Ch 22 pg 10 - 03/09 When love comes calling 2 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Important notice
As a writer the quality of my updates are conditional to your feedback. your feedback plays a very important role in motivating me to write better...I will take that extra mile to think of something that would excite you.

When your feedback is just one or two words... Nice update and the likes... They are not motivational... I spend a lot of time and energy coming up with my chapters... When I get a blah response... It doesn't excite me to write another chapter... Why bother.

I have mentioned this before... It is you readers that is my muse. Your interest and excitement feeds my imagination... I just updated hate me... I was excited on how to progress the story... After the comments... I can't be bothered... The excitement is gone...

I am no longer going to spend so much of my time or my energy on the ff. I have a heavy schedule and stay up till late to update... I dedicate my weekends when I am not at work... When I know I will not be able to update during the week... I shall try to give one update a week... I will be working on when love until completion.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Don't be angry Angel 😛 I for one look forward to ur updates and do give more then great update. But I understand u have a hectic schedule so will look for that one day of the week when u update. I hope u have ragna in next update as last few updates were about Priya and no kalpi in them. 😛
Edited by sunyy - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Plzz angel don't say like that u know how much we all love ur ff plzz don't lost ur interest in it...as a writer i hv understand u want appreciation but don't u think if someone say it nice good or gem that is d complement to ur story that they like it everyone has no ability to express ther opinion...so may be they write in that way but as a writer u shld accept der cmnts...plzz don't be angry...plzz stay calm n keep writing good...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I'm missing this story😭
angel got upset with us and hold it/discontinue.
I seriously love d concept of dis story...how raghav attracts towards kalpi,their first meeting,first kiss ful of anger bt passionate😳

Angel plz cm bck to dis story.dnt be angry with us,i promise i'l giv u a long cmnt after every update.bt update it dear...pls...😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi all,
Please bear with me... I don't have the time to read the chapters... Just skimmed through the last chappy... Hope I am able to give this chappy justice.


Chapter 21


Staring at his phone, surprised etched on his face, slightly dazed, Ragav says aloud, "shit, I am in love... What? When?", he questions himself.

Prem walks into the room and asks, "what's up? Why the dazed look?"

Ragav chuckles, saying, "I am in love!"

"I should hope so," Prem replies nonchalantly, punching into his open palm, he continues with mock severity, "else am gonna beat you to pulp."

Relaxes his stance and adds teasingly, "dude, you have been hit bad."


Ragav raises his eyebrows questioningly. Prem smirks and says, "when a guy agrees to the no coitus condition... You just know it is love." Seeing the expression on Ragav's face, Prem laughs and heads off to his room.

Feeling restless... But of a different kind... Ragav settles himself on the couch... Staring into the night... Watching the rain... Occasionally chuckling aloud... Thinking... I am in love.

The door bell rings. Frowning Ragav turns towards the wall clock, reading the time, one O' clock. He walks towards the door, wondering who could it be this late in the night. Opening the door, he stares at the person.

Nervous, Kalpi, asks, "won't you let me in?" Clearing his throat Ragav replies as he moves aside, "yes of course please come in... Umm is everything okay." Kalpi walks in hurriedly, mumbling, "everything is fine."

Ragav stares after her, his gaze automatically tracing the curves of her body, thinking, "shit, did she have to wear such tight jeans." Seeing her belly button twinkle, he groans softly, "and a short top", as his eyes are automatically drawn to her piercing.

He walks up to her, mumbling under his breath, "no coitus... No coitus..." His voice harsh, he asks, "what are you doing here?"

Instead of answering, Kalpi walks up to the window, staring out into the night. Forlone, she says, "we need to talk." His forehead creases as he wonders, "what now"... Says reassuringly, "of course. What would you like to discuss."


Turning to face him, kalpi replies, her eyes filled with sadness,"we are married and yet know nothing about you. My Aai... My baba..." She continues emotionally. Stops to collect herself. Unable to resist, Ragav walks up to her, takes her in his arms and says softly, "I am so sorry. This is all my fault. I shouldn't have..." Placing a platonic kiss on the top of her head, Ragav says, "let us talk... Get to know each other."


He looks down, his gaze meeting kalpi's, groans aloud, saying, "don't look at me like this." Confused, Kalpi asks softly, "how?" Leaning towards her, he whispers, "you need to wipe away this doey eyed look," he caresses her lip, whispering passionately, "else I will kiss you..." Mirroring his passion, she whispers, "what is stopping you..."


His gaze heated, staring into her eyes, a fire ignited by her words, he places his hands on her shoulders, pushing her slowly backwards... Following her step for step... Until her back rests on the glass window. He traces her arms lightly with his finger tips... Linking her fingers with his. He raises her hands above her head, resting them on the window. He lowers his head... Kissing her fleetingly, his lips tracing her skin as he rests his head lightly on the crook of her neck, groaning, "I can't. I won't be able to stop." His warm breath tickling her. Torturing himself, he nuzzles her neck, as he says, "we need to stop." Mentally cursing himself and at the same time admiring his will power as he takes a step away from her.


