SwaSan OS - Tum Dena sath mera

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello peeps 😃
Myself Misha 😎
At first I was neutral but now I'm liking SwaSan alot

Wait I'm not a writer 😛
This is my first ever writing 🤣
So please bear this torture 😈
Keep Chappals , eggs , tomatoes apne khud k paas hi🤣

Please ignore typos as I haven't proof read it 😛


Sanskaar Dropped Swara to her home. Saadist writers didn't gave us there scene so I imagine what the must have talked 😛

In Car -
Sanskaar while driving .. He just looked at Swara to assure she is fine or not.
Swara had teary eyes she was carresing that card which had Swara Lakshya written over it.
She was crying remembering how Lakshya teared it. She felt as if not card broked into pieces but heart too. She knew Lakshya was in pain but she was going through same.

Sanskaar - Tum theek ho?

Swara looked at him and nodded assuring she is fine.

But Sanskaar noticed her tears.

Sanskaar - I know you are not fine. Swara I'm really sorry jo bhi hua vo... Tum janti ho na Lakshya ne jo bhi kaha vo usne gusse mein kaha bas. He loves you.

Swara - main Lakshya ko samjhti hoon Sanskaar. Bas vo ye she looks at two pieces of card and tears fell down from her eyes again.

Sanskaar was not able to see tears on her eyes.. He changed the topic.

Sanskaar - Swara tumne mujhe bade papa ko kuch bolne se kyun roka? You know I support you aur humesha Support karunga.

Swara - Sanskaar kyunki main nai chahati thi ki meri wajh se tumhari family tute. Meri family toh tut gayi Sanskaar lekin tum bahut lucky ho tumhari family tumse bahut Pyaar karti hai.
Aur jahaan tak rahi support karne k baat I know tum mera sath kabhi nai chodoge. I trust you.

They share eyelock..

BG - Jab koi baat bigad Jaye
Jab koi mushkil par jaye
Tum dena sath mera
Oh humnava
( ❤️ )

Sanskaar - Swara ek baat puchu?

Swara - haan pucho

Sanskaar - aaj tumhare aur Lucky k alag hone mein kahi na kahi main bhi responsible hoon phir bhi tum mujhpe itna trust kaise kar sakti ho?

Swara - kyunki main janti hoon ab tum pehle wale Sanskaar nai rahe.. Mujhe tumhari aankho mein sacchayi dikhayi deti hai. Aur waise bhi Dida kehti hai insaan ki asli pehchaan bure waqt mein hoti hai. Aaj maine sab kuch kho diya hai lekin phir bhi tum mere sath ho ..isse pata chalta hai ki tumhe meri fikr hai. I found a true friend in you Sanskaar.

They share eyelock again. Sanskaar was just looking at her .. He was like this girl is unique..

And they reached baadi..

As Swara was going towards baadi..
Sanskaar called her from back..

Sanskaar - Swara..

Swara turned..

Swara - Haan

Sanskaar - Main tumhara trust kabhi nai todunga.. Humesha tumhara sath dunga.

Swara smiled.. Mujhe pata hai Sanskaar..

They shared eyelock again.

Swara turned to leave.. Sanskaar again called out her name..

Swara turned towards him..
Sanskaar - Apna khayaal rakhna..

Swara - Tum bhi..

They smiled..

As she turned to leave.. He again called out Swara.

Swara turned towards him.. Kya hua?

Sanskaar - Kuch nai bas yunhi ..

Both looked at each other and smiled.
Edited by -AvRajholic- - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww.. Ths is really cute.. Lovd it 😳❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow it's simply superb yar...👏
Sanskaar calling Swara when ever she was about to leave was sooo cuteee...
Love SwaSan..❤️
Edited by Asha122 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -AvRajholic-

Hello peeps 😃

Myself Misha 😎
At first I was neutral but now I'm liking SwaSan alot

Wait I'm not a writer 😛
This is my first ever writing 🤣
So please bear this torture 😈
Keep Chappals , eggs , tomatoes apne khud k paas hi🤣

Please ignore typos as I haven't proof read it 😛


BSanskaar Dropped Swara to her home. Saadist writers didn't gave us there scene so I imagine what the must have talked 😛

In Car -
Sanskaar while driving .. He just looked at Swara to assure she is fine or not.
Swara had teary eyes she was carresing that card which had Swara Lakshya written over it.
She was crying remembering how Lakshya teared it. She felt as if not card broked into pieces but heart too. She knew Lakshya was in pain but she was going through same.

