~Akdha Oneshots - Requested by fans~ #OS 8 in pg 22

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Sweetshruthi

@Sweetshruthi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#81

SHORT AND SWEET OS VINCY👏 JODHA'S PREGGY HORMONES😆 SUPERB TITLE AS USUAL IT WAS WORTH WAIT TRULY 😳 KUDOS T JALAL'S PATIENCE 😳 ENDING WAS JUST SUPERB 😛LOVED IT😳 THANKS TO MEERU LOVELY IDEA😊 GET WELL SOON N TAKE CARE VINCY 🤗 AWAITING FOR UR NEXT PM😳

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Avika444

@avika444

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Superb os dear
Sweet and simple
Nice idea meeru:-) :-)
Thanks for pm vincy :-) :-)

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lovespari

@lovespari

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#83

superb dear.. ur r amazing writer
read both os togethr n waana say tht thy r awesome n amazing lik both os.
but this one was jst simpy awesome cute n jst
beautyful. really loved it.
uff...jo pregnancy mood swing was superb .
n poor jalal she almst killd him...hehe amazing dear. ttittle is as usual great.
thank u soo much fr writting it n thanks meera fr idea of wonderful os.
take care vinncy n get well soon dear...
waiting fr ur nxt os n nxt chap HFL.
thanks u soo much fr pm 🤗

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Anamika sharma

@anu012

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#84

sweet & lovely os dear...

update nxt soon

thnks for pm...

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Dani

@erning_w

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#85

It's simply lovely OS dear..

Continue soon

And thank's for the pm Vincy 😊

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swriter

@swriter

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Poor jalal🤣. Nice os buddy plz continue dear

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Shinchan_20

@Shinchan_20

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Awww luvd it...jodha's cute tantrums and jalal's luv for her...most funny part was when jo said that u have a bad taste in clothes lol :-D
i was literally laughing hard..
Keep it up...god bless u
Waiting for the nxt part... :)

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nikki

@natashathakur

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Lovely os dr n thnxx for pm

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Aditi

@Phulchukki

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#89

Oh wow again a sweet os. It was short but at the same time a perfect one describing all the problems happijalal every feeling of jalal starting from his excitement and ending with emotional touch of their daughter. It was perfect one. Thanks for the pm and get well soon .

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Namita

@155pari

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#90

Awesome update vincy... You portrayed the mood swings og jodha really well... From her food to her clothes everything was perfect... Loved it... Thanx for the pm...