MaNan FF- me and u(chapter 15-pg 91)(abhi toh journey suru hui hai)

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CHAPTER-1-PG1

CHAPTER 2

CHAPTER 3

CHAPTER 4

CHAPTER5

chapter 6

chapter 7

CHAPTER 8A

CHAPTER 8B

CHAPTER 9

CHAPTER 10

CHAPTER 11A

CHAPTER 11B & 12A

CHAPTER 12B

CHAPTER 13=PG 83

Chapter 14= pg 89

INTRODUCTION

Manik and Nandini know each other from the age of 8 years, but they have seen each other only twice. Once, when for the first time Nandini had accompanied her parents on the weakly dinner between the murttys and the malhotras. And last time before Nandini had left India and went abroad for her studies till 12th. Here, Nandini and manik's parents know each other from many years and are distinct relatives and bestest friends. The whole city knows about their friendship.

Now, in present Nandini is back to India after 10 years, she is of 18 years and Manik is of 20 years. Nandini's parents have sent her to the same college were manik studies- S.P.A.C.E. here. In space manik's gang is FAB5. All are same but here, KaVya, DhruvLya and AryUkti are together. And, one more little sa secret is Manik na...hehe...he had fallen for Nandini when for the first time he had seen her. And, when Nandini left India, he was very sad but, his parents... he told them about his little secret, coz he loves them very much and vice versa... They have given him all information about her.

STORY STARTS

Its Nandini's first day in India. It 6 am in the morning and as per her routine Nandini is up and after wearing her normal jogging suit she went for her daily work out. Here, Mr. Malhotra, who didn't got up before 10 am has got up at 5:30 am and has gone out for exercise. His parents are not actually surprised coz they know the reason ;)

Both reach the park, Nandini is playing with the children in the park and Manik is doing his Favorite exercise, watching the beauty in front of him. She knows that Manik is watching her, but, she keeps ignoring him... but, inside her heart is doing salsa.(Accha ...accha..ok ... I m telling u... even our sweet si Nandini loves our manik..;)

She do her work out and leaves at 7 am. He also leaves after her. When he reaches home, his parents starts teasing him... (U knows normal human personality)...

NIYO= wahh ... hamara beta kuch zyada hi jaldi nahi aa jaya, mujhe toh laga tha ki yeh maharaj toh aapna ghar bhul jaya hinge aur Nandini ke hi ghar pe chale jaayenge...

MR. MALHOTRA= waisa aap sahi kah rahi ho,, mujke bhi kuch aisa hi laga tha

Manik had became a tomato after listening this

MANIK= mom , dad stop it na, pleaseee

NIYO= arre hame suru hi kaha kiya hai jo stop kare

MR. MALHOTRA= niyo tum jaara ek tomato le ke aao toh mujhe dekhna hai ki mera beta zyada lal ho raha ya who tamatar

Manik couldn't handle all the teasing and he just leave from there

NIYO= arre beta ruk break fast kar le

MANIK+=ma mai college mai karunga.

He takes a shower and wears a white tee, dark blue trousers and brown leather jacket. He puts on his brown aviators and goes down ignoring his parents teasing he wishes them and leaves for college in his BMW.

Here, Nandini also gets ready in a dark blue skirt, simple lose tee which exposed her waist and neck region. She puts a brown coat on top nad after meeting her parents she leave for the her 1st day in the new college in her BMW. Both MaNan reach at the same time. They park there carsin oppo directions. When both turn after parking the car Manik is dumbstruck to see nandini , coz she was looking ehernal in that simple dress...BEAUTIFUL... Only this word escapes frm his mouth. Nandini was already in his spell but on listening what he sid ahe starts blushing and starts looking her and there.

But.. but.. u know na bina manik ka frnds ke kaya hoa sakta hai... his frnds reach at the same time.. they see him lost in Nandini and Nandini blushing. ...(PS LOG manik's frnd also know about his not so SECRETIVE secret. )They understand the situation and smirk and wink among each other. Cabir hops on manik to bring him out of his nandini world.

