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Hi,i m back. i know that i had three ongoing ss but a story popped in my mind. if u people are interested let me know ,then i will post a prologue.
His eyes travelled to the corner of the garden. A girl of near about 17-18yrs sitting there hugging her legs upto her heart.He tried to shift his gaze from her but unknowingly his eyes were fixed on her.
"who is she."he asked.
"we don't know".the manager of the orphnage answered.
"how come she is here if u don't know anything."he enquired.
"she is mum.she has not spoken a word in last three months." the manager answered.
His steps automatically walked to her.he sits beside her extending his hands to her and spoke softly "hi i m Raman kr.bhalla and u r."
she didn't respond.
hey friends i have posted prologue above.read it and give your valueable comments.
part 1 page 3
His eyes travelled to the corner of the garden. A girl of near about 17-18yrs sitting there hugging her legs upto her heart.He tried to shift his gaze from her but unknowingly his eyes were fixed on her.
"who is she."he asked.
"we don't know".the manager of the orphnage answered.
"how come she is here if u don't know anything."he enquired.
"she is mum.she has not spoken a word in last three months." the manager answered.
His steps automatically walked to her.he sits beside her extending his hands to her and spoke softly "hi i m Raman kr.bhalla and u r."
she didn't respond.
hey friends i have posted prologue above.read it and give your valueable comments.
part 1 page 3
part 2 page 10
part 3 page 14
part 4 page 20
part 5 page 26
part 6 page 33
part 7 page 39
part 8 page 46
part 9 page 55
part 10 page 65
part 11 page 72
part 12 page 81
part 13 page 88
part 14 page 98
part 15 page 113
part 16 page 121
part 17 page 129
part 18 page 141
Udne Ki Aasha
Veer Hanuman
Anupamaa
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
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