New Yuvreen SS ( Kuch To Hai Tere Mere Darmiyaa) Epilogue pg 35

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am just loving these lines nowadays
"Dil ke pass dimag nahi hota aur jo dimag se ho wo pyaar nahi hota"
On that the new shivti pic has really made me rethink on them i really feel " Kuch to hai unke darmiyaa" which made me think n think n here i bring a new Short Story on our Yuvreen starting Shivin and Smiriti "Kuch to hai tere mere darmiyaa"

So mere forum vaasiyo jaag jao n wapas aajao as ur KD is back with a new story.
i am posting a small teaser here.
your likes and comments will decide the fate of this story :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Link of my writing corner if u guyz wanna read more yuvreen stories :)

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4187081

Index:

Part one : page 2
Part two : page 4
Part three: page 6
Part four : page 9
Part Five: page 10
Part Six : page 12
Part Seven :page 14
Part Eight : page 15
Part Nine : page 18
Part Ten: page 19
Part Eleven :page 21
Part Tweleve: page 24
Part Thirteen :page 26
Part Fourteen:page 28
Part Fifteen:page 30
Part Sixteen:page 32
Part Seventeen:page 34
Epilogue :page 35
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice one kdi bring it on waiting impatiently 😉😆
as 4 others jagoo yaaron aab tohh jago?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: JustMySelf

nice one kdi bring it on waiting impatiently 😉😆
as 4 others jagoo yaaron aab tohh jago?


So finally my first reader is here
yeh yeh will post soon
keep waiting :)
Even i am excited to write this ss.
i have one more story in mind "Humari Adhuri Kahani" but that will write after some time depending on my mood :p
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb start..
waiting for the next part..😉

Oh...i didnt see the new pic..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mizzle22

superb start..

waiting for the next part..😉

Oh...i didnt see the new pic..


Thank u
its just the teaser will complete the part soon.
the new pic is been posted on FB.
Shivti went for Ganpati Darshan together 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Waiting to read the new story Krupaa.Thanks for writing it.
Liked the teaser.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujairohit

Waiting to read the new story Krupaa.Thanks for writing it.

Liked the teaser.

Thanks a lot jiji will post it soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Disclaimer:
All the characters of the story are fictional and the story is my imagination only and it is not written with any intention's to intrude in any one's personal life.
I repeat its just my imaginations and it has nothing to do with anyone's life.
Its just my love towards my favorites.
Thank you
Krupaa aka Kdi
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Part One:

Uth ja puttar yuvi uth jaa dek subah ho gai hai

Y:sone do na mummy jee kal puri raat jagah hu

M: haaye rabba kal bhi tu puri raat is face book ki wajah se soya nahi keede pade is book nu aag lag jaaye tere phone nu.

(Uthaaa le tuje naya msg aaya utha le menu)

M: ab yeh kya hai

Y: wo mummy jee ringtone hai msg aaya hai.

M: lo ab tuje uthane ka kaam bhi yeh msg karta hai chal koi nahi maa na sahi to msg hi sahi tu uth to gaya. Ab jaldi se hath mu dhoke neeche aaja garmagaram parathe bana rakhe hai tere waste.

As soon as mumma turns around to go out. "Aaahhhaaa... oh balle oh balle"

She turns around and sees yuvi dancing on bed.

M: hayo rabba ee ki kar raha hai tu. Kiska msg aagaya ki aise nach raha hai tu. Kahi kisi ladki ne ha sha to nahi keh di tuje. Haaye me mar jawa abhi to teri college khatam hue ek mahina bhi nahi hua hai aur tune ladkiya patana shuru kar diya.

"Ohhh hooo suman jee kya hua kyun chila rahe ho" saying this a mid age man enters d room.

M: me kya jee aapka munda jawan ho gaya hai. Dekhiye kaise ek ladki ke msg ne ise pagal kar diya hai :(

P: putaar yaha aa neeche utar.

Yuvi came down n his dad enquired him.

Y: papaji wo mumbai se kisi naro ka msg hai usne FB pe mere pictures dekhke aur muje mumbai bulaya hai ek movie ke liye audition dene.

M: kya movie shovie yaani bollywood ki filme sharukh khan salman khan ki tarah

Y: jee mummy jee bollywood ki film. Mumbai the city of dreams me aaraha hu.

P:koi kahi nahi jaayega ek msg kya aagaya tum dono maa bete to pagla gaye. Pehle yeh to pata lagao yeh msg genuine hai bhi ya nahi. Aise to kitne msg aate rehte. Ab is baat ko yahi khatam karo aur chalo apne apne kaam pe lago.
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Few days passed by and everything got sorted. The msg from naro was genuine and yuvi decided to go to mumbai and try out his luck. Even his parents supported him and he leaves for mumbai the city of dreams where his life was gonna take a new turn.
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Mumbai :

After giving two rounds of audition and site seeing for three days he was finally selected as d lead and now was waiting in the production house office for a final test look with his co star.

A lady with high heels and lots of makeup on her face entered d cabin n yuvi was shocked seeing her.

Y(in mind) : ohh betaji yeh meri heroine hai... yeh heroine kam aur heroine ki amma jyada lagti hai. Iske saath muje movie karni hogi. Isse kaise romance karunga.

His chain of thoughts were broken with few other people entering and finally naro entered with a girl.

She was wearing a simple T and shorts with her hair tied in a bun and no make up. She entered with naro gigling and laughing and the room was filled with laughter n yuvi was mesmeroized by her sweet innocent look.

N: hey yuvi (giving a gentle hug) meet suvreen. Suvreen Guggal your co star and lead of this movie.

She stretched her hand and they had a gentle hand shake.

N: ohhh and she is ekta. (Turning towards suvreen). Suvi ekta will be essaying ur mom's role.

Suvi shared a hug with her.

Y(in mind) : bach gaya... warna iss mummyjee ke sath kaun romance karta.

He was thanking god n suvi was looking at him with mysterious look and he immediately nodded in a NO indicating all's well and suvi bursted out laughing looking at his confused reactions and yuvi was once again lost in her beauty.

N: ok guyz now enough of intro, we r going on field from next week so everybody start preparation and yes we are shooting our first scene in Nainital so yuvraj suvreen plz pack your bags we are leaving day after tom.

Every one started giving their introduction and talkin with each other to get to know their team.

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So i guess now many of you have got it from where i got the inpiration to write this story 😉
i again repeat its just my imaginations and thoughts to which i am giving words
if u guyz r not ok with it do let me know i ll stop it right here and will not proceed further and if guyz wanna know and imagine further then plz like and comment and enjoy with me the ride of yuvreen's love story 😉
Krupaa aka Kdi 😊

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