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Well thanks a lot friends..who liked my story.. thanks a lot.. I am so happy to give u ppl another update.Sorry for mistakes...keep blessing me.
Chapter 3:
Bhiram khan searching for jalal but he didn't get succeeded becoz he don't have any thing about jalal.he don't know how jalal looks now.he had only ja photo that is when ja 3 years age.so he didn't got any success..he keeps on searching for him.bk don't know how he looks but he has one clue to search jalal. It's a iridium locket which was given to ja on his 3 rd birthday by his parents.it hangs in a chain.the locket was very beautiful very costly rare metal.it has blue stone in the middle which is very rare diamond in the whole world only 2 people have that one is queen Elizabeth. & another with Mughals. It is ancester locket for mughal. Nobody knows about the locket only ja parents & bairam Khan. Poor ja also don't know all this. But at the time of accident it is with him only. He keeps with him. Even he didn't show to bharmal don't know y but he feels a mother relation with the locket so he didn't mention to bharmal. Only his angel knows above this.it's secret bw him & angel.
(In future the locket is the key role. So I mentioned lil detail about it .I am trying to add the pic also just let me try or else I am sorry...)



Jo sleeps on Surya shoulder which is unknown to her..becoz of crying she felt tooo sleepy..not to mention full hungry to but didn't want to eat becoz of ja. Bus came near to a beautiful location everybody wants to take a picture so they requested driver to stop the bus. The driver stops the bus. Meanwhile ja wakes up search for his angel.he saw her sleeping with Surya. He don't know but he felt a sting in his heart.at that time he don't know as it is jealousy.he can't name his feeling. He is in thinking & looks outside & bus stops. He looks outside a beautiful nature is giving feast to his eyes.but still heart is thinking about his angel in fact he worried becoz she didn't ate anything from morning.after the bus stop everybody is getting down to Njoy the view.Surya wake up but didn't wake-up jodha.our sleeping beauty is still don't know that bus is stopped & she is missing the view.ja came near to jo tried to wake up jo but alas Surya stops him says let her sleep & warns him keep away from her.ja again feels the same feeling. Ruks sees this & drags ja down. Ja don't have another option gets down.Surya feels thanks to ruks in his mind & wakes up jo that she is missing the beautiful view.she opens her eyes see her position which didn't like at all jerks Surya away.with sudden act of jo Surya got angry but he controlled himself. In a cool way he asks her hey what happened r u fine? Do u want something? She asks where is ja.Surya again got angry but says to jo that he already got down with ruks & he sees ja & ruks are taking snap so to make this as his favour he points to ja to jo & see ur bodyguard forgot about u & happily enjoying with ruks u r asking me where is he??? With this jo shocks & looks outside sees ja& ruks together burns with jealousy. She said to Surya that he never forget me & thanks u already know that he is my bodyguard & yes he is my personal bodyguard friend.he is a shadow to me.he is my jalal.she say this in very anger & gets down. Surya was hell shock with this. But his mission is to separate both ja & jo .. so keeps on thinking how to separate both.

Jo gets down... see in the direction towards ja. Ja sees her & leaves ruks & runs to his angel. Jo sees this feels hhappy do dance in her heart..but want give him a lesson she ignores him goes near to salima. Ja calls for her but she didn't replied to him & went to salima. Ja don't know y she is doing & cries in his heart tear escaped from his eyes but he controls himself again goes near to jo. Jo sees him & observes his face turns pale she also hurt but she is stubborn to give up early so she want to play like this for sometime. She thinks in her mind I am sorry for doing this to u but u know I don't like someone near to u. U r only mine. My jalal. What I said I say my jalal when he became mine he is just friend howcome he became mine. Her mind stops working. She wanted to clarify with her mind & heart . She wanted to ask salima about all this.wants to take her help to sort out her feeling. She feels uneasy addition to this she
didn't ate anything from morning so she starts feel dizzy & faints.but a strong arms hold her carefully.She knows whose hands are those.. her ja. Again her she smiles & closes her eyes.. ja feels restless he don't know what happened to her angel.additionally she didn't talked with him & fainted..he starts crying hugs her very tightly. He calls her name but didn't got respond.Meanwhile all see this & gathered around jo & ja. Salima panics & brings water for jo. Ja sprinkled some water on jo she opens her eyes.& gets up with the help of ja. Ja asked her did I ate anything??? What happened to u.? With out giving importance to ja jo calls salima & asks her I am feeling hungry let's eat something. Both goes to bus. Jo still didn't feel settled again going to faint but this time salima & Surya helped her. Jo calls Surya to the bus ignores ja. But with nave eye she is looking ja. Ja feels sting in his heart he wanted to cry. Feels helpless. Tears are floating from his eyes...


Precap: jodha got her heart. Still ignores ja. Ja jealousy...



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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
yipppeee i am first 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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me second again😲
janki 😡😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res
unresss
nice update
surya and ruks 😡
jodha ignoring jalal 😉
wen will the truth will revealed?
continue soon
thnks fr pm
Edited by mamtasingla - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice chapter buddy poor jalal and naughty jodha😃 plz update soon
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Originally posted by: mamtasingla

me second again😲

janki 😡😆




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Posted: 10 years ago
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i can say poor mamu again second 🤣
majaa agaya😆
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Who want pm plz send me a buddy request I will add u ppl & will send pms...
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Originally posted by: swriter


i can say poor mamu again second 🤣
majaa agaya😆

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krodhit na ho balike varana face kharaab ho jaayega 🤣

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