Story : The Birthday Cake (Non Investigative)

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bluetides

@bluetides

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Vis,
Will you beat me if I say this after math is more enjoyable 😆
Abhi running to wash room 🤣🤣🤣
And daya gets away not paying bill 😛 😛 😛
AWESOME 👏 👏 👏👏

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

its Amazing DII...😉😉

Even I cant have an Idea that Bhai played such Well...😈👏👏

matllab kuch bhi ho jaye😉

Bill nahi diya jaye...😆😆

Hilarious Attempt...👏

Thank You so much...😳😳

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Samyajita

@Samyajita

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

OMG !...Its Hilarious 🤣

Kya plan banaya Daya sir ne Bill Naa dene ke liye 😆

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PAYEL DEY

@--PAYEL--

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

superb Story Vis di ⭐️

loved Duo's convo and Survi's part was also very nicely portrayed 👍🏼

the 2nd part is hilarious 🤣

Daya sir ke shatir dimag ki jai ho 😆

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beena1508

@-beena-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

It is hilarious Visrom. 🤣
Awesome attempt. ⭐️ ⭐️

Thank you so much. 😊

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Debasree

@debasree04

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Sorry for super late reply vis...
As i told u in sms...its really wonderful OS! I love how u include Daya sir in it...the way u describe Abhi's awkwardness, is really very good!
Good work! 👏

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@ANGELICEYES

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Lovely story Vis di.. Liked the way you handled the plot 👏 .. The fact I love the most is here Duo are so like the Duo we used to see in 2006-07 era..
Btw Pari in college? 😛 8 years ago she was around 7/8 yrs na..