~Akdha Oneshots - Requested by fans~ #OS 8 in pg 22 - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Thank you guys for all the lovely comments.
Can't reply to all individually but I really appreciate your feedbacks on Once Upon An Essay.

Huge thanks goes to Bindu who requested this piece as it really was cute to write!!! 👏
XOXO 😳
Edited by VincyAnne - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Once again thank you for the lovely comments, I am glad you enjoyed Known Soul. 😃

Thanks Mital for the request. 😊

Thanks again guys!!! 🤗
Edited by VincyAnne - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow anne di its sooo cuteee!!!!!
awww how much i loved their chilhood bond...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Index in pg 1 below #OS 1 - Soulmate's Vow

Before I get further into this, I would like to apologise first. I am taking a couple of days away from IF. I am down with a fever, flu, cough and my freaking ears are blocked!!!😡 It's taking a toll of me and I can't seem to come out of any good ideas for the OS or HFL. I hope you guys understand and I will be back next Monday hopefully healthier with chapter 16 of HFL and if I get better within this week I may just update an OS for you. That's all.

Just got a call from mom saying that grandma is coming over for a few days.What a timing!!! It couldn't have got better. Poor grandma is going to be bored at home. 😭

This was requested by my darling Meera aka Meeramiss18. Request was to write a piece where Jodha is pregnant and having mood swings with Jalal fulfilling all her cute attics. So credit for idea goes to Meera while title and the elaboration is me. 😆 And as always the ending is my very own little touch. 😉

Be warned that this piece is quite short but I think it's just perfect unless you wanted more then sorry. 😛 And I will reply to all the previous comments once I get better. 😉

Sorry for any mistakes or if this doesn't make sense at all please know that it's the medicine talking and if it's normal then it's me. Put all the blame to the medication.🤣


It Was All Worth It

He never thought it would be this hard. Don't get him wrong, he is happy and excited that he is going to be a father in 10 months. But nothing could have prepared him for the mood swings his wife Jodha was to have.

At first he found the mood swings cute and enjoyed having Jodha ask him every little thing such as how does she look each day, how much he loves her and even asked him to not leave her side even for a second.

He loved her attention so much that he had pampered her with new clothes, buys her ice creams, mithaais and fulfill all of her craving even if it was in the middle of the night. Of course he did all these things willingly for she is carrying his child.

It was the least he could do for her for all the pain she was to have bringing his child into this world but as the months grew so did Jodha's grumpiness. She more than once complained how she had not wanted chocolate ice cream but raspberry ripple instead.

He clearly remembered her asking for chocolate ice cream but as he took the difficulty to find an ice cream parlor in the middle of the night and came back with it, she had dropped a bomb saying that she doesn't want chocolate but raspberry ripple flavor.

And then came the clothes she wore. He couldn't understand why Jodha had to ask for his opinion when all she does is pick the outfit that he didn't choose. He once asked her the reason behind her actions and guess what she said?! She told him that he had bad taste.

He couldn't believe his ears as just few months back she did everything he said and wore every outfit that he chose for her and now all of a sudden he has bad taste? Worse thing of all was when he tells her how beautiful she was when she asked him whether she was fat or not and he said no. She had not believed him.

Thinking that maybe she wanted him to say that she is in fact fat, he said yes you are fat although he thought to himself that it wasn't a big deal for it was prove that the baby was growing strongly. She had been so angry with him that it was a miracle that she kept him alive.

Who was he kidding, if his ammi had not come with a plate of freshly fried pakkoras, Jodha would have butchered him into minced meat. He loves her all the more now than before for now she showed him more of herself than she had on the initial days of their marriage.

Every day is filled with new discoveries with the baby coming soon and the excitement never seems to cease. Just a thought of their baby growing in his wife's womb is enough to push away all the tiredness away from him.

The only complain he has of this pregnancy are the decrease in the number of intimate moments with his wife. It's always either she's too tired or she doesn't feel like it. And when she does crave for some intimate something, which he is more than happy to oblige she falls asleep half way through it before he even finishes what she started leaving him hanging.

But now as he looks down upon his baby girl who was an exact carbon copy of her mother, he told himself that all these months have been worth it for his family was now finally complete.

Edited by VincyAnne - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow simply perfect... best title... it felt so real...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely concept😳,thanks to you and Meera😃
Take care Vincy,we'll wait for the updates.

Edited by Bindu_nhbr - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Cute os thanks for pm eagerly waiting for 16 chapter of hfl
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely os dear..jodha nd her mood swings r sooo cute...
jalal had to face a lot 🤣
get will soon dear...
nd then update...
nd thanks for pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Vincy my sweet heart🤗
A big hug for u my darling🤗
Thank u so much for taking my suggestion😊
moreover the way u hav written the os was extra ordinary jus the way I thought
it was simple cute and awesome👏
jo asked if she was fat or not when he said yes she almost killed him🤣
really enjoyed it to the core😊
take care of ur health dear
eagerly waiting for chp 16 of HFL
thanks for this cute os and pm darling😳
Love u so much❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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waoow vincy u r an amazing writer ..loved all your OS ... the more i read your OS ... the more i feel the want to read more & much more ...so keep writing !!! 👍🏼 & do not vanish from the forum like the other writers 😆

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