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Posted: 9 years ago

CHAPTER 11

" BHAIII" nandini shouted while hugging the person who reppociated and smiled. Manik turned his face side way with an annoyed face.

Nandini- I missed u sooo much bhai

The person breaks the hug and cupping her face with one hand says"I missed u too babu..."

Nandini makes a cute pout and says"bhai don't kall me dat I m nat a babu now I m glown nandu"

She delibratly speaks in a baby tone as well as like a baby which makes person chucle.

Person- chal badmash don't act cute with me..and if u were missing me soo much toh yaha ane ke are me toh tune mujhe bataya hi nahi ...

Now, he said complaing like a kid and turned his face

Nandini bit her tounge and then held her ears and said"sollly bhai..."

He looks at her but with a fake frown still on.

Nandini pinches her throat and says"solly na bhai pakka plomise age se aisa nai kalungi..."

The person smiles and hold her hands over her ears which eriks manik who was till now adoring his nanny's cuteness..

Person- it's ok aur agar age se aisa hua then I will not forgive u, both smile and before the person could say something further a voice interrupts

Voice- waah bhai!!!yeh accha hai !!! sis ko surprise deneka plan mera tha aur mazza tu utha raha hai ,haan!!?

Nandini and that person looks at each other knowing whose voice that is and decides to play on

Nandini- bhai apne kuch suna mujhe laga ki koi kuch bola

Person- nahi toh kyu tu...;

Before he could complete his talk a kick on his bum pushes him and he falls on the ground

Voice- saaley kamine ...meri sis ke saath do minute kya rah gaya tu bari akar aa gayi tujhe haan!!!

The other person rubs his bum and standing upright , dusting the floor off his back says"ouch yaar KARAN tu inna implsive kyu haan!!! Why so angty man yaar!! I was just joking"

(all ready told but not told that there is 2 new entries, 1st- rithwik dhanjani as karan singh;)

Karan - accha sale ARYAMAN ke bacche...zaada over smart mat dikha varna ek maruna

(2nd entry- ur choice- aryaman khurana;)

Aryaman acts if really scared. Then, kartan turns towards nandini who was laughing seing them but, seeing karan glaring her she keeps quite.

Karan- bahut hasi aa rahi thi

Saying he walks towards her while nandini stands on her place and nods a no. karan reaches near her and before nandini could do or say something she feels something.

Nandini - bro...No...Hahaha...no...Stop...

Karan starts tickling her while nandini keeps on laughing like a manic and karan is joined by aryaman too..

Finally after losing all energy nandini say-so sorry bhai and bro sorry...haha..Stop now..hah.p..hah.plzz"

Finally they end there ticklking session and all three share a hug.

Manik gets fed up, though they were nandini's cousins for him they were total attention seekers, who always roamed around nandini from childhood. And when ever they were around nandini always used to forget him..

(sidhe toh bol nahi sakta ki jelous hu toh attention seeker bol raha hai;)

"uhh...uhh" a coughing voice makes them break there hug. All three vturns towards the source of voice and finds manik standing there with his hands crossed over his chest and an expressionless face.

Karan- yes who r u??!!

Nandini comes near manik and pointing towards manik says"bhai- bro u remember ur childhood frnd, malhotra uncles child"

Karan and aryaman nods..

Nandini- so introducing with manik malhotra

But, she is cut off by manik"NANDINI'S BOYFRIEND" saing he puts his hand around her shoulder

Nandini as well as the other 2 looks shocked

Nandini(very low voice)_my boyfriend

Karan- what!!!

Aryaman- when!!!

A group of voices- how!!!(my pov- all the qs??)

And the group of voice turn the four peoples attention and they see manik's frnd standing there with there jaws dropping till the floor.

Manik smirks on the effect and suppresses his laugh

Manik- arre nanny tune sab ko bataya nahi ki I m ur boyfrnddd

He delibratly stenches the word boyfrnd and then looks at nandu who was still in shock.

Karan aand aryaman turn towards nandini and ask

Karan- nandini tune hame bina bataye

aryaman- hamse bine puche,

Karan- akhir kaise

Aryaman- apne liye boy frnd dhund liya

Nandini who was still in shock was going to say something when she sees manik winking at her, and she understand everything.

She too winks in response and with full confidence looking towards all the other people-abhi, karan and her other frnds who were all shocked says"yes MANIK IS MY BOYFRIEND AND I M HIS GIRLFRIEND"

All looks shocked while alya and navya were about to faint but Dhruv and cabir mananges them.

cabir comes towards them and says- yeh kab hua!!??

