SwaSan SS - Twin Flames ~Twisted Destiny~ CH-2 PG-5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello buddies 😳
I don't knw why I'm writing dis 😆
& trust me u ll hate it bcz its nt dat good 😛

Ab main writer toh hoon nahi 🥱
so jo bhi likha hai padh lo chupchap 😡

Plot -

Swara & Laksh were in love wid eachother.
But one day during ganesh Chaturthi resergan a stranger did acid attack on Swara.
Luckily her face was saved but her left hand was burnt badly.
That stranger didn't knw who Swara was? That stranger didn't even bothered to look at her face.
For Stranger Swara was only a girl friend & love of Lakshya Maheshwari.
Stranger was none other then Sanskaar Maheshwari.
Yes he destroyed Swara's life only to take revenge from his cousin Lakshya Maheshwari.
According to Sanskaar , Lakshya was responsible for his beloved Kavita's death so he targeted Swara to take revenge from Swara.

Sanskaar after taking his revenge went abroad.
Though he took his revenge but still he was not happy.
He was confused that even after taking revenge why he is not happy? He started living in dilliusion that may be he is missing his Kavita that's why he is not happy.
But no this was not the real reason behind his unhappiness.
He is still searching for solace.

On the other hand Swara's life completely changed that incident left deep scar in her heart. But Swara Bose is tigress. She is strong & will struggle hard to make her carrier in music.
Yes her music is the only source of her living. She left her home & shifted to Mumbai.

After that incident Laksh broke his all ties with Swara & married Ragini.

Will Sanskaar ever find solace?
Will Swara be able to accomplish her aim?

What will happen when SwaSan will meet?
What will happen when one day Swara gets to know Sanskaar is the person who did acid attack on her?



Index - Character sketch down - Page 1
Chapter 1 - Page 1
Chapter 2 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Character Sketch-


Swara Bose - 22 years sweet , lively , bubbly bindas girl who tolerate no nonsense. Her only ambition is to win in Singing Superstar show.

Sanskaar Maheshwari - 25yrs old business tycoon , Angry akdu Sadu. Destiny played game with him & he lost love of his life. This made him heartless & in revenge mode he ruined Swara's life but now in this story Swara will change his life.

Edited by MusicMyLife. - 9 years ago
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Chapter 1 -

Ignore typos 😛
Scene 1-
Mumbai railway station.

Dear Diary-

Hi aaj apni zindagi k ek new chapter ki tarf kadam badane badane wali hoon.
In pichle 2 saalo mein kitna kuch badal gaya
Maa, baba , Dida , Ragini , Dadi , Dada aur Laksh...

Flashback-

Swara tumhare sath jo bhi hua uske liye I feel sorry for you.

Swara - Laksh tum mere liye sorry feel karte ho?

Laksh - Haan

Swara - Wow toh ab tumhare dil mein mere liye pyaar nahi balki sirf sympathy hai?

Laksh - Shona toh ab main kya karu? Mom dad ne saaf saaf bol diya hai ki wo aisi ladki ko apni bahu nahi banana chahate jiski body mein daag...

Swara slaps Laksh
Bas Laksh bas
Ab aur nahi...vaise bhi tum kabse DP uncle ki baat maane lage? Sacch toh yeh hai ki tum hi mujhe apnana nahi chahate.

Laksh - nahi Shona...

Swara - Shut up Shona kehne ka haq tum kho chuke ho.
Just get lost.
Tumhare Dil mein mere liye sympathy hai par ab mere dil mein tumhare liye Koi feelings nahi.

Flashback ends-

She continues writing diary...
Inn pichle 2 saalo mein Maine Kisi se contact nahi kiya.

Apne apno se bhaagna nahi chahati thi main.
Bas itna chahati thi ki wo mere bina khush rahe unhe unn roz k taunts se mukt karna chahati thi...

Flashback-

Some neighbor taunting Shomi.
Arey oh Sharmishta ab kon thaame ga teri beti ka haath? Jis ladki k sharir mein daag hove hai uska sath koi naa deve hai.

Flashback ends.

Tears drop down her cheeks while writing diary.

She continues writing... I miss you maa
I miss you baba

And I promise Bahut jald humare beech k dooriyoon ko main jald hi mitta dungi.

Just then her phone rings...

Hello Tia kaha hai tu?
Tia- Madam yahi puchne k liye Maine phone kiya hai ki tu kaha hai?

Swara - Main kaha hoon matlb?
Main toh platform mein hoon.

Tia - Konse platform mein?

