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Originally posted by: Asheley



I dint want anyone else to comment 1st on ur posts when i am online 😃

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Good going sissy... Lage raho..
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Hey friends... A heartfelt Thank you to all for such a warm response... This story is strictly based on illusions.. So people who tries to find logic in everything (like me..), guys you may have to keep that thing aside here.. Paranormal things can include anything but LOGIC.. So bear me, if you find anything going from above your head..

And lastly.. This story is short, and will continue to give you Jhatkas, at every possible place... Hope you all will be their supporting the story till the end.. And yah, I don't know, how well I would be able to portray the horror scenes... So, if I make mistakes, toh ye sochke maaf krdena, ki ladki avi learning process me h..

Alright, let's get into business... Enjoy people.

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Chapter: 1

Run.. Run.. Run.. Run faster.. Don't turn back.. Just don't turn back and run as fast as u can... These all thoughts were the only thing which is going on in her mind.. She's running in the field, away from THAT place.. Away from HIM.. And HE's after her.. She's running as fast as she can, so that she doesn't get caught.. After running for some more time, she turned back to find that she's all alone in the field and there's none around, or behind her..

She can see the boundary wall, from where starts her freedom, she at once, ran towards it. But soon falls on the ground, and next she felt like something or rather say someone has caught hold of her leg and dragging her towards it... She can see that, the distance between the boundary wall and her is increasing.. She tries to struggle, but no amount of struggling is helping her.. Suddenly, the person stopped.

Geet tried to crawl ahead, but all of a sudden she felt like a huge body falls upon her like sack. She stopped her movements. Her whole body is having goosebumps in fear, and breathing have become raged..

Soon she felt, someone's breathe falling on her ears. It was as cold as ice. Her body stilled in reaction, and her eyeballs started moving frantically.

"Running away from me Geet?!? You can't... I'm coming back to you Geet... This time to take you with me.. Away from the whole world.. With me... Just both of us Geet... I'M COMING BACK.", the voice whispered in her ears, making her blood freeze in her nerves, in fear. She was turned upright in a flash, and then all she could see around is darkness...

Aaarrrggghhh...

Aaahhh... Aaarrrggghhh... Aaahhh...

She sat on her bed in a second, screaming at the top of her voice. Her eyes squeezed shut, and her ears were covered with her palm. She's huffing and puffing as if she has ran, thousand miles...

Suddenly, the lights of the room, were on, and Maan rushed in through the door, in hurry. He was working in his study room, when he heard her scream. Worried, he at once ran towards their room, and here she was sitting on the bed, with her knees drawn close to her chest, eyes shut, and ears covered with her palm, shouting and screaming, with tears flowing through her cheeks.

He rushed towards her, and sat beside her.. He tried to remove her hands from her ears, but she remained adamant. "Geet ... Geet... Open your eyes Geet... I'm here.. Geet look I'm here.. Geet, baby look. Geet GEET.."

But she's nowhere near stopping. So he forcefully, removed her hands, and pulled her towards himself, shaking her, and shouted, "GEET.. LOOK AT ME.."

Geet was startled by this, and looked at him, with scared fearful, teary eyes. She was looking like a 5 year old kid, who was locked in a dark room, for hours, as a punishment. Tear strieked face and eyes, messy hairs, clothes ruffled, raging breathes, quivering lips, as if ready to cry any moment. The fear and innocence dripping from her face, gave Maan's heart a painful squeeze.

He cups her face, with a sorry face, and lovingly caresses her forhead with his thumb and softly said, "Geet baby.. Look I'm here.. Don't worry I'm here.. You're safe.. Hmmm.. Don't worry."

Geet break into sobs, as if waiting for his words only. She wraps her arms around his neck and hides her face in his chest, with more tears flowing through her eyes. Maan, in exchange hugs her more close, and pats her head, assuring her of his presence.

"Ssshhh.. I'm here OK.. Don't worry.. I'm here.", he whispered in her ears, and kissed her hair.

Geet hides herself more into his embrace, and continued sobbing..

After sometime..

Geet is sleeping on the bed, as the sleeping pills have shown its effect. Maan is sitting by her side, caressing her hair with one hand, and the other one is in Geet's hold. She held on to his hands, to assure herself of his presence. Maan is looking at her sleeping form, and remembers her words from few moments ago, "HE's coming back Maan.. He's coming back.. For the first time, he have caught hold of me, in my nightmares.. He's very close Maan.. He's coming back."