Manik(looking at nandu with a naughtiness glint in his eyes;)- kab hua matlab. Kal hi toh bataya tha yaad nahi.

Cabir puts a finger on his temple and makes a "r- u -insane-due-to-nandini"look to manik, only receving a grin from other side.

All of them,excep manan, tr y to remember when it happened.

Now, it was really difficult for manik and nandini to control there laugh, they start laughing like manic while all looks shocked.

Dhruv(whispering to cabir)-inhe aachank kya ho gaya

Cabir- manik ka samjh sakta hu nandini ke cakar me uska screw pehle se hi dhela tha, par nandini o kya ho gaya

Dhruv(looks at him)-lagta hai manik effect par gaya

And both hi-fi and then look at the two maics rolling on the floor

Finally, karan's patience level come to an end and he says irritadly"stop it u both"

Both manan somehow stop lughing and then between there laughs nandini says"bro u remember when I was 8 years old aur apse girlfriend ka matlab pucha toh apne kya bola tha"

Karan tries to think hard but nods no

Nandini- apne bola tha ki girlfriend is A FRIEND WHO IS A GIRL and obiously yesterday only we declared that we r frnds now if u can see then I m a girl and manik's friend so ho gayi na mai uski GIRL FRIEND

And again both hi fi and again starts laughing while others give a"r u serious look" to which manan give them"not at all we r full on fun look"

Karan(coming towards nandini folding his shirt's sleeves)ruk abhi batata hu tujhe girlfriend aur boyfriend ka matlab

He and aryaman run towards nandini while she runs back ward

But, bechara manik before he could understand his surrounding starts getting a shower of beating from his friend.

Cabir- salley teri gf haan

Dhruv- kha maar kha

Manik pleads to them to leave him to which they together say NO

On other side nandini's all pleads to her brothers to stop the ticking session falls in deaf ears.

Finally, after saying sorry to all. All of them-fab 5,karan,aryaman,navya and abhi share a group hug

YAAR U ALL CAN'T MANANGE WITHOUT PM NA

UPSET WITH LAST CHAPPY RTESPONSE

SO SHORT CHAPTER

SO BOLO KYA HOGA AAGE.2 NEW CHARACHRES.I THINK MAINE BAHUT CHARACTER DALE HAI ISS STRY MEI,AGAR CHARACTER SKETCH CAHIYE TOH BOLO.AND NOW THINK WHAT BOMB IS GONNA BLAST.I M TH LAUGHING LIKE A MANIC.

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NXT UPDATE WHEN I REACH AT LEAST 8 OR 7 PAGES COMMENTS. USSE PEHLE NO UPDATE.

AND I AM GOING TO CHANGE ARYA IN ALL UPDATES WITH ABHI AND ABHI WITH ARYA AS MANY OF U WANT MUKBHI.

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CHAPTER 12 COMING SOON

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update...
Waiting for manan confession...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hehehe manan r so cuteee n manik is jaelous from nandu cousn
& most funny gf bf scene
Short bt funnyyy chapter
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow divya
nice update
really amazing yr

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Posted: 9 years ago
it was awesome update. Please post the next part soon. Thanks a lot for sending buddy request and pm. Tack care of yourself.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Heeey...
Awsome update yr...
@diyamanan i m ur girl friend
Hehehehe...
Awsome yr... 😃
I loved it...n the new entries as well...
Jelous manik is fun to watch...looking forward to see some more of it...
Thanks for the pm..
Update soon..
N plzzz pm me the nxt chapter wenever u update..
Byeee
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Posted: 9 years ago
It's too awsm yaar
Cute very much
Boy friend n girl friend waahh
Plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome
Amazing
Superb update
Wowww rithvik my favourt
Manan toh pagl jo gye aap sb bhi ho jayoge hahahaha...enjoyed a lot...jealous manik...lovd it...continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update ...so cute ...wow new 2 characters so cute...i just love the new entries ek ko bhai aur dusre ko nandi ki friend banati then jallu manik ka dekhna mauka milta...awesome update...the boyfriend wala part was best...sabki shakal dekhne layak thi ...itna bara jhatka laga yeh sun ke manan are bf-gf...aliya aur navya toh behush hone lagi thi ...cabir ka expression epic thi yaar...ufff has has ke meri buri halat ho gaye thi...pls update soon...eagerly waiting...love u itna sara...thanks for the pm...with lots of love and hugs
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update..really funny
nxt time i will comment longer one...abhi ke liye sry fr small comment..thnx fr pm..

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