MaNan FF- me and u(chapter 15-pg 91)(abhi toh journey suru hui hai) - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Read all parts in one go!! Enjoying it do keep me updated pls n also pm me plsss thank u
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Wow thts soo cute
I m Soo enjoying this story
It's awesome
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Amazing update
And d cabirs Sher were very gud
Continue soob
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Hey
Lovely update
Hehe I liked d short form nd all wala part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
LLOM😛😛 lol! MaNan❤️ cabir!😆😉 ManBir be so awesome!! Majnu manik!! Waiting for The Dance😛love it! Keep writing!
Love,
Aishwarya.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
hahhhaahhaa😆😆
toff, f3 & llom were awesome yaarrr😉
llom toh best tha dear😉😳
plzzz next update soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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llom wow what an idea the game was nice dear ...let's see how it goes now ...yipee they will dance together ...toff what an abbreviations
ty for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
awesome update...loved all of it...
F3 list...and LLOM was just the best...im sure nandu won't be part of FAB5 hit list...
keep up the good work and can't wait for their dance...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49

CHAPTER-3

Manik came out wearing this dress

He came and sat near others all the girls were ogling at him

CABIR= baap re lagta hai manik nandini ko impress karne ke liye pura ready ho kar ke aaya hai!!

ARYAMAN= par dekhna nandu ke aate hi isska muh khula reh gayyega

Manik blushes on the statement and composing himself ask

MANIK= aur tujhe aisa kyun lagta hai??

ARYAMAN= bcoz i can see her and trust me dude bhabhi is looking sooo hoott..

"the word hot" gets him a glare from manik which he shoves with a sorry and then turns manik's head to the other side..

And the view really makes manik's jaw drop..

ARYAMAN= dekha maina bola tha na...

Cabir and dhruv salutes him while majnu baba isogling nandu with someother boys in the canteen

Nandini's dress

Nandini and comes near the boys..

MUKTI=taan tana..presenting before u hiphop queen

ALYA= totally made by us

NAVYA= nandini murtty

All hoot and clap on this while our majnu is lost somewhere(u know where right;)

Dhruv sees this and signals to the evil twins about this who smirk

CABIR= tujh me raab dikhta hai yaara mai kya karu

MUKTI= aur tera siwa kuch bhi nahi dikhta uska bhi kya karu!!

All giggle on this getting glare from majnu and confused face from nandu

NANDINI= yeh tum dono kya kah rahe ho??

ALYA= aree yeh log toh aisa hi kuch bhi bolte rahte hae pe dhyan do

Remebring about the dance both manan look at each other and share a chotu sa eyelock broken due to there frnds coughing(fake ones for sure;)

MANIK= umm... yah let's go and start!!!

He gets up starts walking towards nandini

CABIR= barah mahine me barah tarike se tujhko pyar jataunga re,...dhinka chika...dhinka chika eeaaeaa

Both manan rolls there eyes look at them while other supresss there laugh and dhruv shuts cabir mouth with his palm

DHRUV= tum log jao...iss joker ki baat mat suna

Manan passes him a smile and leaves...

BG SONG- LOVE DOSE

Youtube link-

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q4S3qRBjebA

Lagdi mainu jivein ambraan di queen
Meethiyan gallan kare, kudi namkeen
(manik comes near nandu and circles her)

Lagdi mainu jiven ambraan di queen
Meethiyan gallan kare, kudi namkeen
Lagdi mainu jiven ambraan di queen
Meethiyan gallan kare, kudi namkeen
(manik goes near nandu and swirls her and leaves and again pulls her back )

Patla ja lakk tera, lakk nu sambhal ni
One in the million lagdi kamaal ni
Patla ja lakk tera lakk nu sambhal ni
One in the million lagdi kamaal ni
Lagdi kamaal ni lagdi kamaal ni
Hoya bura haal ni, hoya bura haal ni
(he with his fingers shows the sign of mast.. while nandini acts as if she doesn't care)