CABIR= hey bro was sup??!!

MANIK= wo.. I mean.. haan.. who ..

MUKTI= aree usne sirf wassup pucha hai Kbc ka question nahi jot u itna stammer kar raha hai

ALYA= hai .. aur manik tum yah ape kaisi

DHRUV= alya samne dekho aur yeh mat pucho kaisi yeh puccho ki yeh yaha par kya kar raha hai

MANIK= kya parking me.. me who .. car.. haan.. car park kar raha tha

ARYAMAN= accha mujhe nahi pata tha ki car park karne mai 30 mins lagte hai

MUKTI= (make a look as if she saw nandini right then) hey manik yeh who NANDINI HAI NA.. tere dad ke bst frnd ki beti

All look at Nandini who was till now blushing she looks at them ignoring manik and smiles at them and gives a nod in acknowledgement. Alya , navy and mukti hop on her.

ALYA= hey gal, I m alya saxena nd ...(pointing to dhruv.). he is dhruv my finance

CABIR= I m cabir..(pointing to all)...mukti, navya, aryaman anddd this isss

He stops at manik only to receive a deathly glare as he knows why his frnds are behaving like this,,

MANIK= I m manik.. manik Malhotra , hope u remember

Nandini for 1st time looks at manik nd

NANDINI= of course I remember..

They share a cute nd chotu sa eye lock.. which is broken when alya notices there alike dress..

ALYA= hey mukti notice that both these people have worn the same color dress

MUKTI= yah u r actualyyy rrrighttt

CABIR= wah .. lagta hai dono ne phone pe decide kar ke dress pehna hai

Both manan starts blushing on the compliment cum teaser

NANDINI=who guys, I will meet u later I have an imp work in princs' office bye

And sparing a last glance to manik, she went running from there as soon as possible, giving none a chance to tease her more. Manik saw her going till she disappeared, then he turned towards his frnds. All his frnds look at each other , then in nandini's direction and then at manik and all brust out in laughter. Manik gives an angry glare to all of them, but they were least bothered about it.

MANIK= saalo bahuut hasi aa rahi hai , haan?

CABIR= hasi nahi who teri nandini who phasi,,

MUKTI= haan yaar tune dekha kaisa bullet train ki speed se bhagi...

CABIR= bhagegi na aap apne iss lover boy ko use itne intensely dekhte dhek kar koi bhi bhag ja ija

Manik starts blushing hearing this.

MANIK= chalo abhi aapne teasing session ko pause karo aur class ka time ho jaaya hai , jaldi chalo.

They all agree to him. They reach inside the class and sit on there places, they were ragging the freshers when the teacher entered.

TEACHER= hello children meet ur new classmate nandini murtty.

Fab4 smile among each other looking at manik who was blushing hearing her name

NANDINI= hi guys...(looking at manik and fab4)... Iii am nandini murtty, nice to meet u

Manan look at each other and share an eyelock which is broken by cabir's coughing.

TEACHER= nandini u can sit be

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It's amazing! Plz continue soon
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Seriously its an awsome start loved the way manik and nandini wore the same colour dresses

and ya obliviously the way maniks parent and friends teased both manan

and lagta he nandini ke cheeks ab tak permanently red ho gaye honge itna blush kar-kar ke huh? 😆

Aur teacher ne bhi donno ko ek sath huh?

Aur nandini ka dhyaan nahi lag raha lecture par obvio kaise hoga humare manik baba unhe aise ghur ghur kar dekhenge toh yehi hoga na hehehe...

Aur thanks for this lovely os aur ha plss continue soon and do pm me for the next part

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Nyc start... Liked the story ...👏
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Good start.
Blushing manan
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Awwwe...!! Soo cute and awsome update...concept is nice...plzzz cont soon...
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Cool mom and dad!!! And Manan love!!! ❤️ it's written so beautifully yaar! Loved it!
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NICE CONCEPT
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