New SS: HAUNTED LOVE; Chap 4 on pg 24;(09/10)

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WELCOME FRIENDS...

HAPPY JANMASHTAMI AND NOT TO FORGET HAPPY TEACHERS DAY TO ALL MY BELOVED DEARIES...

No no no... Aaarrgghhh... Sorry guys, but can't help it.. [P.S. Please read the whole thing before reacting...]

I have stopped myself for long, but can't do it any longer... So here people, I have something new for you guys. Now I know, I'm already loaded with other stories, but believe me this one is very special to me... Why, will be revealed below.. After reading the prologue, Please read the NOTE below.. It is IMP..

Those who knows me, they would know, I love everything, which is different and unique.. And believe me my friends, this one is totally different..

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Prologue:

"Hello..", a male voice, said sweetly.

A girl in her mid twenties, was sitting on the chair infront of him, with head bowed down, and hands clasped together.

"So, are you going to introduce yourself?!?", he asked her.

"I'm Geet.", she said, quietly.

"Hi, Geet. I'm Dr. Neil Bannerjee.. I'm a Psychiatrist.. You know, why you're here?!?", he asked.

Geet looked at him and said, "Coz my husband thinks, I'm mad.."

Neil shakes his head in negative, "No, coz he loves you, and wants to cure you.. Does he loves you?!?"

Geet just nodded her head in acceptance. So he asked further, "Are you depressed?!?"

Geet just nodded again.

Neil: "Your husband told me, that you're getting nightmares these days... Are they the reason of your torment?!?"

She said nothing, but nodded again. "Will you share, what is it?!?"

Geet went still, with it. Neil noticed the change in her behavior. He said, "I can help you Geet.. If you share it with me, then maybe I could help you.."

Geet shakes her head vigorously in negative, "No.. None can help me.. None.. But if I tell you, then you'll think I'm mad.. None can help me.."

Neil: "No I won't think you as mad.. Believe me.. Please Geet, let me help you.."

Geet still continued to deny, but then Neil, continued pestering her, with his sweet words, and lastly said, "Atleast do it for your husband Geet.. He loves you a lot, and can't see you going through all this. Please try and tell me.. For him.. I'll try my best to help you out."

Geet looked at him for a while, and said, "I... I used to get nightmares before too, bu.. but from few days, HE's closer than ever... HE... He said.. He said, that he's coming.. HE's coming to take me with him..", she said gasping for air.

Neil: "HE?!?! He who?!?", he asked calmly.

Geet lowered her eyes, "My first husband.."

Neil frowned with the new information, and asked, "What is his name?!?"

Geet looked at him in a flash, and said, "AYUSH.. His name was Ayushman Ankit Singh.."

Neil: "So is that the problem?!??! You're scared that he's coming back to your life..."

Geet shakes her head, "No... No he can't come back... He can't.."

Neil: "Why can't he, Geet?!?!"

Geet still shaking her head said, "He just can't..", this time with tears flowing through her eyes..

Neil raised his voice a bit, and asked sternly, "Why can't he, Geet?!?"

"Coz, he's already DEAD...", she shouted at the top of her voice, and started sobbing into her hands, and just whispered, "HE CAN'T COMEBACK, COZ HE'S DEAD."

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Genre: HORROR(a bit atleast..), and Passion.

Huaahhaaa... Yah... Laga n zor ka jhatka.. Yup the Genre of this story is Horror..

NOTE:

Guys, this story is very special to me.. I don't know how many of you're gonna like it... An advice in advance... This story is NO REGULAR MAANEET LOVESTORY... We're already having lots of them around ourselves.. Lets taste a different flavor..Actually don't consider it as a lovestory, but a STORY, then it would be easier. Maybe you all may think, it is also same like other stories, and maybe you're right... But it didn't seem the same to me..

Please, guys.. Just for once, in this story take Maan and Geet as simple individuals, and not our Lifeline Maaneet... Both the characters have their fare share in the story, along with the third character, i.e. Geet's 1st husband..

