurts ja & fights with him. But ja won't say anything becoz of maina. Maina always supports Surya. Ja always likes maina so he won't say anything to Surya.

Precap: jo & ja feels each other.. but afraid to tell each other..

Sorry if u people didn't feel intrest.. I am very sorry for the mistakes.I am writing first time.so plz accept mistakes..thanks all..I really don't know how to pm. Sorry for that..



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice chapter lakshmi.. continue soon..

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superb..update asap dr[/QUOTE
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Nice chapter lakshmi.. continue soon..

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