Deeps i think in my eyes u r one of the most realistic writer on IF...not saying this cause u my bestie but reason is the ASLI DUNIYA...the way u always show problems at grass root level...u not trying to show a magic wond appearing and changing common girl to cinderlla...or deprived of basic necessity girl flying in clouds...many time people feels y khushi not educated or strong working girl,even payal not doing job etc etc...the reply is cause she is one of the real next door girl...a simple girl ...strong woman which we all dream for depends on person to person pov ...every one is having different reasons in real world the way ur khushi or payal having...but in my eyes i don't consider them lacking behind at all cause they breath morals ,that matters to me most..the way payal not once blaming khushi..the way khushi taking it on herself payal current state...and then the way both consoling each other ...i can't tell u how much FIT nature wise in my eyes these two r..
payal pain can be felt by those girls more here who r going through this parade every weekend around the world...i can say lucky r those girls who r into love or r chosen in some party or wedding functions...cause this humiliating system of ours where we r having best clothes hanging/folded at one side of almari for these parades ,when u dress up taking whole day of urs thinking how to look ur best behind having so many dreams for happy future...yet people come and reject u in 2 mins of their microscopic scrutiny using their eyes...ufff ...baby u wrote it to reality at its best :)
loved the way khushi is such a positive soul here no matter how bad her past was...her believe in men right there...she not blaming all of them here...:) thats beautiful...now in this all convo who was listening to khushi excitement outside the room...shashi or garima..red alert :)...have to wait for it
Three cheers for arjun and anjali love story here...wow and wow...the way u have written it ...i fell in love with this couple too...and with u need to pat arnav back also...he indeed friend in need ...lol...seeing both idiots not taking first step ...the way he helped them out...hehe...its beautiful :)
and hayeee simply loved anjali and arjun confession...they were afraid of reaction of other and as friendship the precious bond ...so both were hesitant thinking "about wt if not ":)..lovely decent romance between them..u wrote it brilliant :)
deeps mein soch rahi hoon arnav keh baray mien...kiya cheez hay arnav...the way u have shown his character...oneside he is bold bindas and all fun with friends... other side keeping himself compose ...keeping khushi betterment in front...her pain at first...how he is balancing around the lives of people who r dear and loved one for him...dil ker raha hay to give him tight hug...when he is going to have that peace full content sleep ...i am waiting for that day :)...his pain and suffering is unbelievable at heart level ...
Today in my eyes khushi decision of divorce ,the way she fought against wrong for the rights of her babies...and she is content on her desicion...can any one say here...that she lacking behind or weak in any sense...she is indeed a strong woman :)..the way she told arnav about no regrets...like arnav i am also proud of her
now khushi is up with her tayi rishta...deekha jaye tou very valid rishta for her friend...lol...but poor arnav...that shut up echoed loads here...is he losing his patience or really he is only trying to shut her up...ufff thats a cliff hanger deeps...and then above all ur note...how to wait that long to get the answers ...sniff sniff sniff...😭...😊no worries will wait jab tak hay jaan ...hehehe
PS: kindly pls answer the million dollar question...really they DID IT? or she was tired from long hospital hours sleeping like the way our dearest nishu do...lol...lol...haha...kiya keron control nahi ho raha need to know...lol...:)...can we get a lil bit peak a boo inside arjun's apartment...
Edited by lalarukh - 8 years ago
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