Arhi FF - Naseeb- CHAPTER -21- PAGE 49-12/6/2016

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Index:

Chapter 1, 2 & 3- Page 1

Chapter 4 & 5- Page 2

Chapter 6 & 7- Page 3

Chapter 8 & 9- Page 5

Chapter 10 & Note - Page 6

Note - Page 8

Chapter 11- page 8

Chapter 12 & 13 - Page 10

Chapter 14- page 17

Chapter 15- page 24

Chapter 16 -page 27

Teaser -page 27

chapter 17 - page 32

Note- Page 37

Chapter 18 - Page 38

Note & CHAPTER 19 - Page 40

Chapter 20- Page 44😊

Chapter 21- Page 49😉

Note- Page 55😭

Naseeb:

Character Sketch:

Khushi Kumari Gupta (Age 20):Daughter of deceased Shashi and Garima Gupta. Staying with her sister, Chacha and Bua in Lucknow. Married to Arnav Singh Raizada at the age of three. Fun loving, sweet tempered, loves her bua and sister and hates her uncle.

Payal: (Age-17) Just like show

Shashi & Garima Gupta: Deceased parents of khushi and Payal. Friend of Arvind Raizada and Owner of Gupta Industries.

Madhumati Gupta: Bua of Khushi and Payal. Unmarried. Loves Khushi and Payal very much.

Dev. Gupta: Chacha of Khushi and Payal and brother of Shashi. Unscrupulous and hot tempered. Manages Gupta Industries on behalf of khushi and payal

Shyam: Liar ...ooops sorry...Lawyer. Business associate of Dev Gupta. Loves khushi

Arvind Raizada (Age-26): Owner of AR Industries. Deceased father of Arnav. Married to Ananya Raizada and friend to Shashi.

Ananya Raizada: Mother of Arnav and Anjali.

Lavanya: Friend of khushi. Orphan. Resides in an orphanage in Lucknow

Aman: P.A and friend of Arnav

Anjali: Sister of Arnav

Sheetal: Cunning, smart (rest later)

Nani, Mami, Mama, NK, Akash: Just like show

Chapter 1

17 years back

Shashi, Garima and Khushi are travelling to Delhi to meet Arvind when they meet with an accident.

Shashi is gravely injured while garima dies on the spot. Khushi is uninjured.

AT RM

Arvind has just returned from office and is sitting in the hall. While Ananya goes to get food

(The phone Rings)

Arvind : HELLO

Hospital personnel: Is this Mr Raizada.

Arvind: Yes

Hospital personnel: Sir I am calling from Delhi Hospital. An accident victim has been admitted in our hospital. According to the ID his name is Shashi gupta. Do you know the victim sir.

Arvind: Ye...Yes, he is my friend, how is he , is he okay

Hospital personnel: Sir we are not allowed to give the status of the patient on phone but if you will come...

Arvind ( Hurriedly): I will be there in half in hour.

Arvind grabs his car keys and leave RM without informing anyone

At Hospital

Arvind is directed towards a room where Shashi and khushi are admitted.

Arvind's face blanched seeing shashi.

Shashi's whole body is bandaged only the face is visible which is covered in cuts and bruises.

Arvind: Shashi...

Shashi opens his swollen eyes and seeing arvind starts crying.

Shashi: Arvind where is garima. I tried asking doctor but he not answering. Please ask doctor where my wife is. She should be here with my khushi.

Arvind: calm down shashi. Its not good for you. I'll ask doctor. U try and rest.

Arvind goes to meet the doctor at his cabin.

Arvind: Hello doctor.

Doctor: Hello Mr Raizada. Pleasure to meet you. How can I help you.

Arvind: Doctor I am here for my friend Shashi Gupta.

Doctor: Yes, yes the accident case very sad.

Arvind: Actually I wanted to know the whereabouts of his wife. She was travelling with them. Is she okay.

Doctor: Umm. Mr Raizada. A woman's body was found near the accident spot.. Unfortunately, she died before the ambulance arrived. We don't know if the body is of the wife of Mr Shashi. And he is in no condition to identify. But if its possible can you please identify the body.

Arvind pales hearing this and meekly follows the doctor to the morgue.