Swara - platform no. 5 😕

Tia - stupid par Shimla Express platform no. 5 nai platform no. 7 mein aa chuki hai aur 5 mins mein yahaan se chalne wali hai 😡

Announcement - Train no. 88074380 Mumbai-Shimla , Shimla Express is about to leave station.

Swara - 😲 Train mujhe chod k nahi jaa sakti...she rushes towards platform no. 7


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Scene 2-

Baadi -

Shomi seeing Swara's photographs & crying

Just then Shekhar enters room.

Shekhar - Tum phir uss ladki ki photo dekh k ro rahi ho Mishti?

Shomi - Shekhar uss ladki se kya matlab hai tumhara? Wo humari beti hai aur uska naam Swara hai.

Shekhar - wo humari beti nahi hai Mishti.
Agar wo humari beti hoti toh hume Kabhi chod k nahi jati.

Dadi enters room 🤢

Dadi - Shekhar sahi kahe hai Swara humari khandaan ki chori na hai. Arey jo ladki apne Aashiq k sath bhaag gayi ho wo humare khandaan k chori hoi na sake hai.

Shomi - Bas maa...aap Swara k baare mein aise kaise soch sakti hai? Jab ki aap se janti ki Swara yahaan se isilye gayi taki log humare pariwar ko taane dena band karde.

Dadi - Ye toh thaari galat femi hai Sharmishta. Sacch baat toh ye hai uss ladki k bahut aashiq hai. Ek ne uspe acid feka aur ek k sath wo phur ho gayi 😆
vaise uss ladki ne ye ghar chor k humpe bada upkar kiya hai.
Uske jaate hi maahri laado ki shadi Laksh se ho gayi aur maahri laado Laksh aur apne bacche k sath Bahut khush hai 😳

Shomi - apko bas Ragini ki khushiyoo ki chinta hai
Kisi ko Swara ki chinta toh hai hi nahi
Pata nahi meri Shona kaha hogi aur kis haalat mein hogi.

Dadi - jahaan bhi hogi apne aashiq k sath khush hi hogi thaari chori bhi.

Shomi - 😡

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Scene 3-

Swaea running like crazy to catch train.
She reached platform 7 but train started moving.

Near Train door young handsome looking man was talking on phone


Mr Roy worry karne ki zarurat apko hai mujhe nahi Kyunki iss baar Singing Superstar grand hone wala hai.
Ab apko pata chalega ki Sanskaar Maheshwari kya kya kar sakta hai *smirks*

Just then that man sees young beautiful & smart lookinh girl running to catch train.


Swara was running & running & she sees someone extended his hands towards her.
She helds that hand.
Man pulls her inside the train & her head collides wid his chest.
She falls on him.
She was breathing heavily.
And he was all confused.
Train enters tunnel..
It was all dark.

BG- Aashiqui 2 instrumental tune.

Sanskaar pushes her away.

Due to darkness they weren't able to see eachother's face.

Edited by MusicMyLife. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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okay updated 🥱


Do let me knw continue karu ki nahi 😡
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yaar Mishu amazing plot...👏👏
Loved it...😳
Shekhar, Dadi ll never change...😡
Waiting to see hw SwaSan love story progresses...
Continue soon...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely. ..so nice..as usual I hate dadi n her son...n am exasperated with shumi as to y can't she kick tht man and ask him to buzz of instead of crying. ..grrr...swara running n sans helping her to get on the train. ...ddlj ishtyle. ..loved it. ..n yea disgusted with lux ji as usual. ..

plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mishu amazing plot and chapter 👏
New story and it's so interesting
Swara par acid attack 😲 and Laksh left her kyun ki uske haath par daag hai
Loved the train part jahan par Swara runs towards the train and Sanskar haath de kar helps her
How cute ❤️
But abhi bhi he is akdu here lol 😆
Koi nahi dheere dheere badal jayega, abhi Swara aa gayi hai 😉
But kahi na kahi he feels guilty for what he did to her, so slowly he will change 😳
Waiting to see their story progressing
Continue soon Mishu 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asha122

Yaar Mishu amazing plot...👏👏

Loved it...😳
Shekhar, Dadi ll never change...😡
Waiting to see hw SwaSan love story progresses...
Continue soon...😊

Thanku Ashu 🤗
story gonna be awesome bt my way of writing ruins d story 🤢
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it
Kyu andhera kar diya 😭😭😭 ab yeh mat bolna ki yeh tumhare haath me nahi tha ki andhera karo ya nahi
Dekhlene deti 😭😆
Cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: MusicMyLife.

Thanku Ashu 🤗
story gonna be awesome bt my way of writing ruins d story 🤢

nothing yar u wrote very nicely...
i know further also u ll write very nicely...🤗

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