First ever OS !! Past meets present and Love Wins.

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Guys this is my first ever OS that too on KAYA ... 😃

What a feeling to write, Please express your views whether good or bad...This is continuation to Friday episode but I will be writing only KAYA part.

Kabir: Maine ek kamzor loser insaan ki tarah sharab ka sahara liya lekin shreya fir bhi nahin ruki, aise lagne laga ki who jaan bhuj ke chahti thi ki mein koi galti karun aur use woh ek wajah mil jaye mujhse alag hone ki.

Us waqt Panditji ke alawa Tarini aur laxman mere stringers bhi the aur Dost bhi , Tarini mere aur shreya ke bhaare mein sab jaanti thi, ek wohi thi jiske saath mein apni baatein share karta tha, who mere dil ka haal samajh paati thi par us din jab mein nashe ki halat mein Tarini se milne gaya toh Shreya bhi wahin pahunchi. (Ananya kept looking at him and listening him with a shocked look)

Tarini apne bhai Anuraag ke saath rehti thi, Anuraag bahut chota tha 3 saal ka , Shreya yeh bahut ache se jaanti thi ki Tarini aur mein bahut ache dost hai lekin usne hamare sache rishte ko badnaam karne ki koshish ki aur usko Extra marital affair ka naam diya... maine yeh sunkar nashe aur gusse mein Shreya ko bahut sunaya aur haath uthane hi wala tha ki Tarini ne rok diya , mein wahan se nikal gaya, Tarini mere peeche peeche aayi mujhe samjhane, lekin Anuraag bhi usko follow karte karte aagaya aur uska ek bike se accident hogaya.(Ananya more shocked and couldn't help but just listen to him)

Who dekh kar mera saara nasha uttar gaya, do min ke liye toh kuch samajh hi nahin aya, humne Anuraag ko toh bacha liya lekin usne apne pairon ki jaan khodi aur wheel chair uska sahara ban gayi, mein shreya ke liye usdin ke baad nafrat ke alawa kuch mehsoos hi nahain kar paya , Anuraag ke liye mein aaj bhi khud ko guilty mehsoos karta hun. EMA ke basis par Shreya ne bhi mujhse divorce manga , iske baad mein bhi Shreya ke saath nahin rehna chahta tha , aur hamara divorce hogaya. (Tear rolled down his eyes)

Ananya holding his hands in hers.

Kabir : Ananya, Shreya ne mera sab kuch cheen liya tha, in sabke beech meri family ne bhi mera saath chor diya, Shreya ne unhe bhi taane dekar aur insult karke mujhse door kar diya , Mein akela tha aur uski shart ke hisaab se mein andhar se bilkul toot chukka tha.

By this time Ananya's eyes became moist and tear fell from her eyes too...

Lekin Panditji ne mujhe sahara diya, Tarini aur laxman ne saath diya, Mein khud ko responsible samajhta hoon Tarini aur Anuraag ke liye, maine har who deewar khadi ki apne aas paas jahan se mujhe koi kamzor na samjhe, mein bhi shrewed aur manipulative ban gaya, aaj mein jahan hoon isi wajah se hoon, abhi sirf yahi mera parivar hai, Tarini, laxman aur Tum ismein shamil hona chahti ho ya nahin yeh faisla tumhe karna hai. (Kabir almost broken but yet hopeful looking at her.)

(Both looking at each other holding their hands with those teary eyes and suddenly it started raining heavily... Kabir had his coat and phone in the car and car was parked in a parking lot nearby but rain was pouring too much to reach there, Ananya removed her jacket and they both covered their heads and ran to the secluded hut next to the tea stall where all general stuff was kept, grass all over, wood sticks and logs and some eatables for the chai stall. Ananya hung her jacket on one of the logs and were drying herself, Kabir stood quiet in one corner looking out and thinking that Ananya didn't reply to his question yet.

Ananya noticed his sad face and went towards him, she hugged him softly from behind and kept her hand on his shoulders from front side, he was surprised and kept his hands on hers, he just couldn't turn to her and was too emotional. Ananya broke the hug and turned his face towards her, wiped his tear and gave him a smile for which he lives😃)

Ananya: Mr. Kabir Sharma, maine hamare rishte ke bare mein faisla le liya hai aur abhi definitely aapke dil mein mere alawa aur kuch bi nahin reh sakta. Aapko yaad hai maine aapse kaha tha ki mein aap par aankhein bandh karke vishwas karti hoon, aap mujhe yeh sab nahin bhi batate toh bhi mujhe fark nahin parta ... (Kabir too overwhelmed and hugged her tightly.)

Ananya: But I am really sorry ki maine itne time se aapki baat nahin suni, mujhe ehsaas hi nahin tha ki aapke andhar itna dard hai aur aapne itna saha hai, mujhe aaj ehsaas ho raha hai ki aap shreya se itni nafrat kyun karte hai ... I am really, really sorry for not listening to you and your warnings.

Kabir : (still a bit tensed ) Shreya keh rahi thi ki tum uski dost ho, please ananya usse door raho, woh tumhe manipulate karegi tumhe pata bhi nahin chalega , woh abh bhi mujhe waise hi neecha dikhane wapas aayi hai, Usse yeh saha nahin jayega ki jis insaan ko usne todna chaha aur kamyaab bhi hogayi woh aaj fir se khush hai...Agar usne tumhe koi nuksaan pahunchaya toh mein apna aapa kho dunga aur shayad fir toot jaun.

Ananya: (With a sweet and simple yet teasing smile, back to her mode) Hmmm... Shreya ne manipulation toh kiya, mujhe dost bhi bana diya forcefully hi sahi, lekin abh aap dekhiyega ki mein apni dosti kaise nibhati hoon 😉

(They both smiled and embraced each other in a comfortable hug and suddenly it was quiet, only sound they could hear was heavy water pouring, Ananya hugged him more tightly and Kabir too, he sensed his hands touching her waist skin between her red singlet and Denims, Ananya too realized his touch and blushed more, she couldn't see him and kept her face between his chest and crook of his neck and breathing deeply. He couldn't resist this more, he slid his hand to her upper waist and coming towards her back... she kept holding him tight n tight... his left hand holding onto her waist still touching her bare skin, right hand kept coming till her shoulders, he slid the strap of her singlet and placed a wet kiss, She shivered and turned back and blushed more n more... He pulled her towards him facing her back, again placed a kiss on her bare back neck, she smiled... He went on knees and placed his lips on her waist too... That's it she couldn't held herself anymore and gave in, she turned and crushed him into a passionate hug between the two and both kissed so passionately murmuring I love you to each other.)

And suddenly Ananya's phone rang in her denims pocket getting them back to their senses and it was Anita's call asking her to come back home soon...

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chats53 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb
Hoping to see something similar on Monday 😉😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks dear :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: chats53

Superb

Hoping to see something similar on Monday 😉😉

Thank you... me too waiting desperately for Monday :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Gitanjali-

Very impressive

Continue writing


Thank you for the appreciation :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely OS. .I hope we get to see some romantic kisses in the show too...can't wait for tomorrow now...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvraj4ever

Lovely OS. .I hope we get to see some romantic kisses in the show too...can't wait for tomorrow now...

Thanks so much :)

Oh I am really hoping to at least couple of them can be shown in the show as Rajeev and Kritika never object to do intimate scenes if alligned with the story line.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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omg!!!! It was Awesome!!!!! Loved it...
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Originally posted by: -Prinky-

omg!!!! It was Awesome!!!!! Loved it...


Thanks dear :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great Shweta 👍🏼 Wonderful summing up of true love .😊

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