Sanskaar - Tum theek ho?

Swara looked at him and nodded assuring she is fine.

But Sanskaar noticed her tears.

Sanskaar - I know you are not fine. Swara I'm really sorry jo bhi hua vo... Tum janti ho na Lakshya ne jo bhi kaha vo usne gusse mein kaha bas. He loves you.

Swara - main Lakshya ko samjhti hoon Sanskaar. Bas vo ye she looks at two pieces of card and tears fell down from her eyes again.

Sanskaar was not able to see tears on her eyes.. He changed the topic.

Sanskaar - Swara tumne mujhe bade papa ko kuch bolne se kyun roka? You know I support you aur humesha Support karunga.

Swara - Sanskaar kyunki main nai chahati thi ki meri wajh se tumhari family tute. Meri family toh tut gayi Sanskaar lekin tum bahut lucky ho tumhari family tumse bahut Pyaar karti hai.
Aur jahaan tak rahi support karne k baat I know tum mera sath kabhi nai chodoge. I trust you.

They share eyelock..

BG - Jab koi baat bigad Jaye
Jab koi mushkil par jaye
Tum dena sath mera
Oh humnava
( ❤️ )

Sanskaar - Swara ek baat puchu?

Swara - haan pucho

Sanskaar - aaj tumhare aur Lucky k alag hone mein kahi na kahi main bhi responsible hoon phir bhi tum mujhpe itna trust kaise kar sakti ho?

Swara - kyunki main janti hoon ab tum pehle wale Sanskaar nai rahe.. Mujhe tumhari aankho mein sacchayi dikhayi deti hai. Aur waise bhi Dida kehti hai insaan ki asli pehchaan bure waqt mein hoti hai. Aaj maine sab kuch khi diya hai lekin phir bhi tum mere sath ho ..isse pata chalta hai ki tumhe meri fikr hai. I found a true friend in you Sanskaar.

They share eyelock again. Sanskaar was just looking at her .. He was like this girl is unique..

And they reached baadi..

As Swara was going towards baadi..
Sanskaar called her from back..

Sanskaar - Swara..

Swara turned..

Swara - Haan

Sanskaar - Main tumhara trust kabhi nai todunga.. Humesha tumhara sath dunga.

Swara smiled.. Mujhe pata hai Sanskaar..

They shared eyelock again.

Swara turned to leave.. Sanskaar again called out his name..

Swara turned towards him..
Sanskaar - Apna khayaal rakhna..

Swara - Tum bhi..

They smiled..

As she turned to leave.. He again called out Swara.

Swara turned towards him.. Kya hua?

Sanskaar - Kuch nai bas yunhi ..

Both looked at each other and smiled.

wow👏👏👏 you are a amazing writter
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Posted: 9 years ago
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One more swasanian
Beautiful os
They both r so cute
N three eyelock
Just loved it...do write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mishu 😡 You kkc 😡
Meri sinking ship pe nai aa sakti thi ? 😭

LOL just kidding 😛

Anyways Bahut mast likha tune 😃
I loved starting wala part.. my Shona k tears 😭
last wala was cute 😳 Aashiqui 2 😉 ummm? 🤣

PS: Jaa beta ja jee le apni zindagi SwaSan ship mein 😛
Meri ship best hai 😎
SwaLak forever ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
Awesome os 👏
sanskaar calling swara was sooo cute
This os is the best I've read on Swasan 👏
Please write more os like this 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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mishu awwwe wow super dear u r rocked with ur FF yar I loved it update next part asap dear sanskar hai hai 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey buddies Thankz alot for your lovely comments 😳 Will reply all tomorrow 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww...
So cute..
I really loved the last part where sanskar keeps calling swara...
Thank you so much for such a lovely os👍🏼
Loved it...

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