This story is a fight for love. Fight between two people, who loves a single girl, madly. And it is our journey to find whose LOVE won over all the difficulties. But the story takes us on a Haunted ride, where Geet's 1st husband is already dead.

AYUSHMAN a guy, whom you may consider as a third wheel in Maaneet lovestory, but people, it's his LOVE. And just coz we love Maaneet as a couple we can't ignore his love. It's his Love, where we'll see, to what extent one goes for his Love.

Now those, who are not Geetians... Friends, this story is about a simple girl, with haunted life.. I asked you to read it whole coz, maybe you likes it, and wants to read further.. If not then too, it's OK..

Ok ,don't think it is similar to Beyond Death, in any way... No, it is not coz, it is different from it in many ways, you'll soon know how...

Friends, this will be a very short SS.. Maybe 10-15 shots, that's it. Or maybe, it would be over, before 10 too. Each part will contain some intriguing thing in it, which will held onto you.. Ok, now I'm being over confident..

Sorry for that, but this story is like that, only. I don't know how many of you are going to read and love it. But I'll expect all of you to give it a chance, and if it disappoint you, then you may leave it..

ISHQ, will be on hold, till I complete this one, and maybe Beyond Death too.. But I'll try to update those too..

A request.. Although there are less chances, but if anyhow, the storyline, or any scenes you read here, are same as any other story you have read... Then please inform me, through comment or PM..

Ok, enough of my bakbak.. Now come on tell me how did you liked it..

And people, please tell me, who all are ready to go on this horror ride?!?

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Thank you for reading... Waiting for your response...

DO LIKE AND COMMENTS...

BUDDY ME FOR PMs...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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INDEX:

Prologue: above
Character Sketch: below
Chapter 1: page 7
Chapter 2 : page 12
Chapter 3 : page 18
Chapter 4 : page 24
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CHARACTER SKETCH:

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GEET KHURANA:

A simple girl, whose life changes drastically, after an incident. Once a bubbly, and a complete chatterbox, is now a complete introvert, and always scared girl. Married to Mr. Maan Singh Khurana, and loves him a lot. But her 1st and true love remained her 1st husband.

AYUSHMAN ANKIT SINGH (DEAD):

An aggressive and ruthless man. He was married to Geet, whom he loves to the extent of madness. His every emotion for Geet is over the top. Overpossesive, overprotective, overobsessed... Well, is there any such word?!?! Me, thinking...

Now, he's Dead... How??! Hehe, suspense..

MAAN SINGH KHURANA:

Geet's 2nd husband, and her 2nd love. Although, he wasn't very happy with this wedding, but now is madly in love with his wife. Doesn't know, anything about, Ayush. How?!?! Ye v suspense..

Have got a betrayal from his 1st wife (Divorced), Pari Mehra, hence little apprehensive in case of trusting people, but very good at heart. Wants to help his wife to come out of the torment, she's going through, but doesn't know how to...

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Ok friends... These three are the main characters in this story. There will be other character coming and going in the scenes, but only these 3 are the main concern. Others are just passing and supporting characters, so no need to focus on them, much..

How is it, then?!?!

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Interesting and different Story

I am loving it and excited to read next updates

How can ayush comeback?? 😲

Maan dint know about him?? 😲

All the best for this new story dear 👍🏼



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Oye RES, krke kahan bhaag gyi?!?1
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its intersting
i am fan of love triangle
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Originally posted by: zariya123

its intersting
i am fan of love triangle




Me too.. Maza ayega..
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Originally posted by: DIGVIPAUL



Oye RES, krke kahan bhaag gyi?!?1



I dint want anyone else to comment 1st on ur posts when i am online 😃

So i am reserving it 😉

I am selfish 😃 when it comes to commenting first
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Interesting ... Looking forward to read more
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very intersting d different concept very much excited for d update

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