Manan ff [BRUTAL LOVE][LINK TO THREAD 2 PAGE 1]

hello readers ...
so here I m with a new ff ...
hope you will shower your love ...like always ...


BRUTAL LOVE

MANIK'S POV -:

'chill cabir ...its not that I don't respect girls ...its just that ...girls like to flirt and I just love to do that ' I said to cabir ..
'bro flirting and using are different things 'cabir said defeated ..
'bro u r saying as I had force someone ...unko pta h how I am ..
mein no bolta unko ...ki we will symtay together for life 'I said justifying me .
'manik I understand bt ho kya gya h tujhe ...u were not at all like this before ...u hv changed ...
jabse nyonika n your dad ...' he was about to complete bt I stopped him
'cabbbirrr ...plz ' I said pointing my finger in air ...in order to shut him and controlling my anger ..
'OK ...I didn't mean ..to ...bro sab ese ni hote ' he said ...
'what sab ese ni hote ...sb ese hi hote hn ...every girl is like this only ...they just want money . ...I shouted ..on him
'no ..man ...I hope you will fall in love soon ..he said in a determined tone
I laughed sarcastically ..

huh !!!
manik manhotra and love ...
seriously ..love ...
joke of the century ...
huh !!

'u know what cabir ..love ...is crap ...
it should not be named love ...it should be called ...BRUTAL LOVE ...
because those who had loved someone na ...the world laughed on them with so much of BRUTALITY ..'
I said to him painfally ...
rememembering ...
huh ..
chuck it ...
while cabir sighed in defeat ...



'pheww !! done ..
so here I m with a new story on our man an ...
need your support and love ...
plz do drop your views ...
stay blessed ..
lots of love
akanksha!!

#part 1 ..page 2
#part 2 ..page 5

Nice concept... would luv 2 read more..if possible update 1st part 2day

Baiby Tera new story ka link finally mil gayee...meri pataka u are back with a bang...itna intense start ...man gay tujhko ... Tujh main special power ha ... Karara Wala start dia hain tune ... Hmmm it's gonna be super hit ... Meri pataka bomb phorne main ready ha... Am sure u gonna get a nice response from all for ur new story ...waiting waiting waiting ...parne mujhe toh bara maza ane Wala hain for sure...di is with u ...keep up the good work...love u itna Sara...ab toh smile kar de meri jaan ... With lots of love and hugs

Interesting ... Very interesting
Congratulations for the new plot
Story looks promising and what a fab start ... Eagerly waiting for how you will take this forward
Wishing you best for the new plot gal
Loads of love

Very interesting concept.

awesome prologue...

intersting story line continue soon

Nice concept.. soo this time we have got a bad boy manik malhotra.. I'm waiting for nandini's entry to change manik with all her love..

Wow it seems interesting
Continue soon
Thanx for pm
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