Manan ff [BRUTAL LOVE][LINK TO THREAD 2 PAGE 1] - Page 3

Nice start dear.

Main mera baiby thanks a lot and di loves u too bohot Sara ... Di hamesha Teri sath thi aur rahegi... Thanks for not giving up and prove urself a strong person ... Love u itna Sara

Pehli update main cleaned bowled kar dia mera bacha :) ... Tu actual main meri pataka hain Jo kabhi mujhe Nirash nahi karti... Itna intense start aur Tera title bhi itna heavy kamal ha tu meri jaan ... Nandu's diary part was really emotional ... Yaar it was really touching nandu's mom dead and her father was in coma even Chachi became emotional yaar... Hmm navya and mukti are really nice love it... I love the nam nandu gave manik "Qutub Minar" was that was really hilarious ..haha manik checked her from top to bottom haha...loved the first part mera baiby... Thanks mujhe Tera story dedicate karne ke liye

U know na di loves her pataka a lot ?? ..am proud of u ...always make me proud like this...mmmwwaahhh... Ab koi zarurat nahi haIn commEnt ka reply dene main sAb kam xams ke bad...tc of urself ok??... With lots of love and hugs

Hi dear

Amazin'
nandu's life seems to be tragic
poor navya!
She eloped!
Manik's eyes caught nandu at 1st sight!
Update soon
plz plz

Rock

very nice concept manik will soon eat his own words that he will never fall in love

I have just read part 1 as of now.. And it seems quite interesting :)
Will Nandini bring an air of change in Manik's life?