Haal - e - Dil ....

Agar Armaan Ridzy ke liye koi kavitha likhta tho kaise likhta? It would be something like this I guess... if one were to take it on a lighter note ...

Rang hai jo mujhe pasand
Woh hai sauce waala laal...
Jo hai ab
Mere dil ka haal...

Har pal bas ..hai ab tumhara hi khayal
Khayalon se tere bhara ye man...
Hua hai behaal ..

Ke shaamo sehar...
Man mein hai ek hi sawaal ...

Kya tumhaara bhi hai yahin haal ?

😆
- Sareeta
(Edited ... with the sauce waala idea... from manny... Thank you manny...!)

WOW g8 yaar.....I loved it...

Lehkin tumne ek cheez miss kardi.... Armaan likes SAUCE wala LAL... 😉

wow sareeta kya kavitha liki mindblowing yaar........... 👏
really it suits the armi ridz situation...... 😆
achi kavitha lik lethi ho tum........ 😉

Wah wah wah..Kya likha hai sareeta.. Now I like this comic side of yours a lot.. Very apt as per DMG 😆 😆 😆 ~

I can't get that one line out of my head.. Laal rang.. Sauce wala... 😆 Gosh.. What kinda person says red color, sauce wala? 🤣 🤣 🤣

Love, Sana~

wah!! kya kavita hai!! 👏 👏
is mein to bayan armaan ke dil ka haal hai
jisay padh ke hona ridz ko armaan se pyar hai... lol😆

Originally posted by: ifrahnaqash

wah!! kya kavita hai!! 👏 👏
is mein to bayan armaan ke dil ka haal hai
jisay padh ke hona ridz ko armaan se pyar hai... lol😆

Oh man....kya likha hai aapne!! 🤣 Hona Ridzy ko Armaaan se pyaar hai...!!! Haila!!! 🤣

Kavitha has been edited slightly... with Manny's suggestion... Cant believe that I missed that bit out!! 😉

😆 😆 😆 ...i told u he is our ketcup man 😆 😆

Laal laal..... Red!!😆

Originally posted by: sareeta

Oh man....kya likha hai aapne!! 🤣 Hona Ridzy ko Armaaan se pyaar hai...!!! Haila!!! 🤣

ya.. i know that's very funny! infact, even i can't stop laughing!🤣

but that's what i call DMG syndrome!! 🤣

@sareeta 👏

haal-e-dil per aise kavita likhi aap ne kay kamal ker dala,
humaray armu ko pasand hai rung LAAL mager sauce wala!!!




😆 sorry ppl last line kuch samajh nahi araha tha tou yeh aisey hee likh dee...!!! 😆 😆