Kalpi stares at him, confused, asks, "is it because we are married?" "Huh," Ragav replies, lost. With dewy eyes, she continues, "you don't want me anymore." Wanting to reassure her that such was not the case, he hugs her tight, whispering naughtily into her ear, "you know that is not true", making her blush. Seeing the questions in her gaze, Ragav decides to tell her a different version of the truth, says, "I promised myself no sex until after your exams." Continues, "I don't want to distract you from your studies. This is your final year."


Kalpi looks at him speculatively as she digests his words. Ragav stares into naughty eyes, thinking, "shit I am gone." Kalpi smiles like the cat got the cream and says, "you mean to say that no matter the temptation... You won't..." Ragav gulps deeply, thinking, "yup I am dead," as he nods affirmatively. Suddenly feeling adventurous, Kalpi decides to play seductress, curious to see how far she could go.


Kissing her deeply, his body covering her as she lay on the sofa, Ragav has only one thought on his mind as his fingers unzip her jeans, "I need to stop... I need to stop." Kalpi arches her back, distracting him...


The doorbell rings, startling Ragav, he looks around, confused momentarily when he realises he is all alone. Mentally shaking himself, he thinks, "shit that was hot." Walking uncomfortably to the door, thinking, "cold shower..."


He stares, rubs his eyes, exclaims, "Kalpi!" Kalpi stares at him, furious, arms folded. Pakhi pushes past Kalpi and rushes into the apartment, saying cheerfully, "and Pakhi." Ragav steps back so that Pakhi would not bang into him in her zeal to enter his home. Seeing the annoyed look on Kalpi, he turns to Pakhi and says, "talk." Excitedly she narrates the break in at their home. Holding up her bandaged arm, she says, "I nearly caught the burglar", frowns and adds, "he got away... Damn sob had a knife!"


Concerned, Ragav asks, "why didn't you call?" His gaze travelling between the two. All the while pakhi is narrating the story, Kalpi stares at Pakhi furiously. Ragav gives Kalpi a searching look, turns to Pakhi, ask, "why is she angry?" As he nods towards Kalpi. Ignore her, she is angry coz mum told unto come here." Kalpi snaps, "Neetu maa did not tell us to come here. She told us to ask prem to come over."


Pakhi shrugs her shoulders, says, "same difference." Turns to Ragav, ignoring kalpi's accusatory gaze, asks, "lead the way... Am exhausted." "Uh sure," Ragav replies. Seeing Kalpi stare at them in stony silence, his fantasy still fresh in his mind, he asks, "would you prefer the guest room?" His mind automatically preying feverantly, "please say no... To please say no..." Relaxing slightly, the tension leaving her body, Kalpi nods, while Pakhi frowns.


Once he is reassured that Kalpi and Pakhi have settled down for the night, Ragav heads for his room, his heart light with the knowledge that Kalpi was just a door away, smiling as he mentally thanks the burglar.


Edited by angelpureness - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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As can be seen this loyal stalker is still following u. And OMG such a nice update 😛 I so missed u. Loved rags basking in the knowledge of being in love. Loved how he imagined kalpi and then Orem revealing the almighty no sex clause until after exams OMG 😆 phas gaya bechaara 😆 abh tho Bahut restraint use Karni padegi 😆 and then kalpi and Pakhi really showing up at his doorstep because of a burglar how hilarious is that 😆 and kalpi opts for guest room bechareke zakhmon pe namak shirk rahi ho 😆 please update soon I can't get enough of this 😳
Edited by sunyy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
And Fuzz is back with a bang. 😃 ⭐️🤗 ❤️ Welcome back dearie, loved the update so much and loved the fantasy in the update even more. 😆 😛 😃 I wonder how Raghav will resist Kalpi now. 😳 Raghav was so cute in this update. 😃 😊😃 ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome chappy dear... Waiting for nxt chappy.. Plz update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It is amazing
Loved Raghav dream ☺️
Thanks for PM

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Angel what an update! I was in splits ...this line cracked me up but so true! "when a guy agrees to the no coitus condition... You just know it is love." 😆😉 and Raghav chanting continuously no coitus no coitus. Epic! 🤣. He's a goner!
Reading through and seeing a bold Kalpi was shocking but at the same time intriguing and the way you described the moments leading up to the kiss, very sexy! 😳 But then the bubble burst. The bell rang! It was a dream!😲 😆
Kalpi now staying under the same roof, a door away, hmm wonder how Raghav will resist this sweet temptation.
Fab update! I think it's us readers that need a "cold shower" after that steamy update. Thank you 😃

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