MG Marriage A cry of agony update EPL 1 ,2 on page 74 ,76-9august

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First thread
Marriage " A cry of agony"





part 12- 1

part 13 4

part 14 6

part 15 13

part 16 16

part17 zahalk on 20
full part on blog

part 18 zhalk on
full part on blog


part19 31

part 20 34


part 21 39


part 22 41


part 23 ,24 44

part 25 47

part 26 on blog



teaser please saw vm made by me 56

part 27 66


part 28 on blog

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epl 1 on part 74

Edited by Mahimaan - 9 years ago
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part 12

Pinky went to her house with geet , geet in sleep so it's quite easy for her , she settle geet in her room itself ..

Other side adi and maan in deep thoughts ...both lost in thought maan ki baate disturbing adi ,he don't want to maan lost his hope no never ,than its impossible to make maan free from this illness ,maan have to become strong yes

Adi - don't insulated my sister love means (geet love )(di correct kar diya ) for u Mr , maan ,adi say with anger ,and maan pass sad smile to him

Adi - aise na karo maan ye hamari fight hai hum mile ke ladege ok ye sab jane do ye bato ye angel means meri sis tume kaha mili yaar she is so beautiful n bholi ...u r so duffer u know ..adi wink to maan n maan smile with geet thought a true smile which reaching to his eyes

Adi become happy with maan smile n ask abhi bol bhi do yaar ,itna curious to main apni love story main nahi hu he mummer softly but maan sharp ear heard that a soft smile apeer on his lips

Two year before I went in xyz collage as guest for annual function ,where I first time met with your sis bhai ...culbuly ,shy same time bold full of life and beautiful ,first time

I reach their in last min before start geet dance program ,maan give dreamy look

Past ...

Maan get late for function its already started with help of volunteers he took sit and settal there , all surrounding trun black n light flash on stage only ,where a couple liteel away from each other standing in very stunning posture don't know when maaa eyes start to cheke that girls feature thou her back to his side ...

And music get start and both turn their face to maan side but he can not saw her face fully because there is mask on her eyes so ...but she is beautiful ,maan say in mmind

Teri meri.. raaton ne kiye hain kuch iraade
Milli hai jo ab ye mulaqaatein
Koi jaadu hone ko hai (hone ko hai..)
Teri meri.. hui aankhon-aankhon mein jo baatein
Mili hai jo ab ye mulaqaatein
Koi jaadu hone ko hai

She looking awesome in western dress and her movement of dance so sharp ...all around them clapping and charring for her maan eyes glued on her ...he so much want to look in her eyes ,that mask irritating maan



Hona hai.. jo hona hai rahega hoke hi
Hota hai.. jo mill jata hai koyi
Hoga yeh.. hai jaana maine milke tumse hi
Are you feeling it tonight
I am feeling it tonight
Bang Bang, raat bhar baat kar
Tu mere saath chal
Dil pe chala hai jaadu, jaane kyun..



Bang bang raat bhar baat kar
Tu mere saath chal
Dil pe chala hai jaadu, jaane kyun

Maan so much want to run on satage and dance with her ,in every beat ,its pure torucher for him to look other boy with her dancing so closely his hand on her body ...



Bang Bang, Bang Bang, Bang Bang
Jaane kyun...
Bang Bang, Bang Bang, Bang Bang
Jaane kyun... Bang Bang!

When maan all lost in J geet turn to his side and remove her mask from eyes ,and maan world stop for while so beautiful eyes with so much innocence she ...have mischiefs smile on face ,and spark in eyes



Hey! aajkal aate jaate
Hey! aankhe karti hai baatein
Hey! aaj toh aa jaana hai
Hey! aankhon ki baaton mein
Bas ek baat kar le
Hey! mujhe baahon mein tu bhar le
Hey! aur saari raat bhar yeh
Hey! chalti rahe phir kahani teri meri

So much talking eyes like small angel maan all lost in that beautiful eyes ,he forget for while all surrounding ,he feel like he and she only there not any one eles ,and she is his yes only his soulmate

Same time some one come near him and took him on stage and forgating all Msk attitude and all ,he start to dance with her ..on beat maaneet dancing with so much ease like they practice for it from so many days ,maan open his overcoat and start to dance on shirt ..



Teri meri.. teri meri aahon ke ishaare
Aa zara samajh le hum woh saare
Ke hosh ab toh khone ko hain (khone ko hain)



Teri meri.. teri meri
Raaton ne kiye hain kuch iraade
Mili hain jo ab yeh mulaqaatein
Koi jaadu hone ko hai (hone ko hai)

Hona hai.. jo hona hai rahega hoke hi
Hota hai.. jo mill jata hai koyi
Hoga yeh.. hai jaana maine milke tumse hi
Are you feeling it tonight
I am feeling it tonight

Bang bang.. raat bhar baat kar
Tu mere saath chal
Dil pe chala hai jaadu, jaane kyun?

Bang Bang.. raat bhar baat kar
Tu mere saath chal
Dil pe chala hai jaadu, jaane kyun

The word describing maan haal ,he so much want to say all this to geet ,he so much surpriced with his own behavior ,he never so social like this but don't know what this girl done with him


Bang bang, Bang bang, Bang bang
Jaane kyun..
Bang bang, Bang bang, Bang bang
Jaane kyun..

Raat bhar baat kar..
Jaane kyun.. bang Bang
Raat bhar baat kar
Dil pe chala hai jaadu, jaane kyun..

Other side its big sweet shock to geet its like dream come true she is dancing with MSK ...her so big crush come love come ,craziness what not ,



Bang bang, Bang bang, Bang bang
Jaane kyun
Bang bang, Bang bang, Bang bang
Jaane kyun...

Bang bang take a little chance chance
Take a little dance dance
Now get your body movin' (x2)

Bang bang, raat bhar baat kar
Tu mere saath chal
Dil pe chala hai jaadu, jaane kyun (x4)

BANG BANG!



Edited by Mahimaan - 9 years ago
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Congrats for the new thread mommy.
Pinky took Geet to her house so that Geet can be cured properly.
Maan is loosing his all hopes dat he can be normal.
Adi says maan dat u can't loose hope.
To divert maan mind he asked wen maan meet Geet.
Maan remembered Geet dance performance.
He was so much into Geet performance dat he himself joined her.
Edited by kamnagupta7 - 10 years ago
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Congrats for new thread...
Nice update...
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Congrats on New Thread

Awesome Just Fabulous Update

Maan telling Adi how he met Geet the first time at the college function and that day itself he was blown away with her innocence and beauty

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ye wala update last thread me bhi tha...

aur mera nokab aaega 😒
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congrats on the new thread! Thanks 4 da superb update! well written! Pinky takes Geet with her! Maan remembers the past! Lovely song! Maan admires Geet! update soon

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what is this I don't get ji

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