Manya /Rara SS Tumse pyaar hame hai kitna janejana Chapter 5, page 6 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
so...rachi is in love with rama in this 😊
interesting story...👏
continue asap😉
i love reading ff/os/ss 😃
Edited by --sonam-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
thkans a lot.. ill continue soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
omg...description of Rama at the ghaat got me in dreamy mode...😳😆

Nice update.👍🏼...Continue soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thnaks iam really glad you liked it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Nice update. .loved amaya's flash back with mantu...rachu is in love with rama interesting. .update soon yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey guys... im back wiht another chapter of this story.. hope you like it... and please leave your precious comments.. they really mena a lot to me

Chapter 3

the next day ... At night... Amaya got out of the office to go to her home... Where mantu doesnt work anymore... As he has started hus computer coaching classes... Amaya starts walking to take the auto ... . But as soon as she starts walking... A bike hits her... Amaya fell on the ground ... Her foot got badly injured ... It was bleeding heavily... And the biker also fell down... And got some wounds...)When she saw who was the biker...She got the shock of her life... it was mantu... And he ran towards her... In spite of the injuries he had ... His eyes filled with tears... What has he just done and to whom...

M. Amaya... !! Amaya!!!

A. Mantu... Tum yaha???

M. Amaya this is not the time for this... We need to take you to the hospital...

And he lifted her in his arms... And made her sit her on his bike... And then... When they were about to go ...

M. Amaya hold me tightly...i dont want you to fall...

A. Ok mantu...

And she wraps her arms around mantus waist... And they go to the hospital... When they reach... He picks her again in his arms... This time... a bit gently... And rushes into the hpspital...the doctor and nurses takes her to treat her in the strecher ... Mantu had amayas hand held tight... Amayas foot was bleeding heavily...

M. Amaya... Dont worry...evrything will be fine...

... And mantu stood outside The room...

Meanwhile...rachita went to the vegetables and fruit stall outside her house... And... When she touched the strawberries to pick them... A hand touched hers... A male hand... When she looked up to see who was he... She was astonished ...and happy... It was rama... And ... They got lost in each others eyes... Rachiras was admiring his dark brown eyes ... Those eyes... In which she could see ... Even now... An infinite love for her... Rama was admiring her innocent beauty... He wished... That this moment never ended... That somehow time stopped

But... rama broke the eyelock... Seeing that they were at a stall...

Rama. Uhhh... Sorry... Sorry rachita ji...

Rach. Rama???? You ??? Here???

Rama. Yes... Rachita ji... This is a stall... And ... Anybody can come here... I guess

Rach.. Ohhh... Ummm...

Rama. Uhhh... Kaisi hai aap Rachita ji... ? ( he said... With his head low... Not being able to look at her... )

Rach. Im fine rama... How r u ???

Rama.( and he said .. Looking at her) Uhhh... Im fine rachita ji...umm...

Rach. Haan bhaiya.. Kitne ka ...( she said to the man giving him the fruit and vegetables she had picked)

Bh. 250 rs.

Rach. Ok.. Yeh lijiye..

Rach. ( to rama... Who was still picking fruit) uhhh... Rama ... Why didnt you continue with the english classes???

Rama. Woh..actually... I dont have time...

rama pays... And they both start walking ... Soon ... Rachitas foot gets heart.. Due to the broken bottle which was there... It even went trough her sandal and stuck in her foot... She screamed...

Rach. Ouch!!!

Rama. Rachira ji... What happened???

Rach.. My foot... Its really hurting...

Rama. Oh... Rachita ji relax... Im here...

And rama... Seeing that rachita wasnt able to take a step further... He lifted her in his arms...

Rach. What?? Rama put me down... Please... Rama!!! What r u doing???!!!

Rama. Rachita ji please... Let me help u...

he takes her to a chai stall which was near there...and places her on the bench... Then.. He gently takes off her sandal... Holds her foot... And he touches the sole of her foot ... And Rachita closed her eyes... Because of his gentle touch... She forgot .. The psin ... She had him so clise to her . .. That was enough for her.

Precap. Ramas care for rachira...Rachita gets a shock... Ramas feelings ... Mantu takes care of amaya... Mantu goes to ramas house.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update...I would love to read more. .continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
thanku so much for the encouragement !
Edited by heartbroken1 - 10 years ago
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guys... did u liked my story?????? should i continue????? only two comments and likes??????
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Thanks for the lovely feedback.. Ill continue soon

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