Tu aaja mere close
Milta na mauka roz
I want you my baby
Mujhe de de love dose (x2)
(manik does the signature move while coming near nandu while she pushes him)

Yeah!
Lagdi mainu jiven ambraan di queen
Meethiyan gallan kare, kudi namkeen
Lagdi mainu jiven ambraan di queen
Meethiyan gallan kare, kudi namkeen
(they move back and fro and again face each other, where manik wonks at nandu which makes her blushes but she shoves it away and concentrate on dance)



(manik Rap)
Ye chand sa roshan chehra
Baalon ka rang sunehara
Kaise dekhun teri aankhen
Aankhon pe chashme ka pehra (x2)
(he comes near her and touches her hair shwing how silky it is)


Iss chashme ko hata do
Aankhon ko mila lo
Aankhon ke nashile jaam
Aankhon se pila do
Lagta hum pehle mile
Ya ho mujhe Dj vu
Idhar udhar kahan dekhe
Girl I'm talking to you
Ab aankhon se hataya chashma
Aakhein to milaao ji
Duniya waale jo bhi bole
Humse na sharmaao ji
Ab phone utthaao ji
Aur daddy ki millo ji
Unke future son-in-law ki baat unse karwaao ji
"Hello, Uncle, namaste"
Chalo kaam ki baat pe aatein hain
Ab aap ye puchhenge ki
Aap kitne paise kamate hain?
Bas jitna aapki beti
Ek mahine mein udati hai
Ek hafte me meri gaadi utna tel khaati hai
Hai ghar, hai paisa, hai gaadi
Ab do jodon mein ladki bhejo
Ladki hui hamaari
Uncle hai ghar, hai paisa, hai gaadi
Ab do jodon mein ladki bhejo
Ladki hui humaari, OK Bye.
(he removes her sunglasses and shows his fingers in eye to eye sign..nandini acts frustrated and looks here and there but manik catches her face and makes her look at him and shaes a chotu as eyelock and takles her phone and acts if really talking while nandu acts with a asum,ed face and after that he keeps her phone back in her pocket)


Lagdi ai mainu jiven ambraan di queen
Meethiyan gallan kare, kudi namkeen (x4)

(manik does the last part as the song video and then nandu does the girls part which makes manik asumed)

All hoot and clap as the song finishes..

CABIR= wow man I thought nandu can't do it but u amazed me girl the last part was awsm hats off girl..

ARYAMAN= arre karegi nah manik uss ke saath tha

Manik glares him and nandu looks here and ther

NANDINI= umm... I think I should call it off a day and go home now I m tired bye..

MUKTI= arre nandu ruka(looks at majnu) hamara majnu(all looks at her) I mean manik tumhe ghar chor dj na

Nandu look at manik and tells

NANDINI= actually..i have brought my car soo thanks

ALYA= accha then bye u even need to change

Nandu nods and leaves sparing last glance to manik

MANIK= guys I think even I should change and even I m tired

CABIR= haan..ab nandu ghar chali gayi hai tu kya karja yaha rah ke tu bhi ja..

MANIK= cabirr tu ek din mera haath se mareja zaarur..

CABIR=haan toh kya main darta hu tujhse

Alya comes in between their so called fight

ALYA- arre guys chil!! Manik tum kyu isski baat sun rahe ho go and change

MANIK= u r right!! Accha bye guys!!

ALL=bye

Manik too leaves and all go and sit in there places

SO AS PROMISED BACK WITH AN UPDATE

HOW WAS IT?? TOO LONG NA OF 1000+ WORD TOH KAM SE KAAM 5 WORD ME COMMENT TOH BANTA HAI YAAR

AND GUYS I M NOT GETTING ENOUGH RESPONSE

I WANNA UPDATE NXT PART IN 15TH PAGE IF POSSIBLE OR THE UPDATE WILL BE AVALIABLE NXT WEEK

SO NOW START COMMENTING

CHAPTER 4 COMING SOON

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome dear...loved the part...plz pm me...lots of love from me to MaNan😊😛 ...

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