asya os: caring mr. akdu

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Posted: 10 years ago
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so i am back with a new os...

asad was at his office and zoya was not at home...

najma- ammi when will zoya return ?

dilshad- she will be coming

najma- ammi its already 7:30 and it raining...and bhaijaan will be home any moment

dilshad- i hope he gets back before asad!

asad- talking about me?!

dilshad- offo...zoya is gone!

asad- salaam aleikum ammi!

dilshad- haan...waleikum asalaam aao betho...mei coffee bana deti hun

asad luked here and there as if searching for someone

najma- are you searching for something?

asad- ummm...ms farooqui?!

najma- voh...voh bahar gayi thi or abhi tak nahi aayi

asad stood up from his seat

asad- what its almost 8:00 and she is still not back...ammi i tell you this girl will spoil najma too!

dilshad- asad...traffic mei hogi ...a jayegi

asad- i just came from office n the roads are clear no traffic at all

dilshad- najma call her?!

najma- ammi already tried but its switched off..

asad was getting worried now...

asad- i'll go and check!

dilshad- asad its raining lets wait some more time...pata nahi meri bachi kab aayegi

ting tong...

najma went to open the door and sw zoya standing there completly drenched in water

dilshad- where were u zoya...!!! or yeh kya haal bana rakha hai apna

asad- u know how worried i...we were...!!! why are u late...and phone kyun switched off hai!!

zoya- mr...khan woh...woh mera phone kharab ho gya...or baha r koi taxi bhi nhi thi toh chalke aayi hun isliye late ho gyi (aacchhoo)

dilshad- tum kamre mei jao nhi toh sardi ho jayegi...

zoya walked towards her room and lost her balance but asad held her

...

zoya- aacchhoo,,, umm thanx

asad- change your clothes u will fall ill

at night dinner table

everyone was having their dinner but zoya was not she sat there and kept on staring at her empty plate...

asad- why are u not eating

zoya- not feeling to..!!

dilshad- than shall i order ur favourite pizza?!

zoya- no phupi i am tired...i'll sleep

after some time

asad's room...

asad- what happened to ms farooqui...why wasnt she eating...and also refused to pizza...i think i need to force her to eat

asad sneaked in zoya's room with a plate of pizza in his hand...and saw zoya sleeping he did not wanted to wake her up...but she had to eat

asad- ms farooqui...ms farooqui...zoya!!

he touched her hand to wake her up...

asad- inhe toh bohot tez bukhaar hai...zoya get up please...zoya


zoya opened her eyes


zoya- mr khan??


asad- get up and eat!


zoya- i am not hungry but sleepy let me sleep!


asad- after eating sleep okay...!


zoya pouted- okay!


asad fed zoya and gave her medicine


next day...


dilshad- asad u r still home aaj meeting thi na?!

asad- yes woh ...um ms farooqui ki tabiyat kharab hai ...and i know ki woh aapki baat nhi maanengi...toh i'll take care of her...


dilshad- meri bachi what happened to her?!


asad- fever...


dilshad- waise i am happy u'll take care of her daat ke sahi


after some tym...


asad entered zoya's room with fruits


asad- zoya get up u need to have medicine...zoya!!


zoya- what why are u shouting..


asad placed his handf on her forehead and check if there is fever

asad- pehle se kam hai...!! but still go and fresh up


after a minute zoya came back to her room


asad- have this!


asad said giving a plate of fruits to zoya


zoya- FRUITS!!


asad- yes its good for you


zoya- i dont want!!


asad picked up a piece of apple anf forcefully stuffed in zoya's mouth..


zoya- ummm...what mr khan u cant do this


asad- eat this whole or i'll call ur api


zoya- NOO!! she will scold me i will eat


asad smiled at zoya's childish behaviour


asad went to his room to finish some work


when he saw zoya standing in the hall about to faint asad rushed to her and held her


zoya- uhh...i am fine mr khan


asad- WHAT FINE?! LOOK AT YOU...YOU ARE SO WEAK!! WHY DONT YOU REST IN YOUR ROOM!!! IF SOMETHING HAPPENS TO YOU I WOULD BE KILL MYSELF!!!!!


zoya stood there with tears


zoya started crying loudly


zoya- phuppii!!! phuppii!!!


dilshad came and zoya hugged her


dilshad- what happened zoya?! asad said something


zoya- he scolded me!!!


asad- she should be resting in her room and she is walking here and there


dilshad- najma take zoya to her room...asad she is not well!! now go and say sorry


zoya's room...


asad- i...i am...sorry


zoya- mujhe aapki sorry nhi chahiye...kisi or ko dedijiye


asad- i know i did wrong and i am sorry for that


zoya- i dont need it!!


she stood up and was going to leave when asad grabbed her from her waist


zoya- mr...khan!


asad- i am sorry


zoya- i...i dont...its okay...leave me


asad made her turn around and hugged her...


zoya- what happened mr khan?!


asad- i am sorry zoya...i shouted on you because i lo...i...i...care for u i forgot that u were not well...please forgive me


asya parted from eachother


zoya- its okay mr khan...can i know why u care for me...( smirking)


asad- i dont know


zoya- really?!


asad- ji...ab aap please araam kijiye


zoya- tell me na mr khan


asad- mujhe kuch nahi kehna


zoya pouted and after a minute a wide smile came on her face


zoya pretended to feel dizzy


asad held her


asad- zoya!! are u ok...sit down


zoya- mr khan...i dont feel good!!! i know you are hiding something


asad- lie down zoya...i am not hiding anything


zoya- i know u are


asad- no!!


zoya- aah my head...its paining because u r not telling me...aaahh aaahhh


asad- okay...i love you...fine!


zoya sat up..


zoya- mr khan?! u were hiding this!!!


asad- yes...i dint wanted to tell because if u didnt


zoya- shut up mr khan ofcourse i love you...


they both hugged each other


asad- good night


zoya- good night mr akdu..!!!


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Posted: 10 years ago
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aww Caring asad omg u know what maine bhi zoya wali trick use ki thi when my brother wasn't telling me about his girlfriend lol i m so like zoya cute os
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww this is too cute
Akdu is worried
He takes care of her
Aww he confess too
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome loved it
thanx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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omg!!!
that was hilarious at last🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nicely penned
and cute too😳

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