ZAYA KE BEINTEHAA MOBHATA FF-pt 12 updated

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Posted: 9 years ago

will start this story from evening

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steelfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

prolouge

zain a handsome man ,a london return always loved aliya

but things gets changed his sweetheart is been now always put in trouble by zain's family

do u think zain will help aliya

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Nandini

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Posted: 9 years ago

OHH YESS!

I am so so so x1000 glad that finally someone's writing something!

I was like 'Tani, write something' since days! Thank you so much for this!

I won't have to write anymore.

I am definitely gonna follow this story.

London return toh I love <3

Continue soon. :)

Tani

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Posted: 9 years ago

BARKAT VILLA

SURRIYA-USMAAN SAAB ZAIN KI FLIGHT HOGAYE HAI NA

USMAAN-JI HO TOH GAYE HAIN LEKIN MUMBAI MAIN NAHNI BHOPAL MAIN WO HUMEIN ZAIN KE FLIGHT TICKET LONDON TO BHOPAL KARIYE THI AUR YEH IDEA HUMEIN ZAIN NA DIYA

SURRIYA*MUJHE BHOPAL SE BOHAT NAFRAT HAIN AUR ALIYA USKO YAAD NA KARO TOH THIK HAIN PAR USMAAN SAAB KO KAUN SMAJHE YEH SAB*

IN OTHER ROOM

Nafisa-main toh bohat beautiful dikh rahi hoon zain khush hojayega

surriya enters the room

nafisa-mom

surriya spoke in between-zain nahni aaya hain lekin wo aayaga toh tumhar nikkah karonge main kyunki fahad ke jab dusri shaadi hua thi toh tumein mujhse waad kariya tha ki main tumhara nikkah zain se karawayonge mujhe yaad hain aur main zaoora pura karoge

nafisa-l know mom

bhopal airport

aliya was wating for zeeshan flight

aliya and zain both were wearing

suddenly our hero made the enter and zeeshan too aliya ran towards them she hugged zain

aliya-zain what a pleasant suprise l am so happy

zain-aliya aaj tak sirf friends book par baat hoti thi aaj toh saamne horahi hai

here zeeshan was boiling in the angry so he spoke up

zeeshan-aliya main bhi hoon tum shayad mujhe lene aayi ho

aliya came forward and shaked the hands zeeshan

aliya-sorry

zain-yeh kaun hain

aliya-yeh mere honewale husband hain zeeshan

zeeshan-hi

zain-hi(zain heart got broken as he came to bhopal only confess his love to aliya but his aliya going to marry someone else)

aliya-zain chalo ghar

zain-hmm

the three of them went to their destenation

at night

ayat-appi kal newyear hai

aliya-hain toh

zain-l have an idea

aliya-kya

zain-wo suprise hain

aliya-lekin zain bol na

zain-nahni kal shaam ko sab kuch baad chale jayega

recap-a big twist in aliya's life

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Nandini

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Posted: 9 years ago

It is wonderful.

Pls cont soon and give long updates.

Itne se humara kya hoga :P

Tani

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Posted: 9 years ago

SOON IT WAS EVENING

aliya was getting ready

suddenly ayat came in the room

ayat-jaldi se ready hojayae pls

aliya-han bas ek minute

aliya and zain both were wearing this

aliya entered the party

zain was lost in aliya's beauty

aliya-zain kya suprise hain

zain-dekho cruise party

aliya-wow bhopal main first time curise party

she hugged zain

aliya-thanks a lot

zain-tum bhi naa he also hugged her back

this all was been seen by zeeshan

zeeshan-aliya

aliya turned back

aliya-zeeshan aap

zeeshan-kyun excepted nahni tha kya

aliya- nahni wo

zeeshan-chalo dance karta hain

aliya-nahni wo main zain ke saath karon ke kyun ki usne kitna kiya hai issliye itna toh wo deserve karta hai

zain-okay chale

zain kept his hand on aliya's waist

aliya was not feeling at all uncomfortable

soon they were dancing

after half an hour

zain went to a board

were aliya was sitting

zain-kya hua

aliya-bas main toh aise hi aaygaya

zain-chalo

aliya tries to get up but was about to fall but soon zain resuced har

zain-aliya tum thik ho

aliya-haan hoon thanks

zain and aliya comes to theie board it was

12.30 in night

aliya went ahead

and zain was behind her

zeeshan-zain ruko jaao

zain-haan bol

zeeshan-aliya se dur raho tum

zain was angry after hearing this statement

NEXT MORNING

today was mehndi ceremony of aliya

IN THE EVENING'

