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HI GUYS
THIS IS MY FIRST EVER ATTEMPT AT WRITING SOMETHING.
ITS AN OS IN 3 TO 4 PARTS.
PLS TELL WHETHER I SHUD CONTINUE???


Prologue

"Kiss... where it hurts " He said turning his face slightly towards me as I was now standing behind him.

Slowly I took a step towards him and pecked his back.I would do anything to relieve him of any kind of pain.Whats in a kiss. Afterall he is the love of my life...MY MANIK...who meant beyond the world to me.

Dimly I was aware where we will land after this small gesture of mine.But probably this is what I wanted tonight.

He turned towards me.I could see passion flairing up in his eyes.
"Much Better " he said and before I could say anything I found myself rising off the floor in his strong arms. He started walking towards his bedroom.

I did not utter a word , niether did i resist. I surrendered myself to HIM.

PRECAP:
"Nandini" he whispered "Do you want me to stop?"
"I trust you Manik" was all I could say.


Index:
Prologue:Page 1
Part 1:Page 4
Part 2:Page 6
Part 3:page 9{final part}

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LINK OF OTHER WORKS


OS:-REWARD (ongoing)

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4436315



TANTRUMS OF PREGNANT NANDINI
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4434940




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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice prologue update soon 😳
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thanks just love it
plzzz update soon
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Thanks for responding guys😊
I will update soon...probably tomorrow😊😊

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continue dear gud one:-) :-)
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Thanks for responding guys😊
I will update soon...probably tomorrow😊😊

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Yes yes please do continue
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update asap na m waiting and haaa hot one😉 he he he
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Update soon...
Plz pm me when u update...

Keep writing... stay blessed...

LOVE,
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OK Guys so here I am ...even before you ppl expected

One thing before you start reading.Manik's POV in the story is what he is thinking and not what he is saying

Pls dont forget to leave your precious comments.They will motivate me

Thx in advance

Love

Rits

Part 1

He placed me on the bed .His eyes said it all.

Manik's POV

You are the one who changed the monster in me into a human.And now

That you are mine forever , I want to shower unconditional love on you.

He caressed the contour of my left cheek with his right hand but shyly I rolled on to my tummy facing the other side.

It added fuel to the fire that was burning in his eyes as I was wearing a backless top and now he had full access to my bare back.He entwined his right hand with my left.I could feel jitters in my body by his mere touch.I closed my eyes to experience the most blissful feeling as his mouth descended towards its destination.His kisses on my back were sending countless shivers down my spine.

I couldn't resist myself and turned towards him and looked into his eyes that were overflowing with love.He made me comfortable by placing my head on his arm.I kissed his cheek as a gesture of my surrender tonight.

He snuggled his face in the crook of my neck and placed a few wet kisses there.Sensitive to his touch I hugged him tighly.I wanted to be close to him, very close, indeed as close as one human can be to other.

Next he kissed my forehead.I always loved it the most when he kissed my forehead,It always gave me a sense of care and protection.Time n again he was looking into my eyes as if seeking permission to go ahead with this sweet torture of his!

I was loosing control on my mind and my body altogether.And then

"Nandini" he whispered in my ear " Do you want me to stop?"

"I trust you Manik" was all I could say.

This sentence of mine was sufficient for his already aggravated desires.We were in LOVE with each other...TRULY , MADLY AND DEEPLY. Today we would become ONE SOUL forever and ever.

Manik's POV

I love you Nandini.I love you very very much.I know you are delicate my darling and I'll make sure that I go slow.

He turned himself and came vertically over me.Just when he was about to kiss my lips I thought of teasing him.I pursed my lips tightly.He tried to kiss but I just didn't let him.He looked at me

"what" he asked lovingly

I just shook my head which meant nothing and pursed them even tighter

" then" he said a bit shocked

I again shook my head and smiled with my lips still tightly closed.

"Ohhh so you are teasing me" he said with a smirk

I nodded with a naughty look in my eyes


Edited by i-love-manan - 9 years ago

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