Mere Nishaan [Bhula Dena Mujhe] FF [Note Pg 5]

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I really want to write an angst filled love story! It may appear illogical or unrealistic but that's cos it's a figment of my "wild imagination" ... It's purely fiction but a story I'm itching to pen!



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You may meet him ...
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She saw him ... lying there ... lifeless ... she kneeled closer, keeping her head onto his chest; warmth radiating!

She felt his hands stir and encircled her arms around his neck; she held on to him as tightly as possible... as though pleading him...
He opened his eyes to find her lost in a trance... savouring each moment of their togetherness... clutching very tightly onto his shirt... as though her life depended on him!
A single tear burned the corner of his eye as it hit him... he wouldn't be there any longer... guilt had over ridden his love for her and it just wouldn't leave him... he had fulfilled his promise...

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FEW YEARS BACK

He'd locked himself up in his room ... crying for what seemed like hours on end... staring into nothingness...! Whilst his fellow classmates were busy partying ... he had attempted something for which his conscience had cursed him...

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It didn't leave him for days... weeks ... months ... he had fallen so ill that he had to be taken to the hospital on a regular basis! Being an alcoholic addict didn't help either!

As soon as he felt any better; he gulped down a few pegs... he believed it would make him forget things... Alas, that was a misconception!

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He saw her everyday. As it was they studied at the same campus that too in the same class... seeing her everyday was sheer torture and it brought back memories of that one night he resented the most!

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How life had changed so much!


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Posted: 10 years ago
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INDEX

Pt 1 Pg 1

Edited by Badtameez_Dil_1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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woahhh
this looks interesting...update soon plz

and PM ke liye i love you

jaldi update karo plzzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: DivanIsh

woahhh

this looks interesting...update soon plz

and PM ke liye i love you

jaldi update karo plzzz



Thank you!

I love you too! 😳

Part 2 bhi likh diya hai.. update karne ki dher hai!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Badtameez_Dil_1



Thank you!

I love you too! 😳

Part 2 bhi likh diya hai.. update karne ki dher hai!


toh karo na phir jaldi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Bigra hua Raman..
Oh God please save Ishu..
This is interesting..
Nice update .
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anum_says

Bigra hua Raman..

Oh God please save Ishu..
This is interesting..
Nice update .
Continue soon



Anum... tera comment! Yaar Twitter yaa insta pe toh baat hoti nahi hai... chal yahan pe hi sahi! Relief ki baat: Ishu ko kuch nahi hoga! Insha Allah... jald update karoongi! Thank you!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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RES
unres
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finally i read the update

what do i say...you have made Raman a khatarnaak insaan 😆 and as a matter of fact i know only you can do it...you like variations after all and i love you for that

Ishra have a special place in our hearts and too see them in different different characters is just too much fun

Romi.. tera yeh Bhai... lagta toh hai bahut bade swaami type ka lekin hai bahut bade haraami type ka! 🤣🤣🤣🤣 main tera hero movie yaad aa gayi...i was imagining karan giving the same expressions 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

lekin Raman has some plans hope Ishita does not get stuck

too eager to read ahead so it is better you continue soon

i was missing in action on IF from past two days but now that i am back i need fast updates please
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey... Just come around this story... And it's just wow...so interesting...
Raman is so arrogant... God save ishu...
want to read more...

Plz do pm me...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start! I hope Raman is not that bad to do any harm to Ishu..

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