Ishra FF : Yeh Wada Raha (Prologue updt)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello everyone,

Nowadays a concept came in my mind and just thought to share with you all... I hope you will like it...

Yeh Wada Raha

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Daughters are favorite for their father... They are angels for the fathers... These same things happen with Rama too... His daughter, his Ruhi is his angel, his lucky charm.. He was nothing till then Ruhi came in his life.. She changed his life, but she was failed in one thing.. She never changed his father's rudeness.. Yes Raman loves his Ruhi a lot but he never expressed his feelings.. He thought whom he loves the most she/he always left him alone.. But it doesn't mean he was always avoiding his daughter... No!! He always trying to make her happy anyhow,.. He always gave her the best thing.. But Ruhi need her father's love the most.. She had not her mother.. But her grandparents (Mr. & Mrs. Bhalla) loves her a lot.. Raman is a successful business man.. So he has lots of work so he don't get enough time to spend with his little princess.. But her little princess never complain him about anything.. She understand her father.. She knows her Papa loves him the most and she proud to be Raman's daughter...

Ruhi : Papa papa!!!

Ruhi excitedly walked in Raman's room, today Raman promised her that he will take her out but as usual he forgot and engrossed in his work...

Raman : Ruhi sambhalke beta...

Ruhi : Papa, yeh sab chodho...

Ruhi said while closing his laptop, but Raman took the laptop on his lap and said : Ruhi beta papa abhi busy hai, aap bahar dadi ke sath khelo jao!!

Ruhi : Par papa aapne mujhe...

But before she could complete Raman gave her a stern look, her face dropped and she took a leave saying "Sorry Papa!!"

Ruhi walked out from their apartment and took a sit on the sofa, she was crying badly...

Ruhi : Kyu god? Kyu aap hamesha mere sath aisa karte ho?? Aaj agar Shagun mumma mere sath hoti toh hum kitne masti karte, mere sare friends ke paas unki mumma hai.. Bas mere paas hi nehi...

At that time Ishita walked out from her apartment and saw Ruhi there crying, she went to her and took a sit next to her, but Ruhi saw her and quickly wiped her tears...

Ishita : Ruhi, aap theek ho? Kya hua aapko?

But Ruhi didn't reply to her and looked at her face blank, Ishita looked at her with concern and asked : Kya hua mera bachha??

Ruhi couldn't help but cried and hugged Ishita tightly, for a moment, Ishita startled seeing Ruhi like that... Then lowly she caressed her hair lovingly,

Ishita : Ruhi beta aise ro kyu rahe ho??

Ruhi didn't reply to her and cried more wile burying her face... Ishita made her look at her and wiped her tears...

Ishita : Kya hua baby?

Ruhi : Ishita aunty mujhe mumma chahiye... Kyu mumma mujhe chodh kar chali gai? Kya wo h mujhse pyar nehi karti?

Ishita felt very hurt as she knew Ruhi never deserve this pain, she didn't know how to comfort her when she pulled her for a hug...

Inside Raman's room

Raman was busy in his office works when toshi jee walked in his room hurriedly and looked around...

Raman : Kya hua ma??

Toshi jee : Ruhi tere sath thi na?

Raman looked at her confused : Ruhi?? Nehi toh... Woh toh aapke sath hogi...

Toshi jee became worried and said : Nehi... Woh toh tujhse milne ayi thi, keh rahi thi aj tu usko bahar le jayega...

Raman remembered what Ruhi was trying to say to him, he ran his finger through the hair..

Raman : Aap fikar mat karo.. Yehi kahin hogi... Mein bahar dekh ata hoon!!!

Raman walked out and saw Ruhi with Ishita...

Raman : Ruhi...

Ruhi parted from Ishita and wiped her tears, Raman walked to her and bend on his knees and hold his ears,

Raman : Ruhi I am sorry beta... Papa apna promise bhool gaye the!!

Ruhi : It's okay papa, I understand!!

Raman : Achha aap andar jake dadi ke paas ready ho jao, phir hum bahar challenge!!

Ruhi jumped in excitement and walked away when Ishita and Raman looked at each other...

Ishita : Woh Ruhi apni maa ko...

But before she could say anything, Raman said :Woh meri beti hain, mujhe apni beti ko sambhalna ata hain... You just stay out of it...

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At Park

Ruhi was playing with other kids where Raman was sitting and looking at her when his phone rings, he went aside to attend the call... At that time Ruhi saw Shagun at opposite of the road, a broad smile came on her lips, she once looked at Raman and then went to meet Shagun... Ruhi was trying to cross the road when a car was coming from opposite side, she didn't notice it and when she was in middle of the road the car pressed the break, "Papaaa!!!" Ruhi got scared and fall on road, Hearing her voice Ruhi came hurried...

Ishita came out from car and looked at Ruhi : Ruhi aap!!! Aap theek toh ho na beta...

Ishita took her in her arm and hugged her tightly, she cried...

Ishita : Aap akele yaha kya kar rahe the??

Raman came there : Ruhi aap yaha kyu aye ho??

Ruhi : Woh papa meine Shagun mumma ko dekha... Aap phone pe the iss liye bata nehi payi aapko...

Ishita glared at Raman and said : Kitne irresponsible ho aap!! Aapki beti wahan nehi hai aur apko malum tak nehi.. Agar mein sahi waqt pe car ko rok nehi leti toh aap shayad usse...

Raman just ignored her and forward his hand to take Ruhi from her lap but due to sudden fall Ruhi's hand got injured, so she cried... Ishita looked at her,

Ishita : Ruhi aapko toh chot lag gai...

Raman : Ruhi chalo... Papa apko hospital le jayenge..

Ruhi : No!! Mujhe Ishita aunty ke sath jana hai... Ishita aunty aap chalogi mere sath??

Ishita looked at Raman and nodded yes, they all left from there... After the treatment They came back home when Ruhi was sleeping on Ishita's lap peacefully, Raman first came out from car and then went to her side and took Ruhi without breaking her sleeping and was going to move back when Ishita felt a jerk, she looked at Ruhi who was holding her saree's pallu in sleep, she smiled and slowly free herself from her grip when Raman walked in along with Ruhi...

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This is a small teaser of this story... Picture abhi baki hai... Waiting for your likes and comments..

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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Raman's angry mood ufff!!!
Loved Ruhi and Ishita's bonding...
your writes well... 😊
Thanks for pm...
Waiting for updates... Cont soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful...
Waiting for the updates
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its beautiful prologue Reema.
Reminds me of old YHM
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sooo intresting
Plzzz continue 😳
Update soon 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..crystal..

Raman's angry mood ufff!!!
Loved Ruhi and Ishita's bonding...
your writes well... 😊
Thanks for pm...
Waiting for updates... Cont soon...

Thank you dear, I will post soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb story
update soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaa1202

Its beautiful prologue Reema.

Reminds me of old YHM
Cont soon

Yes it was quiet similar. And thank u
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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautiful updte !!
pm me d nxt prt plzz !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start dear
Update soon
Are u gonna show the past of ishra like yhm??

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