MaNan FF- me and u(chapter 15-pg 91)(abhi toh journey suru hui hai) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Hey nice story dear.. I jst read ur chapter1 and promo.. Interesting.. They know each other from childhood.. And manik parents know abt his love and fab 5 too.. It's gonna be very much interesting.. Hey I have added u to my buddy list. Pls pm mme too.. Thank you.. Take care..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting promo...can't wait for it...continue soon...keep up the good work...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Interesting
Plz pme me hamesha whn u update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Nice concept... I just read ur 1 chapter and promo and it was very nice...I have added u in the buddy list...plz do pm me too...plz thank u...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTRE=2

Manik and his frnds entered the canteen and sat on there usual. But...but...mr. malhotra was searching for something ..or shold I say someone;)(u know who right!!!!!!!)

Our rj cabira saw this he signally told to others about manik's restlessness. All looked at each other and gave an under wrap smile..

CABIR= innayat ho gayi hai intezar ki ...jaane kaha ho aap ab tak

Manik looked at cabir as he very well knew what he meant...he gave cabir a scartic look...

MANIK= abbe o...the great galiab saab...yeh faltu ke sher marna band kar ...joker ka aapna job chor kar ab dirty shayar bannae ka shauk hai ...madhubala ke pyar me phela hi devdas toh hai hi aur kuch baaba hai tujhe kya!!

Navya who was enjoying till now glares manik and cabir stops with a halt

CABIR= yaar devdas kaun hai who bhi kisk e pyaar me who toh sab dekh sakte hai...toh tu aapne pe dhyaan de...waisa mujhe iss pe ek sher yaaad yaad..irshhad karu

Aryaman and dhruv togrther"irssaad!!irsaad

CABIR= ha toh gaur farmaiye...nannddinnii ke pyar me manik itna dhassa ke hamara hot hunk man devdas bana

All= wah!!wah!!

MANIK= aacha!! Ruk abhi baata hu devds aur uski devdasni kaun hai

And saying this he runs behind cabir and cabir rruns in canteen to save his life ..but..suddenly the door opens and manik also stop(guess karo kaun hai;)

He goes back to his seat and cabir sees this and then looks at the door and understands everything looks at others and they brust out in laughter,...getting g glare from manik and confused face from nandini, who entered just now..she goes near them for onc glances at manik and then ask

NANDINI= guys tumlog hass kyu rahe ho!!

ALYA= arre kuch nahi bass joke yaad aa gaya!

NANDINI= accha even I wanna hear it

MUKTI= are nandini tum who choro aur chalo lets play something ..let me think...

Ummm... lets play truth nd dare

CABIR= good idea!!! Nandu will u play with us?

NANDINI= ammm... yah I m in

All sit in circle on a round table!!

Alya rotates the bottle and it lands on herself

ALYA= kya yaar!! Iss bottle ko bhi mujhe pe hi rukna tha!!

ARYAMAN= chalo baby doll ab bolo truth ya dare??

ALYA= ummm.. truth!!!

DHRUV= so I will ask!!

All look at him and then alya

DHRUV= umm...alya before us did u love someone??

Alya gives a evil smrk

ALYA= a.. yah

DHRUV- and who is that

ALYA= who hai...

She gets up and wraps her hands around dhruv's shoulder and says"it's u only idiot"

Druv become happy and kisses her cheek while she blushes

CABIR= ahem..ahem..lovelies abhi game resume katre hai

Cabir rotaes the bottle and it lands on nandini ..nandin I curshes her fate but had no option while all smirk except manik

CABIR= so nand thruth or dare??

NANDINI=um... dare!!

CABIR=oh so u r daring then !!

He thinks for sometime and then

CABIR= u have to dance with him...And ya the dance should be on song of our rapping king...

ALYA= and if u can't do this then u r in our TOFF list...

CABIR= and if u do this u ll be the only one in our F3 list and also in a list where u already r but oofficially also from then u ll be in LLOM...

NANDINI= 1st tell me with whom I have to dance!!!!!

CABIR=arre him!

And points towards,... manik malhotra

NANDINI= do I have a choice

All look at her and then at manik who has a pleading face to stop this and says together"NOPE!!"

NANDINI= ok now who is rapping king?? And what is this TOFF, F3 and LLOM list

MUKTI= raapping king is our yo yo honey singh!!

CABIR= TOFF list no one wants to go..it is Target Of Fab Five list

DHRUV= F3 is Fab Five's Friend list together with aryaman and nanya

ARYAMAN= and..and llom lst...

He looks at manik and manik's eyes widen coz he understands what it means!

NANDINI= what!!??

CABIR= who tumhe baad me pata chale!phele girls ke saath ja ke danse ke liye appropriate dress pehna ke aao

And saying this he pushes her to other girls..woh drag her with them

And then looks at our majnu babu and says

CABIR= aryaman chalo ab batao kya tumhe LLOM list ka matlab pata hai

ARYAMAN= arre of course it means.

But is cut off by manik

MANIK= if I m not wrong LLOM mane Love Lady Of Manik list jaha pe sirf nandini ka naam hai.right??

All giggle at this at then manik too leave to wear appropriate clothes for the dance

SO HERE'S THE CHAPTER AFTER THE LONG WAIT

IF SOMEONE TELLS ME HOW TO HYPERLINK TEXT AND UPLOAD PICTURES THE NEXT UPDATE WILL BE AVALIABLE TOMMORROW WITH LOADS OF FUN AND ROMANCE

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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Awesome update!!!
i love trth r dare...
dat f3, toff,llom ...haha...
cabir teasing...
manik nd cabir cute sa fight..loved it...
wtng 4r d nxt part...
cont soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CAN SOMEONE TELL ME HOW TO UPLOAD PICS
I WANT ICS IN NXT UPDATE OR ELSE U WILL GET CONFUSED WITH MANAN DRESSING
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
It was amazingly awsome.. was waiting for it and now the wait was worth.. but please ek aur chapter post kardo.. dance performance bhi to dekhna hai
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
itsss nice...
I read it just ...now...
itsss nice..
I like it...
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waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Nice update dear
Sab kitna tease karte hai majnu manik KO

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