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YAH UR LOVE IS ONE REASON
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KI AKKU AND MISA DI
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CHAPTER 11 B

Nandini looks behind and sees manik holding his guitar and all others on his either sides holding there ears...

I am a fool, I am a fool
I am a fool fool fool!
You big heart, you big heart
You got very big heart!
(manik comes near her and points toward his heart and expand them says hers his very very larghe and asks for forgiveness)


I come near, I come near
I come near near near
You go far, you go far
You go very very far
(nandini smiles scartiscally and again frowns and turns to leave but cabir comes in front of her and blocks her way she again turns but this time again Aryaman and karan comes in front of her holding there ears and with a puppy face)


Arey thanda rakh kaleja
Thoda baraf pe ghis le bheja
Sorry le ja, maafi de ja humko free
(cabir comes and encircles his arm around nandini while singing and mukti and alya kneels down in front of her with ice packs)


One, two, three!(Dhruv sings)


Sorry Sorry Sorry
Pakde hum dono kaan kya
Sorry Sorry Sorry!
Bache ki loge jaan kya
Mehangi hai ek muskaan kya
Sorry Sorry Sorry
Bache ki loge jaan kya
(all sing together and again hold there ears and witj pleading eyes surround her in a circle, but nandini pushes all aside and comes out. All give each other helpless look and procceds there not-till-now-successful plan)


I know you love me and You know I love ya
Hai apne understanding to phir locha-lafda kya
I want a big big smile and
I want it only only now
Are! andar se tu okay hai upar se khaye bhav
(manik comes near her and while the"love part" nandini really blushes but hides it with her anger, but her blush gets noticed by manik and he understand she is not angry anymore)

Aise kaai ko atka
Tere ghar ka jhadu katka
Tu jo bole kar denge daily free!

(manik puts his hands on his waist and raising his one eyebrow moves towards her while she moves backward and finally she collides with others who were having a cheeky smile on there face and holding ears)

One, two, three!
Sorry Sorry Sorry
Pakde hum dono kaan kya
Sorry Sorry Sorry!
Bachche ki loge jaan kya
Mehangi hai ek muskaan kya
Sorry Sorry Sorry
Bachche ki loge jaan kya?
the song gets over and all look at nandini with pleading eyes ,but nandini has a expressionless face...

They think there plan went flop and give each other"plan unsuccessful"look but suddenly nandini couldn't control herself and brust out laughing, finally all sigh a relief.

Arya and karan jump on her and sasys"very naughty haan...jaan nikal di hamara..ufff...tumhe manane me kitni mehnat karni pari" theyt rub there fake sweat and receive a punch from nandini in there stomach..

Nandini hugs all and says"awe..i love u alll"(my pov-saachi!!! Sabhi ko ya...)

Cabir says to manik in his ear"ham sab ko yaa tujh kooo"manik glares him and gives a tight slap on his shoulder while cabir fakes an ouch..

Karan says to nandini cupping her face(obio manju gets irked)-doll(ahgain irritation increases) we really wanted to tell u par mom-dads ne itni jaldi sab kar diya ki we couldn't do anything ...so sorry

Both kaan and Aryaman again hold there ears but nandini smiles and removes there hand from there ears and says"bhaios it's ok..i understand...but I have a condition"

Both her bros togetfer says"agreed"

Nandini giggles and saysa"so u agreed na so the condition is u will have to do engagement again.."

All l;ook at her confused, and she continues"I mean chota sa replay in just front of us all"

Both says"done"

Suddenly, Aryaman and karan's phones buzzes anmd karan says"guys we need to leave ...doll will meet u there./..in malhotra and murtty dinner tonight..."

They leave rushing and manan look at each other on the name of dinner akhir inki love story toh isse hi shuru hui thi na...

Manik says"so u r there na in the dinner."

Nandini smiles and says"obio I would be there yeh koi puchne ki baat hai..."

Both smile and share a cute eyelock disturbed by a "ahem-ahem"obiousl;y of the ever lovely cabiraaa...

Cabir-toh hame bhi batao ki yeh kis bare me baat ho rahi hai...hame bhi toh haddi baqnna hai tumhare har planm me"he says the last part in a whisper near manik who glares him...

