SS: Make Me Yours|Sneak Peek of Part 6|12/1 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: anushka12345

Lovely Prologue and synopsis!!

A romantic-comedy genre, loved it.
You are too good at every genre...
Sorry for the late reply.Was super busy for last few days.
Coming to the prologue, Disaster in the First Meeting itself!!
I was laughing at Arnav's first dialogue itself
" Oh My God! You tainted my dignity! How will I show my face to anyone now?
It was hilarious.

And then his flirtatious ways..." Not shameless, darling. Arnav, the guy whom you'll be dreaming about the rest of your life." said Arnav, while a flirtatious smirk adorned his face.

OMG and Khushi is quite feisty too " Forget my dreams, I will not even let you enter my room." said Khushi
Lets see how is she gonna resist him.

Arnav calling her sweetheart already, what's he gonna do to charm Khushi .

Reading this was such a fun.
Waiting to read more.
My best wishes for your new story.Best of luck.

Thanks for the PM.

Kya Karen Ji! Ham Hai Hi Itne Versatile! JK! I am nervous to write this! But this is partly based on Maine Pyaar Kiya! Thanks a lot Anu! Love your comments!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
interesting concept..
awesome prologue...
loved arshi first meet..😆😆😆
continue soon...
thnks 4 d pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Awesome start , interesting concept .
I guess this one will be a light hearted romcom, I am wishing for the same 😉

Thanks for all the pm's :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Sneak Peek of Part 1

" Dosti Kar Lo Madam, Or else you will keep on saying thanks to me forever." said Arnav, while running his hands in his already ruffled hair, while Khushi's mouth dried seeing the enchanting sight in front of her.

" Oh really? As if I become your friend, I will stop saying thanks to you. It is matter of manners but shameless people like you don't understand them." teased Khushi.

"You will have to stop saying thanks to me if you become my friend, kyonki dosti ka ek usool hai madam, no sorry no thank you." whispered Arnav coming close to her ear while Khushi's breath paced.

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This SS is based on Maine Pyaar Kiya so expect a lot of the dialogues from there.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
AWWWH i had a silly grin on my face when i was done reading it! how cute!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Arnav seems very boyish here. Loved his this avatar
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
continue... cant wait to read
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Lovely teaser
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
loved the sneak peek👏 thank you for the pm
loved maine pyar kiya, takes me back
eager for the chapter😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Nice Teaser
Arnav is flirting with Khushi

Waiting for the update
Thanks for the PM

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