New ss-Tera mera rishta part 18 on pg 141 added on Oct 10 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi,friends here is first part of my new ss.hope u people will like this.


Part-1

His phone was buzzing continuesly while he was in bathroom taking a long bath as today is a holiday on account of independence day.He compelted his bath, wore his bathrob in a jiffy and ran to his cell,but the ring ended and now it was silent.

Raman saw it was his mother's call,he called back.
R-hello ma how r u. anything imp. you called so early.
T-yes its very imp..U have to attent flag hosting function of sanjeevni.
R-(frustrated) kya ma aaj ke din bhi kaam.arey yaar aaj ke din to majdooro ko bhi chutti milti hai par mujhe nahi.(what ma.today also .even a lobour also gets a holiday today but not me).
T-puttar please u have to go "welfare minister "is invited for flag hosting.
R-ma atleast u should ask me once.i was making plans to enjoy my holiday but now my whole day is spoiled.you know i hate that.
T- i know it but what can i do.if i could be there i shouldn't ever troubled u. hurry up son the kids were waiting for their gifts.
R(shocked)-gifts what gifts.i hadn't got any .what i will give to them they will be dishearten so i m not going.
T-stop making excuses .i had odered everything and the troley of gifts will be reaching there shortly so u have to rush.
R-ma this is not fair u are a social worker but i have to do all these stupid tasks of yours.
T-puttar its a good thing .
R(making faces) ya whatever.

He disconected the call and threw the phone on the bed and started getting dressed for the day.

Raman kumar Bhalla owner of bhalla groups if hotels and constructions and Ceo of the year.He was a very shrued and dedicated to his business but if it comes to his personal life he was the most arrogent,rude and reckless person to the world but he loves his family very much.
Toshi bhalla his mother is a social worker and running a orphanage and rehab. center named "sanjeevni home."

she usualy takes care of all its need and activities but she has to go to out of india for some work so raman has to attend this function.
Raman got ready after a while and called mihir.Mihir was his manager but more than a friend and brother.
M-(in a sleepy tone) hello bhai good morning.
R-good morning baad mein kar pahle ready ho ja we have to go somewhere.(goodmorning later first u get ready)
M-but bhai today is independence day and we also have some rights to feel that we are independent.
R-mihir dimaag mat kharaab kar.waise hi ma ne phasa diya. please get ready soon.( don't irretate me ma has already spoiled my mood)
M-ok bhai i m coming after some time.

After sometime they went to the orphanage.The chief guest arrived and flag hosting was done.all the program was completed and the chief guest was gone .raman and mihir was also ready to leave but the manager reminded them of the gifts.Raman irretately started distributing the gifts. after some time his mood was changed as he begain to enjoy the happy faces of the kid who were thanking him wholeheartedly with their wide smiles.After distributing the gifts raman asks for a quick visit of the place.
The manager agreed happily.As they had seen the orphanage,they headed towards the rehab.center.They were visiting all the wards one by one.Raman was feeling very contented after this visit and was about to go but his eyes travelled to a girl sitting in the corner bench of the garden.she was sitting in the corner of bench folding her legs to her chest wounding both arms around it.she was amazingly beautiful. she had big almond shape brown eyes,very fair complection,long black hairs with pinky lips.
Raman asked to the manager about the girl but he denied that they don't know anything about her.
R-whats her name.
iMa-no we don't know.
Raman saw him quizingly. the manager answered "sir she is mum. she had not spoken a word for last three months."
His steps automatically move towards the girl.he went to her and extented his hand for a handsakeand spoke"hi i m raman
bhalla and u r".
The girl without looking at him curled herself like a ball.

thats all friends. i end my first part here .please read it and enjoy.please let me know how it is so that i can proceed it further.will wait for ur comment
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Posted: 10 years ago
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who is she, Ishita? Do cont soon... I think all ur stories are going beautifully in their own way. Keep up the good work.

With Regards-Kaarthikk.
Edited by kaa1202 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey ,another one from you.glad that u started a new one already!waiting for you to continue. Tnx for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaa1202

who is she, Ishita? Do cont soon... I think all ur stories are going beautifully in their own way. Keep up the good work.


With Regards-Kaarthikk.



thanks dear for liking all my stories but its a new one so i want to know about this story.is it interesting.please do tell me.thanks again.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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and what a beautiful start...
but it was small...i was like plzzz ishita ho ishita ho until finish...
but u just stop at end minute...,.
cheating...

i am so excited...
loved it really...
update soonish...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update 😊
loved it a lot
Is that girl ishu?
The way cuddles to herself like a ball is so cute😃
Please continue soon can't wait to read the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutieruhi



thanks dear for liking all my stories but its a new one so i want to know about this story.is it interesting.please do tell me.thanks again.


From prologue & 1st part it seems pretty interesting... I dunno how will u balance all ur stories @ the same time😃 Anyways congrats & do cont soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks dear. but chotu one .please edit it i will wait for u.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ISHRARULZ

Hey ,another one from you.glad that u started a new one already!waiting for you to continue. Tnx for the pm


thanks dear but i want a proper comment that u liked it or not.either i should continue or not.please let me know.waiting.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mayraa

Superb...

Continue soon...



thanks dear.such a chotu comment.

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