Swasan os - saving my husband

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Posted: 10 years ago
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OK now this is my first attempt so kindly bear with me
Ragini- sanskar nai humare saath bateemizi ki (and she hides behind lakshay)
Lakhshay in fury holds sanskaar with his collar who was till now unconscious
Ap,dp and sujata are too shoched to react
Swara- she was shocked to see everything she could not believe that ragini her sister could stoop so low but then she cools herself down and thinks that how can she bring her husband out of this mess so she goes and hugs ragini and says
Don't worry ragini ab hum aa gaye hai na koi tumhe Kuch nahi kahega and starts crying that her husband sanskaar betrayed her and she calls the police
Police enters
They ask ragini to give details ( sanskaar is still unconscious)
Ragini - sanskar attempted to rape me I hit him with a vase due to which he is unconscious
Police - which vase Mrs ragini?
Ragini - (gets nervous with the counter questions and starts crying)
Lakshay- please inspector u just arrest sanskar my wife is traumatised pls
Inspector- we can't arrest him without any proof Mr and turns towards rags and repeats his question
Ragini points towards the vase which was neatly kept on the table
Swara smirks her plan is working
Sujata - arrey wah kitni sanskaari bahu hai vase sai maar kar dubara usse apni jagah rakh diya wo bhi aisai serious situation mai ?
Ragini now starts sweating and lakshay ap and dp gets suspicious
Inspector asks his constable to check sanskar's head for any injury and guess what there was none
Inspector - Mr lakshay aapki biwi jhoot bol rahi hai sanskar has no sign of injury
Lakshay ap dp gets shocked swara and sujata smiles
Swara- mughe pehle hi patah ki mera pati aisa Kuch nahi kar Sakta ab batao ragini kyun jhoot bol rahi ho tum?
Ragini- hum koi jhoot nahi bol rahe
Swarasm - achha toh sanskaar ki injury kaha hai?
Sanskar starts to gain conscious
He sees swara and then these are the first words he heard from her
Swara- dekhliya aap sab nai aapki ladli bahu jhoot bol rahi hai mera pati Itani neech Aur ghenoni harkat nahi kar sakta
Swara sees sanskar looking at him and through her eyes assure him that she is with him he still does not know about ragini's vile allegations
Inspector - I think we should go for medical examination for both Mrs ragini and Mr sanskar and after the results accordingly we will decide whether Mrs ragini should go through lie detector test also or not
And the inspector leaves and ask one of his constable to be here till he sends the doctor
Lakshay ap and dp looks at ragini with disgust and leaves
Ragini runs behind lakshay to convince him
Sujata pats swara's head and joins her hands in front of her begging for forgiveness swara immediately forgive her and sujata also leaves
Swara sits beside sanskar with a thud and looks at him
She hugs him and starts crying and says I won't let anyone harm you sanskaar
Sanskaar - I know jhansi ki rani ab mughe chodo tumahare liye rumaal nikalna hai
Swara leaves him and looks at him and they both burst into pearls of laughter

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luvakanksha thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks a lot
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asha122

Superb yar...

Do write more...

Thanks a ton
As and when I get ideas I would share them as os definetly
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks a ton
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww this was soo cute..!😳 especially the end...where he says "ab mujhe chhodo tumhare liye rumaal nikalna hai" 😆
Amazingly written.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cintila

Aww this was soo cute..!😳 especially the end...where he says "ab mujhe chhodo tumhare liye rumaal nikalna hai" 😆

Amazingly written.😊

Thank you I really wish this happens
Ragini drama backfires and results in swasan romance
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvakanksha

Thank you I really wish this happens
Ragini drama backfires and results in swasan romance


Oh yes...i hope so too..!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice os. pls do write more😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww this was soo cute..!😳
End me acchi khasi serious situation to comedy bana diye...
wah wah...

Liked it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was superb...
End was so cute...
Loved it...

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