But, before he could speak nandini,the ever so sweet nandu,comes back in her mode and says in sugary voice..."arre of course u all are invited tumhare bina toh ham bore ho gayenge right manik?"

Cabir smirks and gives manik"ho-gaya-tera-plan-flop"look while manik looks at nandini and sighs as he was thinking that he wuld get time alone with her but he starts thinking"nanny u r soo...sooo sweet and ur this quality always attracts me toward u more and more."

He smiles and nods..

After sometime all leave for there home but not before lots of fun,leg pulling , masti etc.

Manan leave together in the same car..

Manik's car

It's been half an hour since they left from college. Both were silen\t absorbing each oher's presence. When suddenly something strikes her. She asks manik"manik who jo tumne college me bhai ko kaha tha aur phir jo song me gaya tha did u really mean it?"

Her question waqs more like a confirmation. Manik looks at her face with an expressionless face. He knew it was high time to tell her . he was about to tel;l something when his phone rung . he picked it up as it was his dad's call. After sometime he cuts the call ad looks towards nandini.

He says looking directly in her eyes""nanny I knw there r questions in ur mind and I so want to clear them but can u just wait for tonight..."

He pleaded her and how can she not agree. She smiled and nooded.

The rest of the journey was silent after dropping her home he left for his home.

>>>>>>>>>>FLASHBACVK END<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

Nandini was rememberinbg all this and blushing like a tomato. She loks at her self in the mirror and says"nandini murtty u r glowing wow lagta hai ,manik ka effect hai yeh"

She hdes her face between her hands hiding her blush

Manik's room

Manik was gelling up his hair for the 100th time and was again confirming his look for the 300th time.

He again asked to niyonika "mom me kaisa lag raha hu??"for thje 5ooth time.

Niyo got fed up and said"manik kitni aur bar puchoge u r looking amazing beta now don'tdisturb me I m going in my room to get ready."

Niyo leaves amnd manik's phone ring..

"yah I will take them ok everything should be perfect"he sais and disconnects the call. He looks at himself in mirror and says"puchna toh parega mom afterall today it should all be perfect

<B>CHAPTER 12A</B>

Murttys mansion

Nandini was busy in her own manik world when the doorbell rang, she knew it would be him, her heart beat was racing like a superfast train. She glanced one final time at herself in the mirror.

She came in her balcony, since her room was on 2nd floor, she glanced down and she was correct it was him. He was having a charming smile on his face and looking super hot in his dressing.

For once manik glanced up, wanting just one glance of her before his plan and he was right she was there. He would have happily looked at for ages, but right now he needed to concentrate on his plan.

He saw her smiling at him, but he replied a blank face and again turned towards her parents.

Nandini was confused with his behavior ,but ignored it thinking it must have been coz of the elders. She came down the stairs , while manik was looking at her from the corner of his eye.

He was spell-bound with her beauty, he could have been lying if he said that he didn't wanted to gobble her up at that time, but consequences were not letting him do so. Her beautiful red anarkali was making him insane but he had to control.

Nandini came down and touched the feet of manik's parents. Manik smiled at this. And was caught by his father smiling at nandini .now, how can his father leave a single chance of teasing his son.

Raj- waise kishore I m really disappointed with u.

This sentence of mr. malhotra turned everyone attention towards him with wide eyes. Bcoz everyone knew how good frnds mr. malhotra and mr. murtty were, they were like brothers.

Kishore- par hua kya hai jo tu mujhse disappointed hai.

Raj(looks at manan from corner of his eye and says)- arre tu dekh nahi sakta meri beti kitni bari ho gayi hai...

He takes her in a side hug in a fatherly manner, but kishore was still confused, together with other so he said - haan, bari ho gayi hai par tu kejna kya cahta hai

Raj says- arre yaar mai yeh kah raha hu ki ab toh nandini ke liye larke dhundne shurruu kar dene cahiye..

He delibratly streeses on shuru, but this this sentence make nandini blush and widen her eyes and manik ko pata nahi kaha se cough suru ho gata hai,

Mr. murttys was too much in shock even to react, same goes with mrs. Murttys and niyonika was fully confused with her husband's question..