Those words were, ringing in his ears, till now. From the morning session of treatment, he knows, she must be talking about AYUSH, her 1st husband.. But how, come he never knew, that she's married before.. You're too ignorant, towards her, at the starting, Maan.. Did you forget that?!?'. his heart said.

But her family, never gave any inklings towards this issue?!? How come her family is so ignorant towards it?!?!', his heart questioned.

Does it matter now?!?! Try, and help, Geet, to come out of this regular torment.. It is becoming unbearable.', his heart answered.

True.. These nightmares, and Geet's torment is nothing new.. At first, he's ignorant, to her and everything related to her, but from the time, their relation improved, he has seen her suffering. At the starting he took it casually, but it never ceased down, but gotten worse. But one thing which he noticed is... She never gets nightmares, when she sleeps, in his arms..

He doesn't care about Past, of both His, or Geet's.. He just wants his wife to have a normal and happy life.. He just wants to take her away from all these pains... But HOW?!?! How, is the question here...

Huh... Maybe, his question, will be answered in the next session, with Neil tomorrow.. Thinking so, he slept, beside Geet, taking her in his arms, close to his heart.

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Next day..

"Hey Geet.. Hey Maan.. How r u both?!?!", Neil smiled at them brightly.

Maan returned the gesture, saying "Hello" to him, but Geet settled with just a slight nod. Geet's mind is still clouded, with last night's dream.. She can feel the change in the air around her, and she knows, what all these are pointing at. All the mishaps which happened from the morning is giving the message that, the storm is not far away..

"So, Geet.. We would continue from, where we left yesterday. What say?!?! Please settle down.", he said gesturing her to take a seat. Geet did as she was told.

"Maan.. Ummm, please..", he said giving hint to leave the room. "Yah..", Maan started to leave the room, but couldn't as Geet caught hold of his hands, looking at him with pleading eyes.

Maan doesn't know, what to do, so Neil came as saviour for him and said, "Maan, you may stay, if Geet wants.. Will you be comfortable in speaking everything in Maan's presence Geet?!?!"

Geet nodded her head, quietly, and Maan settled beside her taking her both hands in his hold, giving her the much needed strength..

"So Geet.. Yesterday, you told me that you're getting nightmares about your 1st husband, who's no more in this world.", he stopped to observe her expressions, which remained blank, and then continued, "Will you tell us about it?!?!"

Geet without looking at him, replied, "What do you want to know!??!"

Neil sat at the edge of the chair, "Everything Geet.. Everything you could remember. Everything you could tell us Geet. I'm here to help you, and I can't do it, without knowing everything. Tell me from starting .From, where you could remember."

Geet gave him a mocking smile and said, "Remember?!?! For remembering, you need to forget them.. I can never Forget those moments.. Never ever .However it was, those were the most beautiful days of my life .How can I ever forget it?!?!"

Maan's heart gave a painful squeeze at those words.. He knows, how madly, he's in love with Geet, and hearing about her happy moments, spent with some other Man, and that too her 1st husband, is definitely painful for him. But still he would sit there. For Geet..

And here Geet, oblivious to Maan's turmoil, gets lost in her past... "4 years back.. I was studying in NY. I was a bright student, carefree, bubbly, full of life.. Loves to make friends, and hanging out with them. My parents have given me freedom, to make decisions of life, yet I never took advantage of it.. When my last semester got over, I decided to visit my grandparents...", she took a deep breathe, pausing for a while. Maan pressed her hands slightly, providing her courage, to speak further..

She closed her eyes, and said, "That is the decision which changed my life. Yet, I still can't convince myself to call it a wrong decision, on which I should regret, but I don't.. I don't regret my decision to go there.. I don't know why?!?! But I can't.."

When she doesn't speak for few more second, Neil asked, "What happened, Geet?!?!"

She comes out of her reverie, and said, "My parents have broken their ties, from my grandparents. I never got the chance to visit them, as my parents have stopped visiting them, even before my birth and the tiffs never let my grandparents to do so.. We lived in a city all our life , and they remained in the village. I thought this is the time, to repair those broken ties, and made my way towards HOSHIARPUR. The place, where my grandparents lives .The place, where it all happened .The place which changed my life.."