Doctor: Usually we only let family members do the identification but since you are well known and Mr Gupta is in no condition you will have to identify the body.

Saying so the doctors uncovers the face of the dead body.

Arvind starts crying." yes she is garima bhabhi"

Doctor: I am sorry Mr Raizada. There is something else I wish to discuss with you if you will please follow me to Mr gupta's room.

Arvind: Yes

Doctor: Mr Raizada, Shashi gupta is gravely injured. He also has an undiagnosed heart condition. I am sorry to inform you but he does not have much time.

Arvind : What, Oh my god, he has kids, what will happen now. With Bhabhi gone and now shashi ...poor khushi and payal.

They reach the room and the doctor leaves from there .

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Hey buddies I am back with chapter 2. please comment and let me know your thoughts regarding the FF. Anda Tamata bhi chalega but do let me know.

Chapter 2

Arvind enters the room. Seeing arvind, shashi starts questioning him about Garima.

Shashi : Arvind did you ask the doctor. What did he say? Is she okay. Is my wife okay

Arvind: Shashi I am sorry.

Shashi (Panics): what happened arvind tell me please.

Arvind: Shashi bhabhi died on the spot. She is no more.

Shashi: (Shouts) tell me you are lying ...meri garima. Arvind please tell me that you are lying.

Arvind: I am sorry shashi.

Both Shashi and arvind cry silently sharing the grief.

It is said that some people feels premonition regarding their death. Shashi was feeling the same.

Arvind's phone starts ringing, it was ananya.

Arvind answers the phone

Ananya: Ji where are you, I searched the whole house but u were nowhere

Shashi gestures to arvind and softly tells him not to inform anyone about his condition.

Ananya: ji u there. Hello

Arvind: Sorry Ananya. Had to leave for urgent office work. Will be back in some time

Ananya: What, again you went to your wretched office, hey bhagwan baap bete mujhe pagal kar denge

Arvind: Will call you later ananya. Bye

Arvind disconnects the call and looks questioningly at shashi.

Shashi: And what else did the doctor say to you Arvind.

Arvind: He said you and khushi are fine. You can go home in few days.

Shashi: Arvind u know u cannot lie to me. What did the doctor say arvind. Its better I know so that I can make arrangement for my girls.

Arvind: Shashi u have an undiagnosed heart condition. The doctor says that u don't have much time left.

Shashi: U know arvind I suspected something. I can feel my garima calling me.

Arvind: Stop it Shashi. U are not dying. I won't let u die, we will get u treated by the best doctor

Shashi (softly): Its better I think about my girls now instead of me. I want them to have good life. My payal is only one and khushi three. I need to think about their future now.

U know dev. He is not someone I would wish my enemies on, let alone my sweethearts.

And madhumati is too nave.

Arvind: u don't have to worry about khushi and Payal. I will look after them.

Shashi: I know, arvind I want you fulfil a wish of mine. Think of it as my dying wish.

Arvind: Anything for u.

Shashi: I want you to look after khushi.

Arvind: I already told u shashi I will look after khushi and payal both. They will be my own daughters.

Shashi: No Arvind. I want you to look after khushi not as your daughter but as your bahu.

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Chapter 3

Arvind: what the...how can I do that shashi. Khushi is just a baby and arnav is barely 10.

Shashi: Arvind , Khushi is always following Arnav whenever he comes to Lucknow. And I want them to get married in a mandir. Not legally married but married nevertheless. So that atleast one of my baby is safe from the clutches of Dev.

Arvind: But Shashi

Shashi: Hear me out Arvind. I want the girls to stay in lucknow with madhumati she will look after them. But I want the protection of the Raizada's for them which only marriage could provide. I also want you to conceal this fact from everyone. So in case if in future they do not want to stay married, they can easily divorce without anyone's knowledge.I want my khushi to have a happy carefree childhood.

As for my will. Can you arrange a lawyer I need to make my will before I am dead.

Arvind: Okay Shashi. I will do as u ask. U rest I will arrange for a lawyer

Arvind arrives after some time with a lawyer Mr Das

Shashi: Mr Das, hello I am shashi gupta. I wish to make a will.