All concerns towards manik and sujata goes to fetch water for him after drinking which manik somehow bcmes normal.all the while mr. malhotra"was enjoying his situation, so when he bcome s ok he says"kya hua beta sardi jukam toh nahi ho gaya tujhe"

Manik very well knew his dad's concern reason and so he sarcastically said"dad, mujhe sardi jukam nahi...kuch aur ho gayega agar aap yeh shock dete rahenge"

All gets confused while mr. malhotra was having a hard time to control his laugh.

Niyo- yeh tum dono kya bol rahe ho kuch samajh nahi aa raha...pehle tumhare dad aura b tum

Mr. malhotra turns towards the rest and says"yaar tum log toh kuch jayada hi serious ho gaye mai toh mazak kar raha tha.."

Everyone, especially manik breaths air of relief, but ma ka dil toh ma ka dil hota hai, so mrs. Murttys says"mazak toh theek hai bhai sahsb par akhir ek na ek din toh ise iss ghar se gana hi hai"

She warmly moves her hand over nandini's head. The murtty's turn emotional.

So, for the damage control manik jumps in between and says"uff...badi ma(manik calls nandini's mother badi maa) yeh emotion aur reaction apko suit nahi karta"

He rubs off the tear droplets in her eyes and side-hugging her says"aap toh meri sexy mom ho aap kyu senti ho rahi ho yeh toh mom ka account hai...aap bas haste raho"

He pulls her cheek into a smile and all laugh on his acting. Sujata pulls manik's ear and he fake an oww..

Sujata- bahut bara ho gaya hai tu ,haan thapad khayega samjha...niyo se jayada maine teri dekh bhal ki hai bachpan me tu jab yaha se waha ghumta tha tab mainehi tujhe pakra hai samjha

Nandini was trying hard not to laugh and was chuckling in between manik glares her and she turns silent but again start shrieking seeing manik helpless with her mom and there mother-son convo.

Manik gives her a"stop-laughing-or-something-really-not-so=good-will-happen"wala look, which immediatelty turns her shut up.

Manik straightens himself and gets off the hold of sujata ans says"so peeps aap log apna contine karo mai aur nanny ja rahe hai apne frnds ka intezaar karne"

He drags nandini with him who was reluctant to go snce, she knew he was going to punish her and gves him a sorry look ,but he gives her a no-escape look and drags her along to the pool area.

All the adults smile and mr. malhotra says"yeh dono saath me kitne acche lagte hai na". everyone nods and smile and move on for discussion of karan and ayaman's wedding plan.

Pool area

As soon as manan came out, nandini somehow freed herself from manik's grip and started running around the pool while manik ran behind her telling"bahut hasi aa rahi thi na ruko abhi batata hu"

After lots of running both got tired and both sat opposite sides of the pool panting, both looked at each other for a second and again started there tom and jerry game.

Finally, manik caught hold of her and then started tickling her while nandini prayed him to spare her life. Manik realized that it's gonna be really hard for him to ignore her

AFTER SOMETIME

Manan were sitting near the pool and gazing the stars, there hands secretly entangled. Suddenly, nandini remembered something she asked manik"manik"

Manik just hmmmed and asked her to continue. Nandini got excited and said"accha maine subh jo car me bola tha who tumhe yaad hai..."

Manik wey well remember everything and knew she was talking about the car convo but he said"kya bola tha mujhe toh yaad nahi!??"

His trick worked nandini was iriitated she said"arre tum itni jadi kaise bhol jaye jo maine sub..."

She only complete half of what she was saying before a wave of restlessness engulfed them,i.e, there frnds.

For first time in life manik liked his frnds timing, but can cabir ever leave a chance to tease him .

So, cabir encircled his arm around manik and said"bhai I missed u soo much tune mujhe subah se missed call nahi kiya"

Manik smiled sarcastically. He said"kyun madhubal kafi nahi thi tera brain pakane ke liye ya usne tujhe kiss anhi diya"

Like once in a blue, the teaser cabira was blushing along with navya, while others laughed onhis situation.

They all started playing truth and dare again with funky questions , and nasty dares like jumping in the pool dancing on dance basanti etc type of funky task while with lots of teasing and fun

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update done

now liking time

for new readers chappy 11b

and plz read pg 75 note

Edited by diyamanan - 9 years ago

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