"What had happened there Geet?!?!", Neil asked.

Geet looked at him for few moments, and then started again, "I started from Delhi, and decided to drove till the destination, myself. I found that, adventurous..", she laughed mockingly, and then suddenly became all serious, "When somehow, I was near the destination, the brakes of my car failed, and to control it, my car breaks through something, which seemed like a boundary wall. My car got smashed with a tree, and I lost my conciousnous, after sometime. Last I saw, that someone's blurry figure was rushing towards me, and then, I found myself getting lost into darkness..."

She continued, "When, I get consciousness, I found myself in a room. A nicely decorated room, rather. Few people were sitting around me, and an old lady, caressing my head, and an old man sitting beside me holding my hands in his hold. The old lady, knew my name, and when asked she told me, that she came to know through my passport. They were my grandparents. I was so happy that for few moments, I forgot everything else. After all, I'm meeting them for the 1st time, and they were the sole reason, of my visit. And here, I'm finally, getting their love and care... When I regained my reverie, I asked about my car. They told me, that it blasted, and only my 1 bag could be taken out. I wanted to know about the person who saved me. Who came like an angel to save me.. And then they told me about HIM... Ayush... The person, who turned my live upside down .AYUSHMAN ANKIT SINGH.."

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So here we came to an end of 1st chappy.. I know, this chap is not scary, but it was required dearies.. In horror I may not be able to get good remarks, but yah... There will be suspense, and twist and turn in the story... That I promise.

Precap:

Ayushman Ankit Singh's entry, and the MEGA SUSPENSE, or you may call it TWIST.. A HUGE ONE.. Dimag fir jaega, I promise..

So tell me, if you enjoyed this one.. And one more thing, it is not TRAGIC.

Thank you for reading... Waiting for your response...

DO LIKE AND COMMENT...

BUDDY ME FOR PMs...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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That dream is so scary

I would have cried alot if i get like that dreams

Maan was hurt listening about her 1st husband but he supported her

Feeling difference in air??😭 girl you are scaring me 😭

Hope maan saves his geet from that ghost
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hmmm ..
Good ...
Waise scary hone se mujhe jyada problem nahi thi .. but darr lag raha tha...
:-[
All this ..
kind of weird ..
I mean Geet Maan se pyar nahi karti kya...
aur agar Ayush itna hi accha tha to uski spirit kaise buri ban gayi...
waiting for next part...
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Originally posted by: nitika20

Hmmm ..
Good ...
Waise scary hone se mujhe jyada problem nahi thi .. but darr lag raha tha...
:-[
All this ..
kind of weird ..
I mean Geet Maan se pyar nahi karti kya...
aur agar Ayush itna hi accha tha to uski spirit kaise buri ban gayi...
waiting for next part...




Sab avi bata dnge, to next update me kya dnge.. Have patience deary.. Sab pta chal jaega.. Waise nice observation..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update dear. Poor geet 😭 Feeling very bad for geet .Waiting for next plzz update soon. Thabkxx for pm dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome start. Geet is suffering from nightmares about her first husband. Waiting to read more😉
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part 1
scary starting...for 1st time in geet's nightmare Ayush is able to catch geet...
maan is worried seeing geet's torment state...
he is also fighting with himself for why he never knew about geet's 1st husband...but he also gave reason for that too as he was uninterested in geet n thing related to her at 1st...
geet is telling how she met Ayush n how life changed...maan is feeling pain hearing geet spent beautiful time with her 1st husband...
waiting to see is it the same boundary which geet smashed 1st time n now seeing in her dream!!!
what changed ayush from angel to a nightmare...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing one. Geet again saw the same dream but this time it's extended and ayush held geet tightly. N again she shrieked and maan came running to her hearing that. Maan engulfed her in his arms and tries to sooth her but her torment is not so easy to go. Maan again took her to Neil who asked geet to continue her story. So this story started from hoshiyarpur where Geet's maternal grand later live. Ayush saved Geet's life. I am thinking about maan who was jealous when geet said that she never regretted about her past as with ayush she lived beautiful moments. Although I know maan will support geet but if hearing Geet's love life with ayush made maan insecure than might be it would not be good for maneet relationship. Waiting for next dear
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Congrats for the new story
Awesome prologue

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