Mr Das: yes mr. gupta. Arvind sir has given me all the details. Rest assured the will will be ready by tomorrow. Just give me the particulars and I will start working on it.

Shashi: I am the owner of Gupta industries and I also own several properties pan India. I have 2 daughters named Khushi kumari gupta and payal kumari gupta. 35% of the entire property will go to khushi and 35% to payal and 30% to madhumati. Dev will manage the Gupta industries and will get 40% of the profit till my daughters marry or turn 21. If the company does not make profit dev will not get a penny. Once payal and khushi's marriage is legalised her property will be handled by their husbands. Madhumati cannot transfer her property to anyone except my daughters and only when they are of legal age. If my daughters or madhumati are not treated properly then the entire property will be freezed, except for monthly stipend of 20000 each which will be given to khushi, payal and madhumati. The girls will stay with their bua till they marry. Khushi, payal or madhumati cannot transfer property to dev or his wife or children. When payal's marriage is fixed I want the groom to be investigated thoroughly by Arnav or Arvind Raizada.

Arvind: Shashi why have you made such a complex will.

Shashi: I do not trust my brother Arvind. I want to safeguard the ladies of the house as much as I can.

Also, I wish you would consider few request from me.

Arvind: haan bolo.(Say)

Shashi: I want the marriage to happen tomorrow.

Arvind: But how can I arrange everything on such a short notice.

Shashi: I want a simple wedding arvind. No one should be present except you and a couple of witnesses. Also I do not want anyone from your house to know about khushi and arnav's marriage. And marriage should not be registered till khushi turns 18. This is to ensure that in case arnav or khushi wants a divorce, it will be simple without anyone knowing about the marriage in the first place. Also u must inform Dev about khushi's marriage.

Arvind: I am not leaving your side shashi

Shashi: I know arvind, once I am gone u can travel to lucknow. Also can u arrange for payal to come to delhi without madhumati or dev knowing the reason behind.

Arvind: Yes, I will send someone today itself.

Shashi: Arvind I am sorry, I am asking a lot from your family, I have no right to ask anything from you.

Arvind: You keep that mouth shut. I don't want to hear any more garbage. You should be demanding things from me. You have given me another daughter to love. It's no hardship my friend. Whatever I am today is because of your and my family support. So just shut up. I am leaving now. Bahu ke aane ki taiyaari karni hai. Will come back tomorrow.

Arvind looks at khushi and prays for her wellbeing. Khushi is still sleeping soundly because of medicines. Arvind goes near her and kissing her softly on her forehead says "I cant wait for you to turn 18 and come to my house as my bahu. May God protect you and your sister"






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Hey guys I am back with chapter 4 &5.


Chapter 4

Arvind enters RM and the first thing he sees is Ananya sleeping with her head pillowed on her arms on the dining table.

Arvind goes near her, smiles and then starts shouting "look at this women. Husband has come late from work and she is sleeping instead of looking after him, will complain to sasu maa(mother in law) in the morning"

Ananya hurriedly wakes up "Ji, when did you arrive, I am so sorry I don't know when I fell asleep, you wait I will heat some food for u"

Ananya hurries towards the kitchen. Arvind smiles seeing her and says softly "bach gaya"(saved)

Ananya stops near the kitchen and turned around "kya kaha aapne. Aap maa ko complain karege.(what did you say, you will complain to my mother) I should be the one complaining. I slept on the chair not on bed while I was waiting for you" she goes near Arvind and pokes him on his chest"

Arvind: ouch Ananya dard hua.(it hurts)

Ananya: Achcha, who told you to come so late. That office has become my freaking souten(the other woman). My husband spends more time there than with his family and you, why did u shout at me, I should be the one shouting"

Arvind (sheepishly): You are shouting ananya.

Ananya: Look at the audacity of this man. First he comes late and on top of that he start's shouting at me. One more time you stay late with my souten I will...i will go to my Maika.(Again poking arvind)

Arvind pulls her close: Ananya darling your mother stays with us so how can you go to your maika. This is your maika as well as your sasuraal. Now hush women I am starving. Won't you feed me.

Ananya: Okay u wait

Ananya and arvind had dinner and retires for the night.