aliya was and zain were wearing this

aliya came down

zain was lost in beauty of her and her strawberry lipglose was intevting him

aliya-zain kya hua

zain-kuch nahni tum bohat achi laga rahai ho

aliya-thanks a lot

shabhan-aliya chale

zesshan-ruk jaiye

aliya and zain both were shocked to see him

note-after next update l need a help so tani sis pls help me

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Posted: 9 years ago

shabhan-zeeshan tum akle aayi ho

zeeshan-nanhi ammi abbu bhi aaya hai

zeeshan ammi-hum 10 lakh nahni 20 lakh lega

here aliya was shocked after hearing whereas our hero went to answer a call

zeeshan abbu-thik kaha issne

shabhan -itna paisa main kahan se laao

zeeshan ammi-yeh toh nahni pata humein

zeeshan-phir yeh rakham kaam hai

zeeshan goe towards aliya and says-tumhara jo shok hai unko badal toh itna kaam hai

zeeshan-ek baat kaho aliya tum na aur zain na kitna baar suhgaraat baane hai aliya got tears in her and she was crying very badly

zain saw aliya in this situation

zain-aliya

aliya hugs zain

zain too hugged her back

zeeshan-aliya jaab do na

zain-konsa jaab maga raha ho

zeeshan-bas yeh hi kahan ke kitna baar aliya aur tumein suhugraat baane hai

zain spoke very agrily-zeeshan

zeeshan too got scared and aliya was too scared she just left zain

zain went towards zeeshan and beat him blue and black after a while zeeshan was not in good state zain wet towards aliya and catched her hands

zain-main apke samne kehta hoon ki main aliya se nikkah karoonga kyun ki l love her

zain-aliya l love u

aliya-l love u too zain

zain was happy

zain hugged aliya

zeeshan family went away

liya applied the mehndi on her hand and waas sitting alone shabhan approached her

shabhan-kya hua aliya

aliya-kuch nahni ammi bas aisa hi

shabhan-thik hain beta

recap-zain and aliya 's suhugaraat

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Posted: 9 years ago

soon the wedding rituals took place

zain and aliya's nikkah was been done now both came down wearning this

soon the time came were aliyaa have to bid audiue to her family she went to everyone tok their blessings and head towards airport with zain

flight

zain-aliya r u okay

aliya-hmm

zain took aliya in his arms their posture was something like this

zain kissed aliya on the forehead aliya 's tears just vainshed away

soon they reached barkat villa

zain-chalo aliya

aliya-zain mujhe bahut darr laga raha hai mamu aur mami suprise hojayeinge

zain-main hoon na koi kuch nahni kahaan ka tumhe

zain holds aliyas hand tae her inside the house

surriya-chanbibi tayaari hogaya na

nafisa-zain aur aliya

surriya and all the membres were shocked to hear this name they turned back and they saw that zain's hand was on aliya's waist

surriya-yeh kya kar rahe ahi

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Posted: 9 years ago

surriya-tum iss ghar main kya kare rahi ho

zain-mera aur aliya ka nikkah hogaya hai aaj hi

usmaan-yum na kahan hi nahni hume

zain-dad aap toh chahat tha ki mera nikkah ek achi ladkhi ke sath ho wo toh hogaya

surriya-tum iss ghaar ki bahu nahni bane sakte

zain-surriya begum zubaan sambhal kar baat kijiye biwi hai meri chandbibi thali lekar aayi aap

all the rituals took place usmman-miya apne biwi ko godh main uthae aur lekar jaiye apne room main

zain lift aliya's in his arms they both shared a eye lock and head towards their room

zaya room

zain placed aliya on the bed and closed the doors and window of their room

zain went towards aliya who was highly blushing

zain-aliya tayari ho na

aliya-zain

zain-toook aliya in his arms and aliya was beneath zain and zain on aliya

zin kissed aliya on cheeks then on eyes and then on necks soon aliya pushed zain away and tried to go away but zain hold her dupatta and now aliya's back was in front of aliya he sided her hairs and kissed her back and then her shoulders

and then and last they had a liplock and slept peacful in eachother's arms

note-l will now give u big big updates

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Posted: 9 years ago

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next morning barkat villa

zaya room

sunrays entered the room falling on sleeping love birds aliya hugged zain more tightly zain was happy to see a angel sleeping in his arms

zain-goodmorning mez

aliya-mez

zain-malika -e-zain aur meri princess

aliya-okay toh tum mera jaanu aur mera baby

both were loost in eachother a knock was heard on the door

aliya-lagta hai koi hai main dekthi hoon

zain-haan

aliya straights her lenga and head towards the door

she opens the door

aliya-chandbibi

chandbibi-dulhan zain ko bhaijaan neecha bol raha hai

aliya-jee thik hai main unko bhejate hoon

chandbibi goes away

aliya-zain chalo utha mamu tumhein bol raha hain aur main abhi bath leke athi hoon

zain-aliya main chalo bathroom main sath main bath karenge

aliya-zain tum bhi na and runs away

both zain and alliya wear this goes down

zain sat on table and signalled aliya to sit beside him but aliya was scared if someone told her anything they again a rift will be seen in the morning

zain got up from his sit and made aliya to sit surriya and nafisa were fuming in the anger and gave a look to each other

zain-dad aaj se main office joint kare raha hoon

usmman-haan miya kyun nahni aliya apne zain ke liye kuch meethi bane hai na

aliya-jee mamu yeh kheer maine zain ke liye bane hai