AKDHA OS - TRUE LOVE

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Posted: 10 years ago
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heyaaa guyzzz...
actually after a lot of time I am active...
i wanted to give update but my silly mind did not have any ideas...
but it had an idea of an OS...
to socha chalo update hin karlun...
so...
TRUE LOVE

SHARMA'S BUNGALOW:-
A woman in her mid forties screaming" are mera beta aa raha hai saat saal baad...abhi tak kuch bhi intezaam nahi hua hai...tum log kar kya rahe ho?
Bharmal"are mainavati...sab kuch ho jaayega... itna fikr mat karo..."
"main kya kahun ji...Hamida aaram se use airport se lene gayi hain... aur bhaijaan bhi kuch kam nahi...wo mere kok se janm le ya na le... hai to mera hin beta na...aur Jodha kahan hai..."
bharmal" apne kamre mein hogi"
"thik hai"

At the Airport:-
A handsome man in his twenties comes and touches his parent's feet...
hamida" 15 saal ka tha jab tujhe aakhri baar dekha... aaj dekhke to mera dil khush ho gaya... chalo ghar... aunty uncle besabri se intezar kar rahe honge...
jalal"ji ammi"

SHARMA'S BUNGALOW:-
All reach there... Jalal, Hamida and Humayun head inside...
everyone are happy to see him but his eyes search for his best friend who isn't there...He gives a faint smile while his eyes search for HER...
Mainavati" Jodha ko dhund rahe ho??"
Jalal smiles... suddenly he spots a door fully coloured in pink and blue and knowing that it's Jodha's room heads for it...
he opens the door and finds a girl wearing a black one piece standing and looking out of her window...

he goes over there and back hugs her saying...
hey moti...lookin sexy..
jodha turns over and says "stop calling me that jallad...
she puts her hands around his neck and says" tu bhi saat saal baad kaafi handsome dikh raha hai..."
they both laugh and have a good time together...

IN THE EVENING:-
humayun" jalal beta chalo ghar jaana hai...gulbadan bua intezaar kar rahi hogi"
jalal"ji abbu abhi aaya" (to jodha" kal mujhe taj hotel mein milna... I have to tell you something really important..."
"jodha" ok bye Jallad"




next day afternoon Jodha reaches Taj Hotel and heads over to the poolside...
she notices Jalal with a girl and her smile goes faint... but she plasters a smile on her face and heads over there..
Jalal" finally tu aa gayi... meet her Jodha... yeh rukaiyaa hai... my GF...{Jodha feels a sting in her heart}... I want to marry her... I love her... so main pehle ye baat tujhe batana chahta tha...
jodha smiles and says" so finally tune GF bana li..." she couldn't say further and said...
'mujhe ghar jaana hai... maa ne kaha tha 2 ghante mein aa jana"
jalal" magar" but she leaves...

she barges into her room locks it and starts crying...
she thinks to herself" agar main Jalal se pyar karti hun then I have to let him go..."
she didn't knew when sleep took over her
when she got up it was almost 7 in the evening

she cameout of her room and saw her mother talking with Hamida...
her mother notices her and says..." jodha meri beti... tum bachon ne hamari har baat mani hai... ham chahte hain ki tum ab hamari ek aakhri baat mano...ham chahte hain ki jalal aur tum ek dusre se shaadi karlo..."
jodha was shocked would be an understatement.. she immediately replied" nahi...aap logaisa soch bhi kaise sakte ho?? aapne hamse bina puche aisa kaise soch liya??"
mainavati" magar beta"
hamida" rehne de maina... agar jodh nahi chahti to koi baat nahi..."
maina" nahi... main baat karungi usse... jodha beta tu hin jalal ki zindagi bacha sakti hain... ham aisa nahi kehte agar bas 2 ghante pehle woh na hota"
jodha"matlab?"
maina" beta jalal ki ek gf thi rukaiyaa... aaj woh usse taj hotel leke gaya jahan pe usne use kaha ki use shopping jani hai... mall mein jalal se uska card leke usne kariban 50 cr nikale aur card ko niche phek bhaag gayi...paise ki baat nahi magar jalal pura tut chuka hai aur sharab ki bottle chodne ka naam nahi le raha hai... tumhare papa aur bhaijaan use samjha rahe hain magar wo samajh nahi raha hai... jab hamida ne mujhe ye baat kahi tab maine use ye suggest kiya ki hum tum dono ki shaadi karvade... aur kyun nahi tum log bachpan ke jo dost ho...pls beta jalal ki zindagi bacha lo...

jodha thinks" agar jalal ko is vaqt meri zarurat hai to main uske saath zarur khadi rahungi..."
she agrees for the marraige and both get married...
but from that day jalal used to spend his day drinking and nights in beating Jodha...
jodha had learnt to handle herself and never she used to complain... every morning she would say he slept peacefully to everyone ... she used to hide her wounds by makeup or some other way and everyoune used to think that jalal has only one problem of drinking continuously...

one night:-
jodha"jalal aapne khana nahi khaya kuch toh kha lijiye..
a drunken jalal" mujhe nahi khana"
jodha"thoda..."
jalal pushes her and asnd shouts"bola na nahi khana.."
this time jodha was severely hurt in hear forehead and lips...
still when she saw his hand cut she applied first aid without even caring about her wounds she got up made him sit on the bed... fed him and made him sleep...
jalal was amazed as how she took care of him...
jodha's care slowly changed Jalal and he wwas normal again...

TWO YEARS LATER:-
they both were looking at their one year old child sleeping and were content now that they have found their true love... it is not true that rukaiyaa did not try to interfere in their life...but their love always kept them strong...

even now rukaiyaa is trying to create problems between them but only they know that even if they die their love will never die... and one or the other day rukaiyaa would leave their lives forever...


heyaa
so I know it was boring..
i had actually written a 4 page long os but the book is lost so maine bahut chota karke likha...
sorry as I know it was boring...😭
next os wil be better
but pata nahi next os kab likhungi😛

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Posted: 10 years ago
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yippee me 1st
wow yaar
mindblowing os
enjoyed it fully
cheap ruks
can't wait to read to yr new os...n next time pm me 2
Edited by sirat15 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow..beautiful os dr..good job..write more and more :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awww...
beautiful story 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice os update ur other story nest chapter soon pm me thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice os prachi:-) :-)
Rukkaiya is so mean yaar and jalal an idiot
How can he do with Jo like that
Ending was good dear
They lived happy ever after with their symbol of love (their son)
Write more
Thanks for pm:-) :-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice os dear...
but hw can jalal act like that with jodha becoz of stupid ruks...
like d ending...
update next os soon...
nd waiting for u to update all ur stories...
thanks for pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mindblowing! Why dont you make an ss from this... It will be nice...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice os dear..
hw cn ja do this he releas his anger on jo by beating her...n all bcz of tht stupid ruks..dnt lik it.
but lik the ending...
it was beautyful he undrstnd jo's love n now thy r
living happy n beautyful life with ther son.. do write more..
thanks fr pm... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for the pm
update all ur stories soon dear

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