In the morning.

Arvind is getting ready to go to the mandir then the hospital.

Ananya: Ji here is your food. And don't stay late with my sauten again

Ananya thinks he is going to office.

Arvind: Yes ananya. Waise I wanted to tell you something

Ananya: Ji

Arvind: We have a "bring your kids to work day" today at the office, so was thinking of taking Arnav with me.

Ananya: Why only Arnav take my laado also with u na. usne kya paap kiya hai.(what sin did she commit)

Arvind: you know I cannot handle Anjali on my own. She is still small and wants her mother every few hours.

Ananya: okay baba. I'll go and wake up Arnav.

Ananya goes to Arnav's room and gently shaking him awake tells him he has to get ready to go to his father's office today.

Arnav: Wow Maa. I'll get ready quickly. You tell dad to wait for me.

Ananya: Jaisa baap waisa beta. Pata nahi who will marry this guy agar yehi halat rahi to.

What ananya does not know is that today arnav's life is going to change.

Arvind and Arnav are seated in the car. Arvind turns towards Arnav and holds his hand.

Arvind: Arnav today I want you to do something for me.

Arnav: yes dad tell me.

Arvind: u remember Shashi uncle from lucknow.

Arnav: the one with two daughters. One of which always follows me around like a puppy and eats sweets as if it would vanish tomorrow"

Arvind: (sternly) Arnav.

Arnav: yes dad I remember him.

Arvind: He is injured Arnav and we are going to see him today.

Arnav : what the ...but dad u said we will be going to the office

Arvind is frustrated. He does not know how to make a boy of 10 understand that his father wants him to get married. He still tries

Arvind: if I ask you to do something for me Arnav will you do it.
Arnav: yes dad

Arvind: Arnav I want you to get married today.

Arnav : What the...no dad not possible. I don't want wife. She will shout at me like mum shouts at you. She will make me play with her dolls like Anjali does...sorry dad I don't want another girl in my house.

Arvind: She will not stay with us Arnav. She will live with her bua. I promise she will not bother you. Think of your marriage as if u are doing a play in your school. After that I will take you to your favourite museum. (Yes guys...Arnav favourite place is a museum...not some park or gaming zones)

Arnav: Sach dad(really dad). Okay I will do as you say.

Arvind: One more thing Arnav. You will not tell anyone about your marriage. It will be our secret. Not even your mum.

Arnav: but dad.

Arvind: Please Arnav when the time is right you must tell your mother but not before that.

Arnav: okay dad as u wish

Arvind and Arnav reaches the hospital and goes to meet shashi.

Arnav stands outside the room as kids were not allowed in ICU.

Arvind: Shashi how r u my friend

Shashi: I'm okay arvind. But I feel as if my time is coming soon. Have u made wedding preparations.

Arvind (with tears in his eyes): haan shashi the wedding will take in a nearby mandir. I have taken doctors permission you can also come with a nurse. I have also spoken with the panditji.

Shashi: thank you...thank you so much arvind. I will always be indebted to u.

Arvind: chup kar pagal(shut up). Now tell me where is my to be bahu(daughter in law).

Shashi: The nurses have taken her for bath and food. She is to be discharged today.

Arvind: okay ...once khushi come we will leave.

Khushi enters the room dressed in a baby pink frock looking cute and angelic. She was clutching her doll in one hand and a bottle of milk in another.

Arvind: There you are my princess. Come to Arvind uncle.

Arvind picks her up and turns towards shashi "lets go, all the arrangements have been made, arnav is also waiting outside"

The hospital wheeled shashi out followed by arnav khushi and arvind.

And so the baraat left for the temple and with DM blessing the two souls get united. But will their naseeb let them be united.

Was the decision made by Shashi and arvind right? What will be the future of these two souls who were unknowingly bounded together by holy matrimony? Will love bloom in the relationship or will hate reside.

Chapter 5.

