Story : The Birthday Cake (Non Investigative)

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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Nahi...Daya ne hi bill diya. Baaki 364 dinn Abhijeet hi dete hain. 😛😉 Exactly jab bill aata hai tab Daya washroom chale jaate hain. 😈

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@Twilight123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: visrom
Actually the one who suggested had also suggested something more. I couldn't bring myself to write that part. 🤣

I can guess...some more romantic stuffs na...??😉

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Rifah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: bluetides

Muse Shaq hi ki Abhi Ka purse chura lia hoga car se aur bill waha se dia hoga 😉

mujhe bhi kuch aisa hi laga😉

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Rifah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: visrom
Nahi...Daya ne hi bill diya. Baaki 364 dinn Abhijeet hi dete hain. 😛😉 Exactly jab bill aata hai tab Daya washroom chale jaate hain. 😈

or mere bechare Abhi ko kharcha krna padta hai😆

ye Daya toh kuch mere jaisa hai😉

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: visrom
Actually the one who suggested had also suggested something more. I couldn't bring myself to write that part. 🤣

But I m still confused why the Reader said, it's below Theme either there was no specific Theme regarding Contest...😕

We only wanted to IMPRESS ADITYA Sir either though Comments or only Silence...😉

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beena1508

@-beena-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Lovely story Visrom. 👏
Well written.Commendable job. 👍🏼
Survi's character has been very nicely portrayed. 👏
The conversation between Duo is very nice. ⭐️ ⭐️
I really loved the story.

Thank you so much.

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Samyajita

@Samyajita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Great Story 👏

Loved the Concept...Specially The idea of including Survi 😃

Waiting for more such sweet stories from your side 😊

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bluetides

@bluetides

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: visrom
Nahi...Daya ne hi bill diya. Baaki 364 dinn Abhijeet hi dete hain. 😛😉 Exactly jab bill aata hai tab Daya washroom chale jaate hain. 😈

ab bache 😛 ki jaan logi kya
use theek usi samay wash room jana parta hi
isme us ka kya kasoor hi
use poocho jo inhe bigad ke rakha hi ( Abhi) 😆

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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Ok here goes. .. 😆

Abhijeet: Daya tum humesha bill aate hi washroom chale jaate ho aur bill mujhe bharna padta hai. main bhi govt employee hoon. .. mujhe bhi utni hi salary mil rahi hai jitna tumhe. 50-50 hona chahiye...aaj main bill nahi bharoonga. 😒

Daya: boss...tumhare paas inherited property hai. main mamta foundation se hoon. maine itna bada bungalow liya hai...poori salary emi mein chali jaati hai.

Abhijeet: toh yeh bungalow liya kyon? chota 2bhk flat ke lete! 😈

Daya: woh...tum Chitroley se poocho.

Abhijeet: Theek hai...main aaj restaurant nahi aaonga. Main bhaji banaakar khilaaoonga tumhe!

Daya: 😲 nahiii. theek hai boss. tum bill mat dena aaj.

After dinner bill arrives.

Without giving a chance to Daya, Abhijeet gets up and runs to the washroom. he watches from behind the washroom door with a 😈 expression.

Daya(to the waiter): yeh kya khila diya tumne?

Waiter: kya hua sir!

Daya: dekho...mere dost ka pet kharaab ho gaya. Main ek cid officer hoon. tumhara restaurant band karva doonga!

The waiter calls the manager and he apologizes.

Manager: sorry sir. dobaara aisa nahi hoga. aap paisa mat dijiye.

Daya: hmmm...main check karne aaoonga food inspector ke saath.

Manager: zaroor sir. main aaj hi poora kitchen saaf karvata hoon

Abhijeet: 😕 😲

Daya looks at him and does a 😉