Arakshi FF - ll Humari Adhoori Kahani ll Chapter 2 10/10 Pg.5

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Avantika

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

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Posted: 10 years ago

Dear Avni,

This is the first time I want to comment without the usual tom foolering *giggles*

Solely because I feel I would disrespect your [this] work. What you have done, is yet again another world of anguish or may I call it as addictive anguish and as a loyal reader of your works I think that this one really needs a serious comment on it.

What I really liked was the beginning, the fact that how you attached his loss with not only to the woman who unknowingly bore his heart but also to the team.

What he meant for the team. After several months do I recollect the passion ETF had; the passion in each and every member of the team.

The raw pain literally reflects out of those words.

So much that I almost thought if everything's good at your end? It was too real...

The end made me lose the little remaining wits I had. It's 1:30 in the morning here and I can barely sleep.

What have you done to them? Sigh.. your words leave a deadly impact.

Fie that man who says actions speak louder than words!

I don't think I have to say this, par aadat ho chuki hai - beautiful work.. and continue soon.

Loads of love!

- Shree

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

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Posted: 10 years ago

Now what would SSG be without drama and some action?

Oh yeah... that's the full-sh form. SSG... kind of rings a bell with KKG [the woman who's actions are mortifyingly close to mine in bouts of madness!]

So just to appreciate your work more, these were the expressions I had on realising your work.

(If you don't see a gif assume that IF has gobbled it up like a hungry khushi eating jalebis while I posted this)

# 1 Ohooo... new story *the greedy mind happy*

# 2 And here Arjun is... OMG

# 3 No... let me READ AGAIN... he is DEAD!!! NAHIII

# 4 Impossible, Avni ji hai na... he will resurrect from somewhere! See there are more paragraphs! KKG ka Devi Maiyya aur meri Avni ji, same to same ji!

# 5 Eat Jalebis and keep cool - the last line is left

# 6 Ab toh definitely Arjun will rise... but from where?

# 7 Ab bhi living ka hope kyun nahi????? No Avni ji, she can't give us dil tutiya effect! Dhokebaaz!

# 8 No no no no no no... what do you mean by death anniversary!!! No bangles... no non non nooo

# 9 I have lost my hope, his death seems confirmed... *breaking bangles*

# 10 Why isn't there any Arnav ji here... *sob* kash koi sambhal leta iss rudali ko *sob*

# 11 Ab Sakshi bhi? *the pain ending* Acceptance of defeat!

Edited by IArmageddonI - 10 years ago

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 10 years ago

Resss for ur sautann 😎

I know I took my time.. but finally I am here!

I think I must have fallen a million times after looking at the trailer, and then the heart-stopping banner and title. Oh God. The title. Sautaaannn u keeeled me with the title. I think I could stare for days on end at that title and dream

Coming back to the prologue.

That.

Took.

My.

Breath.

Away!

Pehle hi chapter mein hotwa gone. Wah! Always expect the unexpected when it comes to u🤪

I cried... even though I knew what was going to happen... and then I was drooling over what you told me☺️

Anywaay...

I am being serious.. I felt broken after I read the prologue... every single line u wrote touched me deep.. especially the way he died.

"There had been trails of his bloodied fingers on her arms.." God.. why why why... it haunted me, Sautan.. and I mean it. Especially the line u wrote about the bangles...

There's ASD, there's "Love me like you do" and there's this... I am being really weird but what contrasting situations u created with that prop! 😲

Aaand then u killed her too🥺

The last few lines gave me goosebumps sautann..🥺 Why why why do u do this to me? Whyy.

Khair ... I shall wait patiently *grits teeth* for the next update *secretly and selfishly praying that you update soon*

I shouldn't say the usual .. beautiful update.. it doesn't do justice to this adhoori kahani ki shuruat! I am going back to drooling over those two perfect VMs now☺️

Keeel me.

Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 10 years ago

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anushka

@arakshifan

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Posted: 10 years ago

Yayyy new arakshi fanfic!!!

Plzzz pm me...well u did, but dont stop😆

And is arjun actually dead...?

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

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Posted: 10 years ago

WHAT??
Arjun Suryakant Rawte breaths his last.
That's not true, right?
You didn't just kill him, even if you did he'll come back at some point of time coz you love him as much as we do, no?
I still haven't read the full story.
Just been through this teaser and hoping that there will be some happy news in the blog.
Will be back after reading the complete chapter.

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sashashyam

@sashashyam

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Posted: 10 years ago

My dear Avantika,

The opening verse about writing a name in the sand filled me with a sense of impending doom, and then, a few lines below, there it was. Arjun had breathed his last!

I really do not understand why you have to wallow in raw anguish like this, FF after FF. It is as if you have become a female version of Devdas, unable to believe in simple love and simple happiness. Snap out it my dearest girl, you are too good a writer to become a tragedy queen!

Shyamala Aunty

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Shreya

@shreya09

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Posted: 10 years ago

speechless !!!!!!! 👏

but... not fair Avantika 😭

the chapter was filled with sooo much guilt, pain, anguish & sorrow...

Arjun is really dead ?? 😭

the condition of the entire ETF team was extremely painful.

i am actually scared to read the upcoming chapters. (but obviously i cant help it... i can never stop reading these masterpieces! )

well... brilliant writing it was . excellent 👍🏼

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 10 years ago

#10

So hot blooded mortal is no more to give glares and cardiac arrests.I am not disappointed,angry or shocked.I love that you have rose above physical earthly lovers and chose something about mysticism and spiritual enlightenment.Hope that you provide many more chapters exploring the other characters while the male lead is resting at some far away corner.Awaiting for the forthcoming with eagerness and excitement.Hope you stick to the title and turn it into plaintive piece.😊