Gomti Sadan, Lucknow

Dear Diaryji,

I had the same dream again. Should I inform buaji or should I keep my big mouth shut. Maybe it's nothing. Maybe it's my mind playing tricks. Buaji calls me sanki. Have I actually gone mad? I don't know what to do. Today was Baba and Amma's barsi(death anniversary). I miss my parents u know. I don't remember them much. I know how they look like. I remember my Amma's smile and baba's hugs. I am lucky I at least remember that much. Payal does not even have that memory. Or maybe she is the lucky one as she does not remember anything. Is memory a curse or blessing? I wish you could enlighten me.

Aaj ke liye bas itna hi. Tonight I am going to spend time with my parents...

Shubratri Diaryji.

A girl of 20 dressed in plain white churidaar drags her comforter to the terrace and lies down on the cot, looking at the stars with tears in her eyes.


"Amma, baba, I miss you so much. I miss your love. Why did DM cheat us of your love? Were we not worthy of your love? "

"Titaliya"

Hearing her nickname khushi turns her head. One teary eyes collided with another and with a muffled sob she threw herself in the arms of a middle aged woman.

"Buaji hamse kya paap ho gaya(what sin did I commit). Why did Amma and Baba leave us. I miss them so much buaji"

Buaji caressed khushi's head "aisan nahi kehte titaliya(dont say such things). Your Amma and Baba loves you and payal. They are always looking after you. And anyways am I not like a parent to you and payal. To kaahe ro rahi ho(why are you crying then). Just imagine that your parents are showering their love and blessing on you and payal through me. Now wipe your tears and go and sleep"

Khushi: Buaji, today I will sleep here. You go inside. Shubhratri buaji(Goodnight).

Buaji: shubhratri.

London

A man with dark brown eyes and a grim smile wakes up sweating." Again the same nightmare. My whole future is uncertain because of one person. Maybe I should go to India. I should have done this two years back. It's time to face my fears"

Arnav gets up from the bed and picking up his phone he dials a number and a sleepy voice answered "hell-lo"

Arnav's scowl became deeper" wake up and tell me how you feel about a change in job location"

The voice on the other end becomes more alert and shouts "is this the way to wake up someone, and its bloody 6 in the morning. Go back to sleep Arnav and we will talk at a reasonable hour"

Arnav: Shut up Aman or I will fire you.

Aman: like hell I will shut up. Go ahead and fire me you hothead idiot and we will see how long my replacement lasts.

Arnav's scowl becomes more pronounced "shut up and hear me Aman"

Aman: okay okay speak up. I am all ears.

Arnav: I am thinking of shifting our company to India. As it is my family is pestering me to go back, also I think it's time to take care of my problem.

Aman: Only you can call a child marriage a problem buddy. Well I don't mind shifting. Let me know what to do.

And the two spends another hour on phone discussing the details.

Delhi

As the sun bathed the big with white mansion with its morning glory, two ladies dressed in sarees could be seen doing the morning aarti near the tulsi plant.

After conducting the aarti and pouring water over the tulsi plant the ladies went inside to start another day thinking it to be the same as always.

But unknown to them DM has finally answered their prayers. And the answer came in the form of telephone's shrill ringing.

Ananya answers the phone" Hello Arnav beta"

Arnav: Maa how do you know it's me?

Ananya: A mother always knows...

Arnav: Maa I have decided to come back to India...

The rest of his words were drowned as ananya starts shouting and crying with joy.

Arnav: Maa Maa...are you okay...answer me dammit...maa.

Nani: Arnav bitwa it seems you have finally managed to shut Ananya's mouth. She is speechless with joy...

Arnav: Erm nani everything is fine right.

Nani: Yes bitwa, you come back quickly.

Arnav: yes nani...bye u take care...

Nani puts the receiver down and hugs Ananya" All your prayers have been answered Ananya. Your bitwa is finally coming home"

Ananya wipes her tears" yes Maa, Finally DM heard my pleas, it's time to prepare for Arnav's homecoming"

Nani interrupted Ananya" Ananya what about..."

"Later Maa" saying this Ananya left.

Nani is troubled and mutters to herself "I don't know what we did was right or not. My only wish is Arnav's happiness. DM please help us"

So what has Nani and Ananya done? Will it affect Arnav and khushi's future?

Hope you liked the update. let me know your thoughts with your comments. Also would love your suggestions.

Do share your thoughts

Edited by sabby91 - 9 years ago

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