Khudaya Ve....! FF on Yasmin & Afzal

This is my ff on afzal & Yasmin ... As I noticed there is no ff exist on pyaare afzal... So I thought I should wright 1for such n amazing show..! But theire is anMajor Chang in this ff.. As I found Yasmin's love for afzal more true then Farah ..so the leads of my ff will be Yasmin & Farah..! Aarfa 's Prologue :- 1ladki thi Yasmin... Mere bhayi se pyaar karti this par mera bhai Farah se pyaar krta tha.. ME jab bhi afzal ko dekhti thi bas yahi sochti thi 1trafa ki mohbbat kitna dard de sakti hai..? Par aj Yasmin ko dekh kr sochti hu agar apka pyaar pyaar se badhke ho..to vo kaise jannat nasib kara deta hai.. Bhale hi Aj vo afzal ko chod kar ja rhi hai par me janti hu vo to apni jindagi chod ke na rhi hai..Bass 1mitti ka putla haidrabaad se Karachi laut raha hai..uski rooh to abhi yahi afzal se bandhi hui hai.. Yaa Allah !!!! Kya khata thi uski..!! Kya kisise apne aap de jyada mohhabat karne ka natiza yeh hai?? Me shukrguzar hu ya khuda teri ki mujhe. Kabhi kisise mohbbat nhi huyi...! Gyzz its an small effort plzz give ur feadback. .should I continue it or not ?