my 1st Fanfic on Robbie and Kasturi - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey dear awesome part 👏 👏

OMG kasturi ko kya hogaya kahi sher(LION) to nahi legaya 😉 😆 😆

really good part keep it up 👏

am waiting next 😛

next part meh romantic scene hone chahiye 😆

manpreet 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow awsome part 😳 loved it
do continue soon syeda 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ROBBIE-KASTURI!!!
WHERE ARE YOU!!!
BOOOOOO!!!
kasturi jumps from behind and scares robbie...
she starts to laugh at robbie...poor robbie screamed so hard like a girl and was shaking with fear...
KASTURI-robbie now who is scared...
says kasturi still laughing at her little prank on robbie...
ROBBIE-kas..kasturi...you?
you were ok..
kasturi this is not done...you scared me...i thought something bad....
KASTURI-relax robbie..i'm fine....
nothing happened to me....i'm ok
ROBBIE-kasturi..if anything happens to you,i don't no what i'll do...i'll die without you...
robbie hugs kasturi and tells her never to leave him again...
KASTURI-sorry robbbie it was just a joke...i...
ROBBIE-jokes are meant to be funny...this wasn't
i dn't mind any srts of jokes but this...
no way....
robbie looked at kasturi and held her face...
kasturi wiped robbies tears from his face and told him she'll never leave him...
they both smiled at eachother
and then hugged....
(mitwa plays in the background)
kasturi opened her eyes...
she heard a noise...
KASTURI-robbie lets go from her.....
ROBBIE-kasturi...we will..looksits still raining...
kasturi still had a bad feeling about this place...the chill had run back on her spine that she forgot about for awhile....
kasturi felt a 3rd person was with them
she didn't know why but she did.....
ROBBIE-kasturi...kasturi
KASTURI-huh
ROBBIE-where are you lost..come on lets find a place to sleep
KASTURI_huh...yeh sure...
she clinged on to his arms just incase....
and they both walked towards a room...

hmmm
is kasturi's feeling true or is it just nothing??
going to have to read top find out...lol
hope you enjoyed it....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
@gang. nice part dear 👏 👏

but yaar humhe tumse shikayat hai tum bahut samll part likhti ho ..jesse hi intrest aata hai part khatam ho jata hai 😆 next time thorda sa long part likhna ok 😛

but really nice 👏 I hope jo maine upper likha u don't mind na 😉 😆

waiting 😛

dear what is ur name ?

manpreet 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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lookin farward 2 ur nxt part 😈
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ooooohhhhhhhhhh loovelyyyyyyyyy 😛 😛

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